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Posted: 19 years ago
ana dear yeh kya part tha me bohat bohat bohat hi zyada udass...me feel like crying....😭
me getting very damn angry on kripa.. how can she be so damn selfish..woh kaise angad se itni badi qurbani dene ko expect kar sakthi hain hain...angad ki bhi ek zindagi hain..uske armaan hain... aur kripa kuch bhi samaj hi nahi rahi hain.. i seriously think kripa has lost her mind...😡
ab dilip is also doing the samething.. arrgh..so irritating.... 🤢
but me very happy the rishab is not accepting & i wish he never accepts... 😉 ana dear please yaar archie ki shaddi kissi aur se karwa de na... 😃 aur angad kripa ko saath lekar aao..unhe kareeb lao... us kripa ke dil mein ehsaas jagao ki woh angad se pyaar karthi hain.. please ana dear.. 😉
ab next part jaldi se post karna.. main intezaar kar rahi hoon... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK



thanx yaar
😆
ur comments r really nice
and i promise to not be ekta

lolz
ana

thanx.

the comment r nice just like u😊😊😊

and now cont sooooooooon bcoz i can't wait any more.plzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 18 years ago
ana dear please post the next part soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
ana where r u????????????plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
so everybody noes that angad luvs kripa except kripa herself lol n plz don't let this marriage happen
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey yaar
due to tight schedule i m unable to post
but i m writing the next part
and hopefully today night.........i will post that
k

luv u all
lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey yaar
due to tight schedule i m unable to post
but i m writing the next part
and hopefully today night.........i will post that
k

luv u all
lolz
ana

YAY!!! cant w8 2 read it yaar!!

xxMWAHxx

xx Saz xx

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Posted: 18 years ago
CHAPTER 13

Samar was an employe in the computer section of rishab's office………………….he had devoted his like towards his work………………rishab really likes waqas' attitude…………..

One day when he came home to see rishab………………….rishab feels that he his the best 4 archie………………..he was a middle-class guy……and according to rishab………he was very hardworking…………and self-dependent……………his father and mother had died and he lived alone in a flat……………..

Rishab thought well and told him about archie's past and offer him a marriage proposal…………with full confidence samar said yes………………and due to this all take a breadth of relief………………they all decided to do this marriage with simplicity…prerna has already informed archie………..and kripa was feeling really bad 4 her……………

ARCHIE, who has never do a thing without her wish, was quiet on listening that samar is gonna be his husband…………….

"tum chup kyoun ho archie…………………plz cheekhoo………chilaooo……..tumhari yeh khamoshi mujhay dara rahi hai"……………..kripa tried a lot to make her say nething

"abh saray darr khatam ho gaye kripa………….jiss waqt darna chahiye tha………..tab darr nahin laga…………….abh tau sab kuch kho dia hai……………meray janay k baad mama, papa say kehna k mujhay maaf kardain…………….najanay kyoun main tumhari tarhan "acchi beti" na ban sakti…………..tum bohut acchi hoo……..mama papa nay tumhain jiss kam say roka tum ruk gain…………..or main………………..main wohi kaam karti rahi………jiss say unhoon nay mana kia…………….bohut tang kia hai maine unhain………………jiss ki saza main aj bhugat rahi hoon……………papa………….papa khamosh hain……………..who khamosh nahin……….unhain shock laga hai…………k unh ki beti nay kiss tarhan unh ki izzat ko barbad kar dia………….mama mujh say baat nahin kartin………………who mujh say naraz nahin hain…………..kyoun k maan baap kabhi apnay bachay say naraz nahin hotay…………unh ki khamoshi iss liye hai k unh ki beti ki harkat say unh ko shock laga hai…………..main unh say maafi nahin maangoon gii…….suicide bhi nahin karoon gi………….kyoun k main khud ko pal pal martay dekhna chahti hoon……..main ARCHIE KHANNA……………..jo k apni pasand k bina kissi cheez ki taraf dekhna bhi nahin janti thi……………abh unhi k beech rahoon gii…………….yehi meri ego ki saza hai"

after many days, she talked to neone……………….kripa was looking at her with surprised……on that time………….kripa was thinking to kill JIMMY……………coz only due to him……….archie came to this………..

in the presence of few people………………..the rituals were done………….and ARCHIE married to SAMAR……………..SAMAR came there with few friends…………dilip, naina and angad were handling all the things……………..kripa was only looking around with a sad face………..no one was happy with that marriage……………..that was only a deal due to helplessness……….

Archie was quiet like she is unable to hear or say nething……………..her eyes were dry………her lips were dry and her body was like strenghtless………….those some months had snatched all her beauty…………..

She was gone(I mean……………rukhsat hoo gayee yaar)……………….kripa hugged her mom and cry a lot……………….as k ARCHIE is not to the house of her in-laws but went on the way of the death…………..

She came to the house of SAMAR……………..that was only a two room apartment……….only a few things of need were present there…………….not only that…………….day by day SAMAR was snatches the earth from under her feet…………………SAMAR was the name of a double-faced person……………….he was a good looking and a nice hearted man in front of the world…………..but in the house…………….he was a wild animal……..he was drowned in the world of money and women……………..this marriage was only a way 4 him to the money…………….he was one of the men who wanna be rich in a night……………..rishab has promised him a great money…………….but after ARCHIE's delivery……………this act was seem to be good as if rishab has not done that………………..SAMAR will take that money and can divorced ARCHIE the next day of there marriage……………

He hit her very badly……………….say bad words 4 her……………….always used to remind her of jimmy……………..but archie……………….she was quietly listen to him…………….bared his slaps………..

Ever week…………………..archie had to went to his parents house to give a report of "sab accha hai"………….he used to threatened her………………..if he not……….she herself didn't told rishab n prerna nething…………….

Although she didn't say nething……………….but kripa……………..who live quiet far 4om her sis……………..the one accident………………take her to the archie's soul……………she can understand her condition

Prerna n rishab knows about archie's life…………………..but life n the situation demands to keep quiet………………….both decided that after archie's delievery……………..they will free her 4om the SAMAR named wild animal………..

The phone rings…………….by taking a sip of tea………………….prerna stops kripa to pick it up

Prerna receives the call

"yes……………..yeh rishab khanna ka ghar hai………….app kaun?"……prerna was asking the person the da other line

rishab's n kripa's eyes were fixed on her

"app SAMAR k neighbour bol rahay hain?……kia howa archie ko?"………….something was said by the person that prerna get faint

"mama!"………………..kripa pushes her chair n run to prerna……….rishab to went towards her

"mama!"………..kripa was shaking her………….she called her rapidly…………rishab hold the swinging recievor……………..MR.SHAH was on the other side…………SAMAR's neighbour…………to whom rishab has given his no……………so if there is ne emergency……….he would call him……….

The news due to which prerna got faint………………..rishab also get stunned on that

"papa……..mama hosh main nahin aa rahin?"…………kripa said that with teary eyes but when he saw rishab she also get stunned……………….rishab was seem to be on the last level on controlling

"papa……….kiss ka phone tha?………….archie theek tau hai na?"………..her heart start beating in an unusual way………………

"main tumhari mama ko hosh main lata hoon……………….tum ja k dilip ko kaho k humain archie ki akhiri rasumat poori karnay jana hai"……………rishab tears were clearly visible

"akhiri rusumat……….."…………..she mumbled……………..but after that…………the earth n the walls were seem to be shaking as she shouted

"papa"…………….it was seem to be an illusion

"haan beta…………….archie humain chor k chali gai"…………….n the next moment………..she hugged him……………rishab's can't handle it nemore…………..when the servant see that situation………….he instantly run towards dilip house n call him

dilip, naina n angad came running……………………every one was shocked……….prerna n kripa came into senses after great effort…………they all went to SAMAR house…….

Like every time…………………SAMAR hits n slaps archie………….every time……she keep silent………but last day…………..she got some inner injuries……………she was asking samar to take her to hospital but that man…………….didn't leave her either in this moment………..he went to sleep after satisfying his lust…………………..

Raat bhar who tarapti rahi……………..subah tak uska jism neela par chukka tha……………samar saw her n get stunned…………….now if he take her to hospital…………it will might be a case fire against him……….he ran from the house…………archie didn't have ne courage to call 4 help 4om her neighbourhood…………….poison scattered in her body………….n she died

MR.SHAH's wife went to meet archie sometimes…………n today in the morning………….as she saw her dead……………she called instantly

So guys
Now archie is dead……………….abh agay kia hoga iss ki prediction karoo
Me will find k kiss ki prediction kaam karti hai

Lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!! 😭 😭 im glad angad n archie dint get marid.. lekin OMG dat woz such a sad part yaar! 😭 😭 😭 it woz briliant plz continu soon, but can u make evryfin hapy now cos im alredy upset dat kyph's0 finishd so plz plz plz bring a-k 2geva soon n make d story hapy agen pleeeeeeeeez yaar!! 😃
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
i don't noe wat will happen? n maybe kripa will start hatin boys i guess but awesome part
continue soon

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