*~CaPabLe oF LovE~(AK)my new ff link pg55 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great ana hehehehe....continue soon..is bar sk keh bajaye ak ..cool hehehe...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

great ana hehehehe....continue soon..is bar sk keh bajaye ak ..cool hehehe...



farah jii
SK 1 or SK 2nd pay hain
likin main apnay 3rd fav couple ko kaisay bhoolti
so iss bar 4 a change AK
no thanx jii

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

it was a cloudy morning...........we see a beautiful house having a big lawn in front of it........on the main gate we see a board on which "KHANNA HOUSE" is written...........as we move further and enter into the door we see that there was so much peace.........then we hear some one doing arrti.........we went to the MANDIR which was infront of entrence.........we see a wemen wearing a green colour sari doing aarti.......

when she turn arround we see its PRERNA KHANNA........

"aj bhi koi nahin aaya" she said with much disappointingly................she take blessings and was about to move when some one say

"KISS nay kaha k koi nahin aaya......"Prerna look there from where the voice came and then we see a girl in a blue shalwar kameez having silver and some pinkish work on that.............its none other than KRIPA

Prerna looks at her and smiles

"aik tu hi tau hai k jo meray saath hai..........warna archie tau" Prerna first smiles but on the name of archie she again get sad

"mama.........abh kia app mujhay arti nahin deen gain.......warna main nashta kaisay karoon gi.......agar main nashta nahin karoon gi.........tau college kaisay jaoon gii.........or agar main......"

"bus bus bus..........yeh agar magar choro........or yeh loo arti".........Prerna cuts her and give her arti

then they move towards the dinning

"aj maine especially tumharay liye gobbhi k parathay banaye hain" Prerna said it with a smile
she went into the kitchen and then came out with a plate having paratha

as kripa was about to take a bite someone took her plate

"aha........wow aunty..........thats gr88"he took a bite.........kripa looks at her angrily and then we see his eyes who was having a WHAT-SAY look........kripa grin at him and then we see his face...........its none other the ANGAD SINGHANIA

"beta.............beth k khaoo.........aram say........itni jaldi kia hai"

"aunty........main tau intezar kar raha tha.......likin mujhay dar hai k mujhay khata dekh k koi mujhay nazar na laga day".....he said this while looking at kripa

"haan haan.........abh aap iss ki arti bhi utar lain........kahin nazar na lag jaye"kripa said it with an angry tone

"aray kuch nahin hota.........tum naraz kyoun hoti hoo.......main tumhain aik or laa deti hoon"prerna move towards the kitchen

"aunty.......main tu app k parathoon ki khushboo soongh k foran dinning say uth gaya.........or mama ko kaha k app rakahin apnay jam bread apnay pass.......main aunty k ghar ja raha hoon........likin mujhay kia patah tha......k yahan meray dushman bhi hoon gain"prerna ko pehlay tau unchi awaz main bata raha tha.......likin baad main kripa ko taunt pay taunt mari ja raha tha jo k ghussay say laal ho gai thi

"yeh loo" prerna kripa ko paratha detay howay

"mom......iss kaalay kaway ko kahin k yahan say chala jaye warna main kuch kar daloon gii"........kripa says with full of anger

"aisa nahin kehtay beta"prerna stops her and angad look at her with a winning face

theen as they ate there parathas angad move towards the basin to wash him hands..........

"hey krips..........can u plz turn on the tap for me"

kripa move towards her angrily and turn the tap on

"can't u do this by urself?.......do u like to take ur work from other peoples?"

"no.........i don't like to........but from other peoples not from my own people"..........he said this with a smile and dry his hands from towel and through the towel on her face while she was looking at him with a confused look

"ok aunty.........me going to office.......take care" angad said that and move towards the main door

"can u plz drop me to university..........plz"kripa said that with a pleading loomk which angad always likes

"yaah sure"

she went to take her bag and he move towards the car

kripa came towards the car running...........and was about to sit when NAINA who was standing in her teracce see her and said

"kripa beta.........maine aj tumharay liye filled kareelay banwaye hain..........lunch hamaray saath hi karna"

"what...........i will definately aunty."kripa ooked upward and then sit in the car

"mom.........kia main bhi lunch pay aa jaoon".....angad looked upward to her

"haan haan..........abh tau tum aaoo gay hii".....she said with a meaningfull smile......

he also smiles and then sit in the car

in the mean time kripa was searching 4 a good cd to play

"aunty ka kia matlab tha kehnay ka"........she said with a confused look

"tumhain samjh nahin aye"......angad smirked at her

"nahin"......kripa still searching 4 a cd

"tau phir theek hi hai"........he looked at her and then put his coat in her lap...

kripa put a cd and the song start

"kehna tau hai...........kaisay kahoon
kehnay say
darta hoon main

tum say pyar
karta hoon main
tum say pyar
karta hoon main"

angad feels that this song is showing his emotions and he started the car with asmile while kripa was still confused

guys its my 1st part
plz comment wether u like or not

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 ...nice prt...seem like sumone is in love 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! he is sooo in luv!!!! but is kripa?? i wonder.. well who wouldnt be.. i mean he is angad!!lol...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ana dear ek baat boloon this is the first time me reading a AK fanfic...& that too just because of you my dear...... 😃 jab me came to know u have started a new fanfic me couldn't stop myself.... 😊 😛 😃 ab rahii baat teri story ki tho the intro & the first part was coolllll yaar...oh..... i totally loved it...ur simply a rockstar...........such mein the part totally rocked...... 👍🏼 ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting for the next part.... 😃
love u.. 🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhumishah

nice story continue soon



thanx 4 liking

lol
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx alotn yaar
i will cont tomorrow or day by tomorrow

lol
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hawoo

👏 👏 👏 ...nice prt...seem like sumone is in love 😳



thanx hawaoo
can i know ur name plz

ya someone is madly in love yaar

lol
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

awesome part!! he is sooo in luv!!!! but is kripa?? i wonder.. well who wouldnt be.. i mean he is angad!!lol...



u will come to know it later
thanx alot 4 liking yaara

ur name plz

lol
ana

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