*~CaPabLe oF LovE~(AK)my new ff link pg55 - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey,
great part!! I guess Archie ne sab ki bolti band kardi.... Har koi dara dara rehta hai!! don't u think??? Make her talk first!! Like Surprize everyone with archie totally changing her attitude and stuff! 😉 Everybody will be happy i guess and Plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!! Good Luck and Bye!!
Divjot 😊

hey dear

ya archie nay kaam hi itna mahan kia hai.........ya.....

ya dekhtay hain k kia hota hai

lol

ana

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fizzypop

wow great part
i really liked it
continue soon 😊

hey yaara

thanx alot

lol

ana

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

thanx chotii

u will see lot of ak scenes in next parts

lol

ana

ooooooooooooo YAY!!!! mor a-k scenes!! luv u!! plz rite dem fast 😆 n u can call me Saz yaar!! xXxMWAHxXx

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Posted: 19 years ago
CHAPTER 11

kripa's unusual behavior were in front of prerna nad rishab............both wanna her to behave normally

rishab let angad and kripa go out..........while prerna seems to be a bit worry

as she don't want her other gaughter to be like the 1st one

right then...............angad takes prern's hand in his and said

"aunty.............do u trust me?" prerna nodded in yes

"bus..........tau phir sarri fazool baatain sochna choorain............app ki beti ko amanat samjh k lay ja raha hoon.............or main yaqeen dilata hoon k sahi salamat app k pass choor k jaoon ga"..........

prerna can see truth on his face..........that she hug him unconditionally (a son hug)

kripa nad angad walk on the sea shore 4 a long time...............it was the moon of 14th........and its shine was spread..............

on the one side of the sea shore...........there was a man who was selling corns

angad buy one as he know kripa loves it

he bring it to him and tore that into two pieces as the both used to eat one thing together.......kripa got a lil smile on this but didn't speak a one word

on eatings the seeds of corns.............angad was looking at her continously

her lil smile was a surity 4 him that she will be behaving normally soon..............she was there with him physically..........but she was not present mentally

"itni chup kyoun hoo"

"kia kahoon"

"aj say pehlay tau tum nay kabhi mujhse yeh question nahin kia..........hum kabhi bhi lafzoon k saharay nahin rahay kripa".........the bend her head .......

in anger he through his corn into the sea........she was looking at him, shockingly

"miss kripa khanna...........tumhara yeh behaviour mujhay meri hi nazroon say gira raha hai........"

"likin nag......."..........he won't let her complete

"likin kia............agar main galat nahin tau tum mujhay jimmy ki nazar say dekh rahi hoo.........kia mujhay abh yeh tumhain batana ho ga k main tumhara childhood friend angad singhania hoon.........k jiss k saath tumne tanhai main bhi waqt guzara hai......."

kripa feels ashemed and her eyes get teary

while angad eyes were ful of anger but b-coz he was quiet hurt with her behaviour..........tears can also seen in his eyes

"kia tum nay kabhi meri nazroon ko badaltay dekha?"

kripa nodded

"tau phir meray saath aisa behaviour kyoun?"

actually............her behaviour made him really depressed...........his tone was quiet strange.....

ususally when both of them get angry to each other they used the word "janab"...........or called them by there names...........not to full names

he know she was upset so he took her to sea shore as he know she lovbes it..............he didn't either like corn..........but he only eat to acompany her.

she took a deep view of his angry face.........he was looking at the sea shore

she came in front of her and take her palm her front of him which has some seeds of corn

"maaf kar do gay?".........she was saying it innocently

"pehlay sorry bolo?".........he ordered her

"sorry"

"mention not".......while taking those corns from her hands, he smile on which she smiled too

"nags..........hamara ghar interior kartay howay tumnay papa say jo chahay lenay ka kaha tha...........kia manga tum nay............or papa nay di k nahin?".....she instantly remembered that

"kab ki maang lii..............or uncle nay kaha hai k jab waqt aaye ga tau mujhay day dain gain"

"kia manga?"..........she wanted to know that eagerly

"sorry..........tumhain nahin bata sakta".....he moved his shoulders

"kyoun?"..........she wanted to know why can't she know it

"its top secret".........on some thought , his eyes were sparkling

"kia hai, bataoo na...........tum jantay hoo k main suspence ko tolerate nahin kar sakti"

"baat kai hai yeh jananay k baad tumhain khushi bhi bohut hogi............likin ghusa bhi bohut aaye ga".......he wanna see her in an angry look

"tau bata kyoun nahin detay"........she was geyying an anger mood

"yeh tau bat hai k bhagwan hai...........tabhi tau....jiss cheez ko maine manga........usay tau pehlay hi meray naam woh likh chuka hai"

"band karoo yeh ragni........or seedhay seedhay bataoo"

"abhi nahin bata sakta"........he wanna make her angry 4 a more time

"dafa ho jaoo............abh mujhse baat na karna"..........in anger.........she started moving ahead and with a smile he followed her

lolz gys
main bhi angad ki tarhan abhi kuch nahin bata sakti...........so u have to wait k

next:the biggest turning point........which will change both of there lifes

lolz
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey,
Amazing part yaar! When I picture them in ur ff they look so adorable and respectful of each other! So... that means that Angad already asked kriaps dad bout her! 😉 😆 😆 .... I guess abhi vo bache hain 😆... I bet Angad is gonna make it extra special while telling her!...... unless its totally not what i'm thinking 😕 🤢. heheheh.... But i guess we'll have to wait to read the turning point of the story!! 😊 Good Luck and plzzzzzzzzzzz tell us soon! k..
Bye!!
Divjot 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

HEY omg its been so long since i read this ff! great parts ana! 😳 👏

also kowen as kripa_angad=luv

Edited by *Naughty_Me* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
kripa ka haat manga hoye ga?????
😉

continue soooooooon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏 i think angad ne abhi rishabh se kuch nahin manga,he was saying dis all to make kripa behave normal.......soooooooo sweet 😛 😛 😛 and wats the turning point 😕 😕 😕cont sooooooooooooon 😊 😊 😊 kyunki main bhi kripa ki tarah zyada der tak suspence tolerate nahi kar sakti 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
U R WITCH ANNA .............................bata na yaar ....plz apni amna di ko hi batado TOP SECRETE 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
just read the last few parts which i didn't read n they were awesome
continue soon

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