Super sorry for the delay in comment.
Coming to the update... it was really cute and romantic. A romantic Rey pursuing Taani was flirty and cute. How he quickly ignored romance and thought about her vulnerability was beautiful. How he explained the "trust bites" was really romantic for me. I loved the notion and his rendition.
Taani's initiation of their intimacy was definitely a highlight as its not fair to forever make Rey chase Taani. She recognized his love and loved and wanted him as much as he loved and wanted her. I liked that a lot.
I also loved the rain outside because it further charged up the setting. I must definitely mention the "love bite" because I loves the naughty and flirty side of Taani that was being hinted there.
Keep updating Nimrat. You're good and you know it. I am genuinely sorry but I was very much pressed for time and was unable to comment earlier.
