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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ratibob007
Awesome story.
Your writing style is nice, but i like happy ending.
So next time please write a story with happy ending.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks..Hehe for sure

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi
Fab story...👍🏼

Thanks

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

story was nice..

but i expected different ending a happy ending..

it was nice..

do make more

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Here was the last part friends.😊

Sighhh i gonna miss this FF dear. it was a very nice start and the story was good but the ending was very frustrating as cant imagine mayur apart from each other.

I dont know if you all are happy with the end but to justify the title i had to do it.--
frankly speaking i dint like this ending a bit. and to justify the title i believe u may end it in a positive way..

I hope no one is disappointed..

sorry to say but i m disappointed with this part.. but u wrote the whole update beautifully.

I had no intentions to end it but since i am not finding time to update as i am in 10th thats why rather than dragging i decided to give you all a end of this FF.

Hope u'll come with another beautiful FF with happy ending...and i m waiting for that day.

Just a few questions that i would like my readers to answer.

Did you like the way i wrote?definitely i liked the way u wrote this FF.

Are you disappointed the way it ended?i answered it already.

Should i write more?yesss.
yesss u should write more. compensate tou karna parega he. isbar rulaya tou next time hume khusiya deni hogi

Love u dear
please come back soon with new ff

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma
@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...

i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

@Fari aww...so swt of u thanks..do u thnk i shud change the end????

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
sad ending kyun? nice

Ainvai btw thanks

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

i seriouly didnt expected this ending but sumwhere it goes with the title...
i wished things would have been diffrent tu aur acha wal feeling ati
but it was really nice journey

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ri.mn

@ri.mn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon