#2 But I love you - SS - VIRMAN - part - 25 to part 33 - THE END

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Oh god... Such a nice and a wonderful story has now come to an end... 😭😭.. Would have loved to read more and more... But I can understand that u wanted to end it now.. So thanks for ending it in such an awesome way... Loved it.. Their POVs were awesome and written from ur heart... 😊👏👏..

Loved update 32.. It was so cute and was virmanilicious.. :).. 😉😉... Their love and romance was so hot... 😳😳.. Love every time u write about their feelings and emotions.. It's a treat to read.. 😊😊😆.. And I loved Maanvi in ur story... She has such a big heart... She din want her own child coz she wanted to give her whole time to Abhi... Awww... How can someone b so sweet... 👏.. Great read... And Virat was lucky to have her...

Simmy's decision of giving the custody to Virat was a nice and wise decision... Finally she had some sense.. 😆😆.. Haha...

Part 33... The POVs were good.. But Simmy is one confused soul... Lol.. She wants to have what Maanvi has and she also wants her happiness... Crazy... She can never b Mannu... 😊😊..

Virat's POV was also good... Finally he realised that Mannu is his life.. And so he was thankful to Simmy to leave him n go... That was so nice.. Summed up his feelings and his happiness in those few lines... 😊👏.. Maanvi's as usual was cute.. And true.. Mannu rocks... Lol...

All in all it was an exceptionally good story dear.. Keep writing... Other stories.. And please write the epilogue soon... Would love to read it.. But make it Virmanish... 😊😉😉.. Waiting..:).

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Dee-jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

First of all thanks for the pm.

It took me while to finish reading the story.

Amazing ending. Just loved it.

I loved how you wrote how others are feeling.

Can't wait for the next fic. Do let me know

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shaalivirman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

I think this the best ending I have alwaz loved this a lot this such an awesome story im gonna read it again and again fr sure :D

nd I loved manvi and abhi's pov :D

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Heeeyyy..
Dont you have part 23 and 24??

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

superb story
will miss this story a lot

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Nandita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

First of all i am a bit emotional that the story has come to its end...it was beautiful, cute, and very sweet SS i have ever read...i will be keep on reading it time & again...like i do read your rest of your works, i simply love all your works & you are my fav writer among all over here!😊

Coming back to the story...the povs were much needed at the end...there was a great intensity in simmi & virat's pov...simply loved it...and as i scrolled down manvi's pov cracked me up!!!😆😆 I mean a second before i was reading the update with much seriousness & concentration & as soon as manvi pov came...i just forgot in a sec what all simmi & virat said!!!! In this case i am with abhi...his mannu maasi rocks!!!😆😆😆

Waiting for the epilogue...is there any chance you write BILY season 2...hehehe...will be waiting for the updates of the rest of the stories too!!!😊😊

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shirhid

@shirhid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#577

that was an amazing story

loved the ending

thanx for writing this

do write more ff on virmans

egrly waiting for epilogue

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#578

thanks again for this great story,
waiting to read the epilogue

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Hey... Still waiting for the epilogue... Please update it now.. After u have ended this beautiful story, I have read it at least fifty times... Lol... Just love it.. 😊😊.. But please give us a Virmanish epilogue... It will b the cherry on the cake.. 😊😉.. An awesome end to this beautiful story.. 😊😊