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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

OMG... 😲

what was that..???? 😲

Shocked.. 😲

Suprised... 😲

Rolfing... 🤣

Uppu ye mast tha... 😃

upar se poore padhne k baad i was damn sure ki they both wil die at the end... i was soo damn sure...

aur ye hua bhi...

but the next instant when Rey got up... i was like... What The Hell... 😲

ussi instant samaj mei aa gaya ki what it was actually... 😃

ahaahahaha... 🤣

Thank god they didnt die atleast... vrna meko bht zor ka lagta woh...

but I Loved This OS... 😃 😳

they both meeting each other after years... 😳

The desire... the crave... 😳

mast tha ekdum... 🤗

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

^Akku.. 😎

Gaana kesa laga? :$

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

supab os
love it
love kr plan

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prinum

@prinum

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow..it was awesome...
My heart skipped a beat wen I read two dead bodies...
Thnk god it was fake...
Nice concept...
Thnx for da pm...

Edited by prinum - 12 years ago

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prinum

@prinum

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wow..it was awesome...
My heart skipped a beat wen I read two dead bodies...
Thnk god it was fake...
Nice concept...
Thnx for da pm...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow

it was super AMAZING

i really liked it

but it was scary as well 😲

nice one

thanks for the PM

please do write more

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

suprbbb yaar ...!!!
totally loved it...!!!
beautifully written..!!!
u kept d suspense till ends...!!!
apne masters ko pagal bna diya...:p
awsummm...!!!
nd abt song... its nycc..!!
jst read d lyrics..!!!
truelly lovd it...!!
thanxx 4 pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Reserves 😆

unres

1st of all this s for d title👏👏

2nd s for d brilliant write-up👏👏

and this s for d songg👏

woww mindblowing os upi🤗

d ending was unexpected😉

i thot it would b a sad one but no😊

totally loveedd ittt😊

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

it was freaking awesome...

written beautifully...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wonderful! :)

I read the ending and I thought yeh to Ishaqzaade types ho gaya, but how can I forget your Upsana! :p

Loved it. Every inch of it. The wait, the desperation, the passion and of course, the fake encounter.

Amaaa-zzzing! :D

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