Tanhayee - Fanfic NOTE PG1

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fanfic abandoned!!!!! continued in Kumkum forum, link below


Tanhayee.....

Starring...

Eijaz Khan as Soham Sen

Vikas Sethi as Swayam Shergill

Gaurav Khanna as Sharman Whadwa

Shireen as Shezz

Nooreen as Noori

Rachandeep as Rach


Character Discriptions

Soham Sen - A wealthy industrialist, owner of Sen Empire. A split personality guy, he's one person in the office and a different person outside.
Swayam Shergill - CEO of Shergill Enterprise, famous businessman, likes to have fun and loves his car, a Lexus.
Sharman Whadwa - a wealthy and successful businessman, MD of Whadwa Industries. Is a fun loving cool guy and a romantic at heart but strict when it comes to business.
Shezz - a loud mouthed and bubbly girl who likes to party and shop til she drops. Has a chauffer to accompany her while she drives her Lamborghini
Noori -a rich girl who loves clothes, shopping and money. She is always up-to-date with the latest fashion and doesn't go anywhere without her Ferrari
Rach - a shopaholic, someone who likes to gossip about famous businessmen's' wives. And doesn't like people who criticise her.
Cars

Soham
Swayam
Sharman
Shezz
Noori
Rach
A fanfic by Noori, Rach and Shezz...enjoy....plz leave ya comments!!!!
Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1


A guy is having an argument with his assistant in an office.


Guy: what the hell is this maine tumse kaha tender toora karo leekan tumne u know what just bloody get out


Assistant: but sir


Guy: what but? get out maine kaha are you deaf


Assistant: I am sorry


Guy: GET OUT....sorry keh raha hai...god!


Assistant leaves


Guy: bloody ridiculous


Then the phone rings the chair turns around and they show his eyes and its his secretary anjali


Guy: hello


Anjali: sir you have a call


Guy: not now im busy


Anjali: sir its important


Guy: ok then put it through


Anjali: yes sir


Guy: haan bolo kya baath hai


Then the guy gets up and they show his hand raising up and the guy turns and faces the window, you can only see his back


Guy: tum itna naraz kyun hote ho? ok ok sono I will be there fiqaar maat karo yes I will uff hoo you know I don't like it when you say my full name just call me soham


Then he turns around and you see his face and its soham, the check it out theme comes on


Soham: uff hoo fiqaar maat karo ok I am coming yes ok bye now


Then he disconnects the phone and calls Anjali


Anjali: yes sir


Soham: cancel the rest of my meetings i have to go


Anjali: but sir


Soham: no buts, just do it, bye


He leaves


Meanwhile a guy is driving down the road in his car cool music playing down the road and we can see him having a race with someone and he is looking at the guy while driving and smirking then we see the back of his head and then he skids the car and he wins the race he gets out of his car and everyone cheers and congratulate him


Fan 1: wow nice one


Fan 2: congrats


The guy takes off his sunglasses


Fan 3: youre simply the best Swayam!


Swayam smiles


Swayam: thanks guys


Opponent: fhir se race karo, main jeet jaoon ga


Swayam: tum haar maan jao abhi se, agar mere paas time hota then i would but right now i have to go


Swayam gets back in the car, puts his sunglasses on and drives off


Elsewhere there's a guy in a shopping mall, in a jewellry shop looking for something, he's sees something he likes and asks the girl 2 pack it 4 him, he walks outside and gets sum flowers and chocolates. Then goes to his car and he sees someone he knows


Guy: hey how are you long time no see shlok


Shlok: ya I know leekan u know Disha pregnant and all


Guy: aw wow congrats


Shlok: thanks, hows things with you?


guy: teek taak you know how it is


Shlok - cool, so shall we go for a drink


guy: erm...


They're talking when he gets a txt message saying "Mr Sharman Whadwa your presence is needed at the office" then we see his face and its Sharman


Sharman: hey man I am sorry leekan jaana hai business meetinng


Shlok: its cool see u later man take care


Sharman: the drink? maybe next time, we will catch up soon ok


Shlok: yea sure, see ya


Sharman gets in his car, waves to Shlok and makes his way to the office, while driving he gets another text message saying "Mr Whadwa, where are you", he smiles and replies to the message


Sharman: i am on my way.....just wait


To be continued
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 plz repli guyz!!#
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys we beg of ya to comment on guys it took us a long time to think of a name and how to do d fanfic come on guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I think its wicked i like vey much.
thank you and my name is Rachna and my nick name is RACH so i am lovin it it LOLZ 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its ekdum jhakkas yaaro. I really love it. Its just mast. Tussi fikar na karo c. Apun ke exams hain monday se isliye lamba comment nahi diya. Meri 3 frnds hain jo tumhari fanfics ko like karte hain. They were silent readers but after seeing the encouragement you get if people comment really got them into the mood and they promised to comment as soon as their exams are over which is in april. So dont get disappointed. I myself will give you a long comment. Promise. Now continue soon. And dont cry.
I really liked the way you gave the intro about all the main characters. Love it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its ekdum jhakkas yaaro. I really love it. Its just mast. Tussi fikar na karo c. Apun ke exams hain monday se isliye lamba comment nahi diya. Meri 3 frnds hain jo tumhari fanfics ko like karte hain. They were silent readers but after seeing the encouragement you get if people comment really got them into the mood and they promised to comment as soon as their exams are over which is in april. So dont get disappointed. I myself will give you a long comment. Promise. Now continue soon. And dont cry.
I really liked the way you gave the intro about all the main characters. Love it.

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