Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awesome update... U described their emotions so well... I can feel their pain where arnav is afraid of losing khushi and khushi resisting every attempt of his... Hope arnav make every thing fine...can't see them like this... Waiting for the next update...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Such an emotional update

Arnav trying very hard to hold on to khushi
And of course khushi very hard to distance herself from Arnav

Hope they get their happiness

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Congrats on the new thread, hope this story has many more.

Wow, that was quite a emotional and heart breaking update,

Awww it was funny when khushi mentioned her dream wedding and then told Arnav how the proposal day would actually go, she is definitely crazy.

It was sad how Khushi mentioned all the cruel words and taunts Arnav had said to her.

It's a shame Khushi has to mention all the past taunts, but I'm glad Arnav is feeling guilty and distraught.

Wow, Khushi's last question about love is very intriguing, can't wait to see how Arnav responds.

Loved the update, it was a wonderful read.

Also the update was written amazingly well,

Eager to read the next part,

Continue soon please and Thanks for the PM,

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

that was a lovely update as usual...

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Her heart is breaking. But she is trying so hard to pretend that its not hurting. She is trying to laugh and smile so that it becomes easier to let go.

Khushi knows what love is, she just dones not know if love exists without pain because for as long as she can remember love for her has come with pain.

She is scared...

Loved this part. Waiting eagerly for the next

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

lovely update! i hope that khushi changes her mind.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Khushi's pain is just too much.. She has gone thru a lot.. 🥺 But Arnav is trying all ways to make it up to her.. I loved the question, she asked at the end..

Edited by mishti_17 - 12 years ago