Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8 - Page 43

Time is running out...what ASR will do next ??????

Looking forward for ur update...Pls update soon...

seems he shall loose her
but guess that is to happen
if it didnt then that would be weird
after all what he did cant be forgotten easily
and its not what he said or did to her that gets khushi but the lack of trust on his part
ahh those days before the damned contract marriage
they sure were beautiful
but shaym had to go ruin it all
and ASR had to become ASR
had he thought as arnav then maybe the damage wouldn't have been so bad
but all those ifs and buts cant change
and now all he can do is try
it all goes down on khushi
will she forgive him in 6 days or after that guess we shall know and soon
hmmm so they know how bad shyam was and to extent of his madness for money and obsession for khushi
if only payal knew that how alone she really was
would she still wanna thank him
somehow i doubt the same
well she will know soon enough for sure
lets see what else will be next

fab update as always! i hope that arnav comes up with a plan before the contract marriage is over.

superb update..

thanks 4 d pm

Wondered if he'd be sneaking over in the middle of the night , just to see her ...wouldn't put it past him really 😆 Nice going dear.

Oh no Khushi no. Don't think about walking out.

Awesome update...thanks for the PM

The update was incredible!! I've always loved your style of writing.
Waking up in the morning in Khushi's arms is bliss for Arnav. After that heavy night full of confessions and apologies him waking up in her arms was aptly appropriate. Lol to Mamiji! First missing breakfast then lunch. The family must have different ideas of why the two woke up so late ;)
Khushi jumping it of bed and running to the bathroom show her insecurity. Though her waive is slowly slipping, it is still strong enough to convince her that she cannot live with Arnav.
Anjali is being strong. It must be difficult to talk about Shyam but she is doing the right thing. Of course Anjali would not be herself unless she took blame for it all. She did not need to apologize to Khushi and Payal but the sweetheart she is pushed her to apologize.
Arnav's confession about Shashi's turmoil was well overdue. It's I'd good that everyone knows the truth now. As for Arnav's behavior towards Khushi, it is come tell compassionate and dutiful like a good husband. Both Akash and Arnav know just how to support their respective wives.
I loved the part with Laxmi! The poor goat, she is just looking for her best friend and missing her, similar to how Arnav feels.
Payal and Khushi's conversation shows just how unaware the Guptas and Raizadas are towards Arnav and Khushi's relationship. Khushi needs to let go of her insecurities and see that Arnav has truly changed and that she is not a harm to the Raizada family but rather and asset.
Overall the update was amazing and I loved how you embodied each character. Everyone is true to their personality and I feel that this would have been a better track on the show then what they showed! Can't wait until the next update!