VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anu0555

awsome abishan...superb

beautifully written..!!!
loved it to the core..!!!
emotional update... but still too gudd...
update soon..!!! thnks alot for the pm...



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Posted: 12 years ago
oww feel so bad for manvi...
hope she can solve the problems which her sister has created...
waiting for VIRMAN😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Manvi now she has to think about the ways of fixing all the problems that her sister created... Interesting story waiting to read the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update


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update next part sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice update
continue soon
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loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update she also suffering alot
waiting how there love story start
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abishan



thank u and advance wishes for becoming a senior memberšŸ‘

thnkkk u soo much abishann😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
My God , m loving ur FF So much .. really Awesome .. virat the rude n angry man n Maanvi super cute n sweet by mature .. feeling very bad for her .! hope virat will soon realize his hidden feelings for maanvi ..
Please continue sooon n DO PM ME !! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 7:


Hi my dear buddies... Thank u very much for ur likes and comments in previous part. I am here with a long update as per your wishes. Hope you enjoy this...

Manvi entered inside Vadhera house for the first time... On that day of reception, she didn't got a chance to see inside the house. She thought, "this house is awesome just like the persons living inside!!!" She just loved the house which is nothing more than a palace...



On the other side, Viren entered in his room, where Jeevika is arranging her clothes in the closet. He came inside like a cat and gave a cute back hug... " Virenji... You just got remembered me now? From the time we came here, you are always with mom and Virat... Go and hug ur friend... not me" said Jeevika showing her fake angry face.


"Oh... so you are angry with your hubby? Let me check how much time you can continue this?" said Viren cupping her face. Jeevika kissed his cheek suddenly which surprised Viren and she said, " not even a minute more... I love you..." Viren smiled on her act and when he was about to hug her, Jeevika heard their maid's footsteps and aparted from him. A maid came in and informed about Manvi's arrival. She ran to meet Manvi after her excuses from Viren.

Manvi called "Jeevika ji" and saw here and there for searching her. She smiled seeing Jeevika coming towards her. She was greeted in by Jeevika... Jeevika saw Manvi coming inside and went hurriedly to welcome her. She hugged her and asked, "Hi Manvi... How are you?"


"Ya... I am fine... May I call you di'?" asked Manvi in a puppy tone. "Why not meri choti behen?" said Jeevika lovingly holding her chin...

Meanwhile, Viren also joined them, "Then, I am ur jiju" said this, he came and hugged Manvi... "Thank you Jiju" said Manvi for asking her to call jiju...

"Actually... ma asked me to meet her. May I go to meet her? And where she'll be?" asked Manvi.

"Go upstairs and take left. First room is her's" said Viren. "You go Manvi and I'll bring juice for us... ok?" said Jeevika and left the place.

Donno why her fate is always playing with her? Seeing each and every interior design of that house, pics hanging in the wall... she was very happy and forgotten the place where she wants to go. She just made her way seeing those small beautiful ceramic dolls fixed at every step on the wall, she took right instead of taking left. Then entered the first room thinking that as V..ma's room.

She immediately entered into that room without making excuses... She entered in calling "Aunty..." Virat who's wearing his shirt on that time was shocked on seeing the sudden entry of a girl in his room... Seeing him inside that room, Manvi shouted "Awwwhhh" closing her ears and eyes in shock. She immediately closed the door and ran outside. "OMG... what I did? What he's doing in aunty's room? If he came here, he'll yell at me... god... Please do something..." said this she shivered. When she raised her head to move further, she saw him gazing at her like a volcano which is anytime ready to spit it's lava...

But she didn't wanted to face his angry lecture. She reacted her face like nothing happened a minute ago... Her face is emitting the mischievousness like a student who was caught by his teacher while copying in a test or exam... It'll be so funny to watch...

She then started to speak, " Virat... it's actually... Jeevika di told me that left side first room is aunty's room... She only asked me to meet her here... But you" said Manvi for reasoning her act...

"but this is right side first room..." said Virat cutting Manvi's voice.

"Oh... this is right side?... sorry Virat" said Manvi puppily.

"It's easy to say sorry... Will you close your eyes everytime while walking... You careless woman... I said you before itself that don't dare to face me again. But..." shouted Virat in a full sound...

"I didn't came to see you... Your mom asked me to come here" said Manvi politely.

"Then only go and meet her... Don't ever cross my way" said straight and he went to his room.

"Oh god... give me enough strength to face him again... All this is becoz of my sister... Smrithi... I wanna change this attitude of this man... He shouldn't be like this" said this she turned to V..ma's room.

Actually, she can't show any anger towards him for hating and shouting her like this. She thought that showing such an attitude towards her was not his mistake. She took his every words playfully like a child. She didn't hate him though he shows his jerk face to her.

She went inside V..ma's room... But this time with some excuse that she don't need to disturb any one...

"Come inside Manvi... You don't need to ask permission" said V..ma. Manvi came inside the room...

"Are you fine now? You should eat well so that you won't be weak..." said V..ma in a concerned tone. "Aunty... I am perfectly alright... BTW, why did You asked me come here?" asked Manvi politely.

"Do I need any reason to meet you?" said ma. Actually she was not well. She wished like talking to her will gain some strength. So, she asked Manvi to meet her. Jeevika also came inside and these three ladies are chatting and laughing teasing each other. While Manvi stepped to move out, V..ma hugged her and asked her to meet her atleast twice a week that she is not enough healthy to go park for meeting her daily.

Manvi agreed her kind order and comes to Vadera house whenever she's possible. She became very close to V..ma, Jeevika and Viren. But she can't even talk to Virat as she got scared on his rude lecturers. She tried many times to talk but her fear never let her to move towards him.

On the other side, Vanshika ma's health is becoming weak day by day. But she's hiding everything to Virat, Viren and Jeevika as it will make them to worry.

After few days, Manvi earned her first good salary from her show in Kolkatta... She brought many gifts to all. Shruthi was very happy seeing Manvi's gifts for her. They were very happy. She went to Vadera house with those gifts... She went there happily... She gave a pearl necklace set to Jeevika, a costliest watch for Viren and a saree for Vanshika ma. V..ma was very happy on her gestures and said, " There is no need for this beta... I need only your affection... It's the most valid thing for me".

"Don't worry ma... that'll we always given for you. You don't need to ask me" said Manvi hugging her from back. "Then I wish to ask you one thing... Will you ..." said V..ma hesitantly. Her face becomes very much worried. "Aunty... whatever you wish just order me na? I am here to do" said Manvi playing with her fingers.

"will you marry Virat... Will you give him the love that he deserves? According to me, you are the best girl for my son. You are the only one to give life even to a dead wood... You are too wise to handle him..." completed V..ma in a much hesitant tone.

Manvi was very shocked hearing that... She never expected V..ma would ask her something like this. She stand still without any expressions. Tears came from her eyes seeing V..ma's demand. She thought how to say the word "no" to a person who always showering immense love and blessings to her like a mom.

"Sorry ma... please don't mistake me. I don't need this marriage. Also I didn't have any feelings for your son... I always seen his rude face and arrogant words... Please ask me anything other than this. But I won't marry him...Please" said Manvi joined her hands to V..ma. She didn't stood there a second more and ran out. Jeevika saw all these and her eyes becomes moist seeing their condition. V..ma becomes very emotional... She know Manvi would never agree for this. But she thought that was the right time to express her feelings. She fell down immediately collapsed as her legs were not supporting enough. Soon she fainted and Jeevika ran to her whispering "Ma..." She took her head on her lap and patted her cheeks heavily shouting, "Virenji... Virenji... come soon..." Viren ran immediately inside the room and called their doctor. They also informed Virat about this and he also came. Doctor checked her and said, "her condition is becoming worst day by day... You have to her take more care... I think she might have lot of tensions and worries inside her".



Virat went numb hearing this. He ran inside and hugged his ma who woke up few minutes before. "Ma... what happened to you... I think you are not taking proper rest..." said this he cried in her arms. Ma consoled him, " Don't worry beta... I am ok..." They talked few more minutes and Virat said, " I won't go anywhere hereafter... I'll always be with you... You can ask me whatever you need... ok?" said this, he covered up her blanket and sat near her.

Manvi went home and shared everything with Shruthi. Shrthi consoled her ...

Few days passed in this way that no one meets each other... V..ma was highly worrying for her son that who'll take care of him after her death... She worried hardly which worsened her health even more.

One day , Viren asked Jeevika, " Why Manvi is not coming to meet ma now-a-days? I think ma may worry because of this... Have you informed Manvi about ma's illness?"




Jeevika then told everything happened on that day about V..ma and Manvi's conversation. Viren said, " I think, ma is worrying for Virat's life... We should inform Manvi about this..." All of a sudden, they saw Virat who heard the whole conversation. They shocked that he may mistake Manvi for Ma's illness. When he was about to react, their nurse ran inside hurriedly saying, " Vanshika Ma'm can't breathe properly... She is also having stomach ache... We have to take her to the hospital..."

All the three hurriedly took ma to hospital and looked highly worried. She was kept inside ICU. Virat is out of emotions... He donno what to do and how to bring her mom to normal state. He stood outside the ICU closing his eyes with prayer to god. Doctor came outside and Virat moved closer to him. He patted Virat's back in a consoling way and said, "She is almost nearing her end... May be a month or more she'll... Don't worry Virat, let's hope for the best."

Viren heared this doctor's statements and hurried moved to Jeevika to inform about this who is standing little away from ICU. He also asked her to inform Manvi about ma's condition. Jeevika called Manvi and said everything in phone.

Manvi on the other side, went shocked hearing all this. She don't know about V..ma's cancer before. But after knowing everything, she was hell shocked... " I am sorry aunty... I didn't know this before... I have hurted you a lot... And... And I am wholly responsible for this now... God... Please help me to get out of this... Please make her better now..." said this with tears continuously running from her eyes...

She rushed to the hospital immediately... She hugged Jeevika and cried her heart out. She also hugged Viren and cried. Viren asked doctor's permission to allow her to meet mom... he thought his ma might feel little better after meeting her.



Virat stood still watching all these. He thought, if it is the way to make his mom good, then why not he let her ...

Manvi entered inside... She saw V..ma and running to hold her hands... She took her hands and holded it nearer to her heart and cried saying, " Aunty... I am really sorry...I am the reason for your condition... Please forgive me..."



Ma immediately opened her eyes and said, " No beta... I have cancer already... And it's time to..." She was sshhhed by Manvi and said, "I am ready for this marriage ma... I'll do whatever you say..." V..ma suddenly hugged her lovingly closing her eyes to let the stack of tears holded in her eyes to come out

That's it my dear buddies... Hope you enjoy this...Wish to know your comments and doubts...

THANK YOU...

BYE BYE... TAKE CARE...

Edited by abishan - 12 years ago

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