VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...so finally virats past is revealed...and you have written it very well👏..dear..hats off...do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi,
i like to read ur stories very much.u hav excellent creative skills.iam a great fan of urs😊
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Originally posted by: tinni04

hi,
i like to read ur stories very much.u hav excellent creative skills.iam a great fan of urs😊



thank u dear tinni😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi my dear buddies... First of all, I wish to thank you all for liking my FF. I didn't expect 65 likes for my story. Thank you so much once again...Now, you can read part6.


PART 6:

"Smrithi... Smrithi chaudary... daughter of Mahesh chaudary's... running Chaudary's group of industries..."



These words of Vanshika ma was ringing in her mind again and again... She donno even what to think... She was not in her senses any more. She holded her legs and hugged them tightly in fear. She can't speak even if she wished to speak. Words are trembling in her mouth... her lips are shivering unable to bear the truth. She donno neither she has to be happy for knowing that her family members are alive after those incidents nor the worst sin committed by her sister Smrithi. She ran to her closet and took her family photo... She cried her heart out thinking the past...

Manvi's past:

Fourteen years back, Manvi was just 8 years old little girl... Her's is a big joint family of nearly twelve members... Her dadaji, dad, chachu are running a news paper press called TRUTH. It was a daily news paper and political truths are published mostly. People are very interested on knowing the truths and dramas behind most of the politicians. Their papers are reaching popular to many cities and even in the rural areas. That was election time. Vinay Malhodra, who has greater chances of becoming Chief Minister at that time. He did so many acts in front of the people like giving free notebooks for students, food and accommodations for poors and so many... But all these were fake. The real motives of Vinay Malhodra to earn money after winning in that election through several ways like bribery, allotting many parliamentary seats for his relatives were came to know by Manvi's dad Mahesh Chaudary. He got those evidences when he went to meet him for another purpose. He recorded those things in his pocket tape recorder which were very used on those times. He published those truths behind this man in their "TRUTH". This reached to many eyes and he was defeated in that election.

Knowing the real cause behind his failure, Vinay was highly frustrated. He was in a mood to completely destroy Chaudarys and their whole generation. He ordered his rowdys working under him to fire the entire press. He also ordered them to kill all the chaudarys under one roof.

One that particular day, Manvi was very adamant to her dad to take her to movie. But he scolded her not to watch movies in this age and she has to concentrate only in her studies. She asked her papa to take her there in a puppy tone. Madan chaudary, Mannu's chachu always used to pamper her and give her whatever she wishes. He supported Manvi on behalf of her dad and asked him permission that he himself take her to that movie. So they went happily for that movie. After movie, Manvi wished to have her dinner outside. So her chachu took her to a big Hotel of that area to make her neice happy. She is his angel and he never ignore whatever she wishes. They spent long time there in chatting and reached home nearly 11.30 PM.

When they reached near their house, they saw their life's most shocking incident Their whole house was fired and its burning heavily like no one can come out. It was like a huge Volcano which is erupting their family... Manvi and her chachu standing outside seeing all this... They tried to enter in but the smoke and fire was heavy that they can't make even a single step inside the house. Finally, they saw dadaji coming outside of the house secretly without knowing to those rowdies who were roaming around the house so that no one can come outside. They ran towards him... Madan holded Dadaji's shoulders who is almost nearing to his death. Dadaji pleaded Madan to take Manvi somewhere out of this state and start a fresh. Becoz if they caught to anyone's eyes, they'll also be murdered. Manvi was crying badly that she can't understand anything on that small age. Both Madan and Dadaji holded Manvi's mouth tightly so that her sound can't reach to the nearby rowdies. She fainted suddenly without knowing the happenings. Dadaji joined his hands to Madan and ask him to run away somewhere so that atleast they can be protected from those criminals... so that he can die with a satisfaction that atleast two of their family members are alive... He died in front of Madan on that second itself...

Madan don't know what to do. He grabbed enough courage and touched his dead dad's feet for blessings with uncontrollable tears in his eyes. He then took fainted Manvi in his arms and ran from Delhi to Mumbai to save his life and his child's life.

Till this only known by Manvi and Madan. But after few minutes... Rajaram, who is one of the enemy of Vinay... Who is one of the serious follower of "TRUTH" publishers... ran to the spot and helped the family members to come out of the fire and saved them from those rowdies. The whole family except Manvi, chachu and Dadaji were there. They thought along with dadaji, Manvi and chachu were also died. Mahesh chaudary decided not to live in Delhi as he was not ready to loose their remaining family... They shifted to Bangalore where his friend was there to help him. They settled in Bangalore and started Chaudary's group of industries.

On these deep thoughts, she went to sleep without knowing herself...

Next day morning, Shruthi woke up by herself and surprised that Manvi didn't came to wake up her till... she was very happy for having a long sleep. With a wide smile, she ran towards Manvi's room. Soon her smile Vanished seeing her di in that state. She ran towards Manvi and caressing her cheeks which had stains of tears... Manvi woke up immediately on her touch. She looked very pale and had not enough strength to speak a word. Her mind state made her body numb... She was out of expressions.

"Di what happened? You cried the full night? Right?" asked Shruthi in a worried tone

Manvi didn't speak a word and went straight to washroom. Shruthi was worrying seeing Manvi's condition. She also knew her past... But didn't understand the reason of her state right now.

"Mumma... pappa... You all are still alive? I wanna see you... touch you...hug you... please come and take me with you... Please... I am dying to see you... Where are you all now...God... Please let me know where my family members are..." said this and cried Manvi holding her knees under the shower... He cried more and more... She cried even more thinking, "How you left Smrithi to do all this ma? How cheap she did ? Becoz of her single mistake, how many are suffering? How many of them had affected? I am ashamed to express that a girl who belonged to my own family committed all such sins... Are you all aware of her sins pappa?"

She came out of the washroom after some times... She went to kitchen to cook something for her Shruthi.

Shruthi holded her hand with tears in her eyes. Manvi saw her tears and hugged her. She cried on her shoulders for few seconds. Shruthi asked her, "am I really your sister di... If so, why are you hiding something from me? Please tell me di... I can't see your silence"

"Kuch nahi... I'll say everything later... And You please don't worry now. You are my one and only cute little sister. No one can replace you in my heart", said Manvi cupping Shruthi's face. She also managed to smile so that Shruthi will stop worrying for her.

They had their breakfast and Shruthi went for her board exams as she is doing her twelth standard.

Manvi went to her room and relaxed for a while with a blank mind. She convinced herself that she don't have to worry about her family now and if her fate is written to meet her parents one day, surely she'll. She then decides to solve the effects created by Shruthi... But she donno how to... Suddenly, Vanshika ma's call came on her mobile.



V..am asked Manvi to meet her today in her house. Manvi cut the call after replying her and got ready to go to Virat's house.


That's it my dear buddies... Hope you like it. Please let me know your comments and doubts. Surely, I'll give a long update next time with our beautiful Virman twists...


BYE BYE... TAKE CARE...🤗

Edited by abishan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
manvi's past revealed
mannu gona visit v:ma
Hm virman twist😉
Cont soon
Wait'g 4 nxt part
Edited by Kicha111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMg manvi had bad past
hope she'll soon get it solve
amazing update abishan...liked it so much 👏
well written 😃
Thanx 4 upcoming Pm
waiting for next part
update soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

OMg manvi had bad past
hope she'll soon get it solve
amazing update abishan...liked it so much 👏
well written 😃
Thanx 4 upcoming Pm
waiting for next part
update soon 😊




thank u my dear Jannat... Ur appreciation is always making me to do such things...😊 Love ur comments in all my works😊
Edited by abishan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm wrk ... Suprb writing skill!!!! Sad for manvi... Luv sruthi n manvi 's relationship... Update soon n plz,plz,plz,plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm wrk ... Suprb writing skill!!!! Sad for manvi... Luv sruthi n manvi 's relationship... Update soon n plz,plz,plz,plz add me in ur pm list




SURE😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved it yaar
interesting

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