VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
An awesome update😳
Loving manvi's character and her bond with vanshika is excellent😊
And not to say the bond between both sisters.
May be virat has a bad past because he is not ready to accept his feeling towards manvi.
May be due to his past he is rude with manvi😃
Don't know how she is going to bond with viren and jeevika, may that relation bring virman closer😆
Waiting for changes that are going to happen in their life😊
Your writing is beautiful, very well explained😳
Thank you
Takecare🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomeee update
loved the end part
virat mesmerised by manvi
but hes very harsh with her
cnt wait to see his reaction wen he finds out his mum brought her there
thanx for the pm
update soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff...i like tis a lot...!!! 👏
update sooonnn haan??? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
loving maanvi & v ma bonding
wonder why virat hates girls
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shaanu0111

An awesome update😳

Loving manvi's character and her bond with vanshika is excellent😊
And not to say the bond between both sisters.
May be virat has a bad past because he is not ready to accept his feeling towards manvi.
May be due to his past he is rude with manvi😃
Don't know how she is going to bond with viren and jeevika, may that relation bring virman closer😆
Waiting for changes that are going to happen in their life😊
Your writing is beautiful, very well explained😳
Thank you
Takecare🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
I am loving this story a lot. Virat is being rude to Manvi, hope he realizes his attraction soon. Thank you for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
👍🏼😊 suprrr update continue
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 5:


Dear friends... I am very happy that for the first time I got fifty likes for my previous chapter.

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Thank you so much for my dear friends whom I mentioned above. Here is your update...

Here Vanshika ma was searching Virat to introduce him to Manvi... She knew his son will never like this. But she thought, Manvi's bubbliness will cover up his attitude. She was searching him in every nook and corner. Finally, she saw them and was shocked to the core. She saw Manvi struggling herself to remove her hand from Virat's tight grip. Immediately she ran to the spot and shouted Virat to take his hand. Manvi ran towards ma and hugged her. Vanshika ma soothed her back in a consoling Manner saying, "It's ok beta... I am here na... Don't cry my baby..." Manvi is sobbing continuously...



Virat didn't understand anything... he didn't got what's going on between them... How they knew each other... He thought she came there to disturb him... Confusingly he shouted " Ma..."

Manvi is really scared to face Virat who is standing near them... She ran out of the hall unable to control her sobbing. Ma called her, "Manvi... don't go... pls..." But she was not there to hear this. She moved towards Virat, " Virat... I know you may not like her... but you don't have any rights to hurt her even... Don't face me again..." Said, she moved out of the hall.

Virat's anger on Manvi is now raised to peak. He shouted himself,"How dare she took my mom her side? Mom you are supporting her...Shit..."

Vanshika ma went outside in search of Manvi. She found her address with his driver's help which she told herself during one of their meeting.

Manvi went inside and straightly goes to her room without even looking at Shruthi. She understands that something was wrong through Manvi's act. She went to knock the door... Suddenly she saw Vanshika ma entering inside calling Manvi. Shruthi remembered V..ma through that temple incident. V..ma asked her, "Where is Manvi?" She shows her room... Hearing ma's sound Manvi opened the door. She is very silent... not ready to speak even a single word, becoz if speak, she can't control her sobs again.

V..ma excuses Shruthi and locked the door. When she was about to speak something, " It's ok aunty... I don't want you to apologise... please..." Said Manvi.

"No beta...it's only my fault..." said ma.

"Sorry aunty... I don't know Virat is your son... If I knew before, I would have never come there..." said Manvi not able to face ma.

Vanshika ma lifted her face up and said," beta... I know my son don't like girls... I can't say it's only his mistake... whatever he faced made him to act in this way.. Actually, he is so sweet... very polite to everyone..." said ma and looked Manvi with tears like she can't continue anymore.

"Then... what happened aunty? Why is he behaving in this way? Please say something... trust me... I am here to help you... Don't cry aunty... please," said Manvi in a concerned tone.

V..ma gains some strength and started saying...

" Two years back.. Virat had a best friend, his name is Vikram... Virat, Vikram and Viren used to roam around together anytime... These three are the best buddies from their childhood. Vikram's family is also very close to us. He'll spend more time with us than his family members. Virat considered him as his own brother... They are so attached with each other.




Viren lost his parents in the middle and came under my responsibility. He started business at that time in Dubai and so he went there. Virat is also struggling for his career in acting... He was not a successful actor at that time. He loved a girl called Preethi... She also loved him. Sometimes she comes to dinner with Virat and always stuck with him. I didn't trust her. I told Virat several times that she is not the right girl for him. But his love blinded him. She is also an actress. She gave hatric hit movies and was an upcoming actress with many projects. Virat is very proud over her success. But being a successful actress, she ignored Virat's wedding proposal... She just threw away his love considered his failure alone... he was heart broken... He last all his hope... He forgot how to breathe even... He didn't went out to persuade his carreer... He didn't know how to lead the remaining life... he was completely shattered.

It took 6 months for us to recover him... but not fully... he forgot to laugh, chat with his friends, almost everything... only thing that went on his mind was to become a successful actor in front of that girl... who thrown him away like a tissue paper... who thrown him for the sake of a rich life...

After few months, Virat became very busy in his profession... He reached almost half of his path to success. At that time, he went U.S. for the three months to a movie shooting. His friend Vikram already in love with a girl who is very rich... She loved Vikram like anything... She thought Vikram as a big business man which was unaware of him. Once she knew he was a middle-class, she just throw him away and got married to a rich business man. Vikram committed suicide becoz of that bitch and now he is no more with us. Vikram has a only relation, his father... He went to that girl and demanded her law for his son... On the rage on his lost son, he filed a case on that girl... But this poor father didn't got any law... He was murdered by a gang of rowdies on that same day...

Virat came to Mumbai knowing his friend's death and got to know everything happened to Vikram. First of all, he felt very guilty for not being with his friend. After so many enquiries, he came to know that the same girl is responsible for death of Vikram's dad. From that day, he thought girls are very irresponsible, careless, don't mind even it is pure love and so on... He not only lost his friend, he lost his soulmate, his pillar of support ... All this fixed in is mind and created such an attitude towards girls, love, trust and so on... It's not his mistake...his situations made him in this way..."said ma with tears continuously running from her eyes.

Manvi consoled her by wiping her tears, " Aunty... please don't cry... please... I'll help you... I'll do whatever to make you happy... please aunty..." said she patted her cheeks. She then asked her "who is that girl... Reason for Vikram's..." She can't proceed further. V..ma immediately said, " Smrithi... Smrithi chaudary... daughter of Mahesh chaudary's group of industries...".

Manvi was shattered hearing all those names. She asked her to repeat again what she said...

V..ma asked her, "What happened beta? You know them? Please don't cry"



Manvi can't listen to anything what Vanshika ma speaks. Those names are ringing in her mind again and again... "Are they still alive? Really? God... it's confusing me..." She can't control her trail of thoughts. Tears are continuously running from her eyes. V..ma scared seeing this. She called Shruti immediately and asked her to check whether Manvi was alright. Both of them are calling her again and again. But no response. Suddenly she collapsed and fell down on her bed itself. They called the doctor and made her check. Doctor checked her and said nothing was wrong and she was little week. She advised them to made her eat properly and to take rest. They nodded and doctor went.

After few minutes, Manvi opened her eyes... V..ma asked her, "Anything wrong Beta? Am I hurt you in anyways?"

"No aunty... I am alright... I didn't ate properly today and that's why..." said she tried to managed the situation.

"Ok aunty... it's very late now... You sleep here or..." asked Manvi again trying to change the topic.

"No beta... Virat'll be waiting for me... I have to go... You take care...Haan, don't forget to eat something before you sleep" said she went out in a relaxed manner that she shared her problems with someone today.

...

On the other side, Viren and Jeevika told Virat about Manvi and how she helped Vanshika and everything about their meeting. They also said, Manvi is becoming very important to ma now-a-days. Virat felt guilty for whatever he does and misunderstands her today.




He went to his room balcony. His face showed the hidden pain inside his heart. He seemed to be worried a lot and lot...He saw the moon and started to talk himself, " What a hell I did today? How can I behave like that with a girl who saved my mom...God please forgive me... Please... Whatever happens, I can't get out of the pain I went through... I really scared seeing that girl ... I am worrying whether I loose myself to a girl again... I don't want to go through all this once again in my life... I am tired of all this... Please god, I don't want to see her again... I am really scared whether I'll fall for... Manvi... Manvi chaudary..."

Vanshika ma was standing behind Virat... She heared everything he spoke worriedly...She don't know whether she has to be surprised or shocked for what she is seeing now. She called Virat... Virat suddenly turned back and acted like nothing affected him. Ma decides not to ask him about this right now as he'll be worried more. She bid him good night and went out to her room.

Locked the door inside, Virat again moved to the balcony... His thoughts again circled around Manvi... He thought whether she'll affect him further. He convinced himself saying, " No no... She might have helped my mom... but who knows she is good... no chance... She can't be good... How carelessly she bumped on me that day... irresponsible... Don't dare to come across me Ms.Manvi..." saying this he cleared his mind roaming around her and went to sleep.

That's it friends... Hope you like it. Manvi's past will be revealed in next chapter. Please let me know your comments and doubts.


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Edited by abishan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it... I think Manvi is in a way related to Smrithi Chaudhary.. Good that the reason for Virat's behavior was revealed waiting to read about Manvi's past now... please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional update...loved the way u revealed virat past about his behaviour...,.and virat affected by manvi interesting ...nice work.,.,..continue soon...take care

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