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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Nice

Continue soon !! 👍🏼

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

the FF is written very well and quite interesting to read

Arnav has really behaved very bad

whatever be the truth of Khushi being responsible for arnav's past

still

1. He didnt let her meet her bro.
2. He is still very casual to lavanya more than a friend.He allows her to kiss in his cheeks
3. Anav knows he has hate for khushi ..But he has become so cruel that he forgot that she is going to lose her brother also now.
4. Khushi blames arnav for the accident, and arnav knowing that what khushi is going through inside thinking about fathers accident , he still expects her to behave normal?? how she must be feeling that she is married to a prson who killed her father unknowingly or knowingly whatever.

so wen Khushi knows that how she is connected to arnav's past problems then she must not only cry but also state that

If my despair,if my pain can give u peace arnav , then let it be. After i hand over your babies, i will be gone . sorry for impacting your life so badly. I wont question again to u about anything rough you do to me.

and Khushi must wait for a year to pass by .
while arnav must realise that already he has taken a lot of revenge from her and she is on verge to loose her brother also.

and now khushi will definitely escape layanya's attack.
But hope ahead Khushi hangs between life and death and lying on bed she says arnav- happy now? ur revenge now fully complete. satisfied?.I hv no issues with u. Iam going to meet my brother and father in next world .they are awaiting for me. It was nice meeting u and sorry that i am responsible for all the problems in ur life earlier.
Be happy now, the person responsible for your sorrow is dying.

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PrinceASRsDhani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Just wow!!!

Seriously chapter 13 and 14 was full of entertainment followed by dramatic sequences. Totally loved Arnav's family it's a one of the heck family. I am glad they made Khushi fit into their family so perfectly. Loved mama Ji, NK, Dhruv!

But I am sure Arnav is going through the pain too. Not only for Khushi but Arnav too I feel bad. I am sure if he hates Khushi then he better have a good reason for that. Why do I think Khushi is actually pregnant?

And what did I hear? You will reveal the truth go for it babes I am patiently waiting for it. You have written each and every chapter fantastically seriously I am out of words. And lol you want me to write an essay on how much I love this story sure babes. I will sit in my free time and right that for you.

But to be honest it's a fantastic FF. I loved it. Can't wait to read further. Keep rocking!

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NidhiAS.Raizada

@NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Hello beautiful butterfly's,

How you all are doing?

I don't want to say much today seriously! 😛 Actually I have to say much more than I have too.

No expectations. I had stopped expecting just long time ago, but yes its just a little request!

First of all my sweet silent readers, please come out of the protective shell and Hit the like button and Comment, even though its just a one word! Most of you requested like million times please reveal the truth and it has been 15 chapters already but what about I still have chapters that have below 67 likes and comments are far away thing only 62 pages yet?

Is my story that crap?

Tell me kindly to stop writing! If it's not worth wasting your precious time and my useless time and I will I am sorry if I am rude. But I seriously don't want to waste your precious time.

To be perfectly honest there is no ounce of lie I would say, You guys have no idea how much time I spend sitting in front of my computer writing chapters, I keep my account always opened to check your lovely comments so please tell me how am I doing? I comment back on most of your post so do check them.

Despite of spending 12 hours in uni, I still write even if I don't have time to sleep, to eat, to even do my own H.W.

But please lovely ladies don't be mad but you know how it feels. Its hard to believe that but I am a human too. I am extremely sorry from bottom of my heart if I hurt your guys feeling. I am sorry to my beautiful readers whom if I have said something wrong.

But I am extremely thank full to my beautiful lovely ladies who always press like, comment on my work. AND LADIES KNOW WHO THEY ARE! 😊 I am not saying you should always comment but there are girls who always comments no matter what and to be honest I have remembered their name on top of my mind. I know sometimes you can't because you are busy. But if you are reading the story then please press like and comment. And please always comment on the chapters. As a author, I know what I am doing I am also aware that you guys want to know the truth. If I said I will it means I WILL!

No offence. From next update that is revelation part.,I won't update the next chapter until I have 10 pages comment and as much as likes you could hit! I know I am just adat se majboor, I will post it just for the kind readers, but do consider my words!
About the next update!
Next update is pretty much like 20 pages long so I won't post it in one day!

Till then have fun, stay safe!

P.S THIS NOTE IS NOT FOR THE LADIES WHO ALWAYS COMMENT SO THEY COULD IGNORE IT! AND YES I KNOW YOU GUYS I CAN ACTUALLY WRITE A FULL LIST OF YOUR NAMES! 😆

Edited by naksh2227 - 11 years ago

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IDatIF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

Hey I always comment on this story as I like reading it .

You r a doing an amazing job

Countinue soon

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NidhiAS.Raizada

@NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: IDatIF
Hey I always comment on this story as I like reading it .

You r a doing an amazing job

Countinue soon

I know dear you always comment! But update when I will be done finishing writing the chapter and editing it!

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Hey...don't get disheartened dear... its a lovely n gripping story...n im sure many readers will like n comment... please keep up ur great work...

waiting for truth to be revealed...

Edited by jyothim78 - 11 years ago

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

am always here 😃

really doing an awesome job

please keep writing

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shelley_45

@shelley_45

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Aww sweety ur writing is full of talent. Don't let it get u down. Can't wait for u to continue!!!

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PrinceASRsDhani

@PrinceASRsDhani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#420

Oh my baby! You are giving your best job! I always press like...oops even my signature says I am a silent reader.
But I have made this account only for you so I will comment too. But don't stop writing! I am waiting for your next update! 😃

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