Arhi OS: Broken Part 2 Pg11 2/9 (complete)

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ananya dat was a really sad one u knw i never in my dreams thought of something lyk dis would ever take place i mean arnav having relationship is ok but using khushi and accusing her only is smthng i dnt expect and u made it believe me mannn the way u worte was awesome dere were feeling wich only hurted khushi she loved her bestfriend and he used her

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cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Barun_Gf
ananya dat was a really sad one u knw i never in my dreams thought of something lyk dis would ever take place i mean arnav having relationship is ok but using khushi and accusing her only is smthng i dnt expect and u made it believe me mannn the way u worte was awesome dere were feeling wich only hurted khushi she loved her bestfriend and he used her

well, i might sound rude right now but only a person who has gone through this wud understand how it feels! the same way there r memories of me and my best frnd which i can never forget!

it was difficult to remember all those times when he would come to meet me early in the morning on a cycle while he stays a good 8 kms away from my house. all those times when we had hidden ouselves in different places in the house to talk to each other. all those times when he had cried in front of me or i had broken down in front of him. all those times when my teachers used to get fed up with us because we were inseperable. all those times we would openly fight in front of the class and i wud make sure he said sorry to me.

yes, he tried, alot of times, he tried to talk to me, get my attention but i just couldnt get it in me to even look at him. why? because it always reminded me of that time when he had said that i would forgive him no matter what, because i have a soft corner for him! i feel used and betrayed!

he did exactly what he had suggested the other guy...been friendly with me, made me laugh, made me fall for him and then left me in the middle of nowhere. yet, yet i am the bitch and the wh**e who no one should talk to because i was wrong all along

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1

well, i might sound rude right now but only a person who has gone through this wud understand how it feels! the same way there r memories of me and my best frnd which i can never forget!

it was difficult to remember all those times when he would come to meet me early in the morning on a cycle while he stays a good 8 kms away from my house. all those times when we had hidden ouselves in different places in the house to talk to each other. all those times when he had cried in front of me or i had broken down in front of him. all those times when my teachers used to get fed up with us because we were inseperable. all those times we would openly fight in front of the class and i wud make sure he said sorry to me.

yes, he tried, alot of times, he tried to talk to me, get my attention but i just couldnt get it in me to even look at him. why? because it always reminded me of that time when he had said that i would forgive him no matter what, because i have a soft corner for him! i feel used and betrayed!

he did exactly what he had suggested the other guy...been friendly with me, made me laugh, made me fall for him and then left me in the middle of nowhere. yet, yet i am the bitch and the wh**e who no one should talk to because i was wrong all along

girl i m nt stating u wrng i knw how it feels to be used bcz i myself have experienced it and till nw dat boy tries to talk it me nw who dont bother reply to him
and dat boy is just bas***d who does not have shame using frndshp and accusing u hee my point was for arshi i knw its ur real story bt my galf reply was according to the story

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nlr_nlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

An emotional OS...charred lines !

Thank you for the PM,

Nlr

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0082016nit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

God..it's so emotional
feeels so real
i liked khushi's character...arnav...grrr
write part two yr...arnav's realization...pretty please...
thnx for pm...
try to write next part...stay beautiful

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nannav
God..it's so emotional
feeels so real
i liked khushi's character...arnav...grrr
write part two yr...arnav's realization...pretty please...
thnx for pm...
try to write next part...stay beautiful

well yes, this is real!

this is about me and my best friend, like i mentioned about it in the note!

and im so sorry i cant write a part 2 for it!

as much as i wish things would turn in my favour, it never will!

so theres no part 2!

sorry di!😭

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Note:

Hi everyone. Firstly, I would like to thank each and every one of you for reading and liking what I wrote.🤗 I had not expected such a great response so it has come as a surprise to me.😊

Now, alot of you have asked me to continue this os and add another part to it, some have asked me to show what happens next while others have asked me to show Arnav's repentance for his actions and words.

So here I am with a note apologizing to each and every one of you who asked for a continuation. Like I mentioned before the chapter that this is a true story, my story, my past and there is only this much I could give to you. As much as I want the tables to turn in my favour and have a good end to it, I cant, because this is the only end to our friendship.

Even if today, my so-called-best friend would come grieving to me asking for forgiveness I would not accept it, why? Because I am hurt as well, because my feelings were never important to him, because he is too selfish to think about anyone but himself and because I have been taken for granted, time and again. If I do also add a part 2 to it, there is still not going to be a happy ending and this story is from Khushi's(my) point of view, so there is no way I am showing Arnav(my best friend) repenting for his actions.

Again, I am very sorry but there is no part 2 for this os and I would be really grateful if you dont ask for it.

Thank You.