Virman SS: I will make u my again one day - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago
HI friends I am so happy looking like and comment from all of u

I am updating and next part will be after 20 jan 2014 as I all ready inform all that on 22nd dec I am getting married so I can't able to update and I can't able to give any comment to u r story but send me u r story pm I will check the pm if I am free that time or I will after 20 jan 2014 I will able to read u r story pm but pls don't stop to send me u r pm

And coming to update



Part 14


M : Pls don't kill pls help pls save she continuous saying this in unconscious state

All vadhera family are unable to know why she saying liking this continuously what happen to her every one thinking in there mind

Arjun sit near manvi holding her hand and tear his eye and try clam her and in btwn he call doctor also and all are waiting for doctor and other jeevika hold her hand she can't able hold her tear seeing her dear sister in bad condition and virat he can't able see his love like this he sit near leg and rubing her feet and try to hide his tear from Arjun because Arjun didn't know that this manvi family and he is manvi husband

A : Relax mannu nothing be happen to u I am hear only near u

J : while tear eye mannu and keep her one hand in manvi head and wiping manvi sweats and one hand hold tightly to manvi hand

Vn : Jeevika relax nothing happen to manvi

J : But viren ji

A : mannu my beta pls pls relax u know I can't able to see in pain pls relax

M : Pls save pls save don't don't do this don't kill pls save she still contentiously saying same thing in unconscious state

V : In mind what to u why u saying like this u is trying to kill to whom to u then why somebody want to kill u pls pls manvi pls manvi I am scaring to see like this I don't want to loose again I promise I will protect to u but pls pls I want to know happen to u I will not live that person u is trying to harm but pls recognize me come to life again pls I know I know I only one person who give u a lot pain that reason u r in this condition because of me If I trust u if I don't through out from this house then this couldn't happen but know looking like this u I feel more guilt

Looking manvi Ansh and Sia start cry so Vm and sb take them in there room

Ansh : Dadi what happen to my girl friend why she sleeping like this why moma and papa and chachu all family crying

Vm : Nothing happen to her seeing will fine soon

Sia : But dadi what happen best friend

Sb : Nothing beat she not feeling wear so she sleeping

Ansh : So I want stay with her

Sia : I also want to with her pls take me near her

Ansh : And me also take near her

Sb : No not know see all are there near her and she need rest u want na that manvi feel better

Ansh And Sia : nod there head and say yes

Vm : then she need rest

Ansh : but I will not disturb her I will just sit near her

Sia : ha dadi she need us na

Sb : If get to know because of her u both not sleep so fill bad u want to should feel bad

Ansh And Sia : NO

Vm : Then eat u r dinner and sleep and tomorrow u both go to meet her

Ansh and Sia : ok


In mean time doctor came and check her

V : what happen doctor she is fine little panic and worry tone

J : say doctor she ok na

Doctor : She have fever I have given injection I hope her fever come down soon

A : how much time take her fever down

Doctor : Arjun beta she again got fear ( Doctor know Arjun family he is manvi doctor and he also come in Chandigarh for Arjun engagement which after 3 day)

A : yes Doctor

Doctor : Arjun she need rest u take her home

Vn : Know doctor how can I allow them this time and this condition

A : thanks viren but we don't want to disturb to u and u r family because of me and my sister

D : Arjun beta why u saying like this we don't have any problem u can stay hear

Arjun : But

V : In angry tone why u can understand she her condition
I am not allowing manvi to take away do u understand

A : Arjun is shock when he see virat like this

Vn : Looking virat and Arjun viren came btwn and tell yes virat is right we feel bad if any thing to her because she know our house and all this happen to her try to understand

J : Pls Arjun understand I made her sister and there not any problem

A : said ok and call his parent and inform manvi health first they scare and want to come there but arjun say he is with her

Virat , Viren , jeevika ,and Arjun sit near manvi and all elder in there room and sleep is far away from there eye

And virika room

Sometime arjun ,sometime jeevika , some viren , and sometime virat keeping wet clothes manvi head to get
down her fever soon

And manvi is still say same again again that don't kill save know don't

Finish


I know this short update and I really don't know this good or bad update if u like pls press button and u r comment and silent read pls u also press like button and next update after 20 jan 2014







Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
kokubaba thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊 it s noice...will be waitng for ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm wrk dear...full of emotions update...
Really feel bad for manvi...
She suffer alot...wt who want to kill her? ???
Egrly waiting for her revealation of her past...wt happened wd her? ???
Wowww love virat care for manvi...
Arjun is sooo caring brother...
Ansh and sia part wsd also suprb...
Egrly waiting for jan...
Try to update it dear...
We really going to miss ur wtk till January...

But its for good ...
Really happy for you...
Wishing you again veryyy happpoyyy married life...dear...
Enjoy this time and also this special faces of life...
Its beautiful days...which u going to remember ur whole life...sooo much na...
Best wishes dear yo u again...
Bye...take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanx 4 PM😊
Syed695 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Update..!! so theres a mystery to er memory loss.Waiting for it to unfold..Thanks for the PM!
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
like it
too good
thanks for pm
good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm ...The mystery regarding Manvi's health is really increasing waiting for the next update now..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow !!
That's a very good news
Congratulations !!
Wish you a happy married life !
Enjoy !

But I'll miss your updates !
This was a beautifully written one!
I don't want sad mannu 😭
How virat was feeling bad for her ...how he tried to hide his tears ...how he couldn't let her go n shouted !
Very nice 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...

Congrats n all the best for ur new
👏 ⭐️ 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
what happened to manvi
reveal the suspence soon
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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