TISHNAGI - RTMC FF LAST PART updated on Page-88 (21-9-2014) - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update...well written
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i feel so sorry for veer...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry late comment karne ke liye
this part was superb...
veer ne ananya ko slap kiya wow
rain scene its lovely
i wish jaldi sb thik ho jaaye😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

A very happy diwali to all of u 😃 n richa dear Im soo sorry 4 my long absense due to my exam preparations .

superbbb update with lot of emotional scens 👏 👏 👏
now im feeling really bad 4 veer...poor boy 😭 😭 😭
hope he wll win her heart one day n wll get his happiness back 😊
bt ananya dis doing now too much...widout knowing anything properly she is making der life misrable...please make her realize very soon n fall in love wid veer 😃 😃😃
u knw dat im vry much waiting to see d romantic n passionate scene between d coupl 😛 😛 😛
one thing here, i dont lik anu's behaviour towards her MIL...atleast she shud show sum respect towards her ...she is only person in d family who accepted her as her DIL n a member of d family
bt bt bt dat rudr...ufff dis guy has gone to enjoy d honeymoon with his wife after making someone pregnant 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
so anu's reaction is vry natural
just love dream of veer in rain ...make his dream a reality plzzz 😉 😉 😉
bt whn will rudr's true colur get revealed in front of his family...desperately waiting 4 dat moment
mindblowing part dear 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
waiting eagerly 4 d next 😃
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PART - 14


ANANAYA's condition is worst then ever. Her high fever in such a delicate condition will directly effects her pregnancy. Veer and Sakshi both were scared of both baby and Ananaya. She needs extra care. This night is gonna be prove more difficult for Veer then ever. She is shivring in fever and almost unconcious. Sakshi help Veer but later on he will send his mother for rest. She wont want to leave but then she decided to leave.

Veer take care of her alone. He rubbed her hands to comfort her and put cold water drenched cloth on her forehead. Though doc gave her injection still night is so long. Veer wont sleep for a sec. He sit next to her head and cared her. In between his lids turn heavy several times and head falls but he wont allowed himself to grab atleast few moments of sleep.


Veer went to washroom and splashed water on his eyes to make himself awake. Ananya's moanings disturbs him. Though she is not concious but due to fever she even wont able to slept peacefully. Whole night both were disturbed. At 4am finally medicines work and she able to sleep. Veer massaged her head with lighten fingers. Ananya tossed and slept on his hand. She was sleeping after a long restless night. Veer doesnt want to disturb her so he let her sleep without removing his hand. His posture is fixed with her. At 6 am his mother knocked and entred inside.

'Veer how is she...?' she wont even complete and Veer make her quite with his signal.

'Pls mom speak slowly. Abi soi hai badi mushkil se. Or else whole night she only weltering due to body ache.' Veer whispered to his mom.

'ok you need anything? Waise Ananaya k liye main breakfast khud bna rai hu. Usko kafi weakness aa gai hai.' Sakshi asked softly.


'no mom i wont need anything aap iske liye bana do.' Veer glancing her and then to his mother.


Sakshi leave and she slept for next 1 hour and then open her eyes slowly slowly. First her dizzy eyes catch the glimpse of Veer. Veer is staring her. Both's eyes met. His eyes gleamed. The spark of his intoxic eyes stole her breath. For the first time she feels him so near. Her body is very weak and she wont able to move properly. Next she feels the warmth of his hand underneath her cheek. The way her long lashes leaned told him her uneasyness. Veer quickly replaced his hand but carefully.


'Howz you feeling now?' Veer is concerned only for her health. Though he read her embaressment but he avoid it completely to make her normal.


Ananya was completely silent. Neither she yelled nor she spoke any word. She was deeply boyred in her thoughts. Meanwhile Veer's mother came again for her. She brought with a try having breakfast for her.

'Ananaya pls have some meal. Because of this feaver your body turn very weak and in this condition it will badly effects on both of you.' Sakshi's tone is polie and pleading at the same time. She is douted about her reaction. She sat near her,taking a bowl of soup in her hands. She filled the spoon and raise towards her mouth.

Ananaya glance her in a shock. Actualy she liked being pampered but not want to take any favours from this family. She was an orphan so she made herself indipendent. But in this she turned rude,loosing her all innocence. She wont like sympthy and care for herself in any other eyes. It gave her a feel of insult to her.

Rudr was the first person who touched her heart and soul. She allowed him to play with her emotions. And when he betrayed her,the remaining softness is died in her. She become more rude then before. Now she wont care anyone else. Its only a revenge for what she came here. She wants to ruined everyone in this house.

Now when she hate all so much then how will she take favour from anyone here. Ananaya take a bowl from her with her shiviring hands. Sakshi gave her but right she aint in a condition of taking her meal at own. Sakshi leave and Ananaya trying to sip it but hardly her arm moved. She was on the edge of pouring her soup on herself,when Veer clenched the bowl on right moment.

Veer take bowl from her limp hands and sat infront of her. He scooped and trying to feed her. She was hesitating taking his help. Her mind is snaping back.

'Dekho main koi favour nai kar raha hu. Is baat ka humare relation pe koi asar nai padega. You are free to scold me or yelled on me like ever. Right now your body is so weak and limp so pls adjust this time.' veer knows her. The feel of taking help from her enemy is killing her. Which clearly shows on her pale face.

In only one night she turned very weak. Next 7 days Veer take very good care of her every need. Though she wouldnt like his presence but in past 7 days no choice is left. She needs him for her every single need. Her mind and heart now irritating her. His care disturbs her more.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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PART - 15

SUN dawn and its rays shine the whole room of Veer and Ananaya. Today Veer take an off from his office,because of Ananaya's health. Quitely she was recovring from feaver but vomiting session wont allowed her to live in peace. Her feaver plus her morning sickness make her turned insane. She wont even have any control left on herself. Her body is weak and burning like a lava. Veer going mad too with her condition. He scared for both's safty.

He even appoint a permanent nurse for her still he stay at home to take care of her. Ananaya felt bored on a bed. Fortunately her childhood friend came to meet her. Disha was with her in school days and now she is seeing her alomost aftr 7 years. Disha actualy came to congratulate her on her marriage with Veer,coz she is Ananaya's best friend and Veer's best friend's Fiancee too. Disha was engaged with Aarush. Both came and get to know that she is not well. Both felt bad. Veer and Aarush leave two girls alone and to cherish their own old time.

Disha hugged her and both chit chat for hours. She was so happy as her own best friend is get married to Veer,her husband's best friend. But Ananaya looke gloomed whenever she show ecitement for thier marriage. Now she too get suspecious and confront Ananaya strongly. Ananya broked and told her the whole truth. She wont able to believe on this whole mess.

'are you crazy Ananaya? How can you think so low about Veer?' she asked strongly.

'because he worth it. He only deserves my hatred.'Ananya inhaled sharp and snap back.

'no Ananya you are completly wrong. I know him and he is not like the way you describe him. Veer aisa kuchh kar skta hai main maan hi nahi skti. I agree wo naughty hai or ho skta hai rage me usne tujhe kiss kia hoga. Wo main maan skti hu. But he never stoop as low as you told me.' Disha arguing. She wont believe on her words.

'tu meri best friend hai ya Veer ki?'Anaya doesnt like her attitude.

'teri. Tabi bol rai hu apne hi hatho apna ghar barbad ma kar. Veer loves you. Saaf dikhta hai uski aankho. Jab hum log enter hue usi time maine dekha. Jaise wo tujhe dekhta hai,it will shows everything.' Disha trying to clear her mind for him.

'it was his lust not love.' she retorted in hard way.

'ok fine to almost 1 mahina ho gaya hai tum dono ki shadi. Kini koshish ki hai Veer ne apni Lust fulfill karne k liye? Ab to uske pas hai wo jab chahe jo chahe kar skta hai. Even he can do the same thing on that day only if he really wants to do with you. If he is intrested in using you then he will never ever leave the party for his mere worker. Think about it Ananaya.' disha showing her the reality,clearing her rage towards him. Ananya turn mute founding no ans to her question.

'ok fine tujhe proof dekhna hai to khud dekh le.'When she dont found appropriatereason she decided to show a cd of that unfateful day.

CD plays and Disha saw it very carefully. 'dek liya ya ab bhi doubt hai. Ye Jacket Veer ka hi hai na?' Ananaya trying to prove her point.

'you are again wrong Ananaya. I agree ye jacket Veer ka hai par CD me Veer ka face to kahi show nahi ho raha. Drinks spike karne wala ka sirf hath dikh raha hai. Or tujhe shayad pata nahi hai ye hath Veer ka nahi hai.' Dish notied something and pointed it on screen by pausing the CD. 'see ye jiska b hand hai wo bilkul khali hai. Jabki Veer k right hand me 3 rings pehni hui. Veer ki mom in cheezo me believe karti hai isliye use bahar bhejne se pehle unhone wo 3 rings use pehnai thi for his saftey sake. And i guess in this one moth tume ye to samjh aa hi gaya hoga ki Veer apne mom ki kisi baat ko mana nahi karta. Isliye aaj tak usne ye sari rings pehni hui hai. Chaho to aaj check kar lena. Wo ye rings kabhi nahi utarta chahe kuchh b ho jaye.' Disha have all the points to make her all proofs wrong and indeed she had done it.

Now Ananaya was completely muted by her own friend. Her biggest proof against him is betrayed her. She prooves wrong in all senses.

'Ananaya abi b time hai. Kabi kabi har insan galti karta hai. Par iska ye matlab nahi ki wo insaan ghatia hai ya humesh kuchh galat hi karega. Veer ko samjhne ki koshish karo. Shyad tumhare aankho pe jo ye nafrat ki patti bandi hai wo utar jaye. ' Disha said while moving towards the main door.

Encounter with her shaked her badly. The facts she told about Veer is trashed her believes. Now Ananaya get more confused. Veer came to see her the moment Disha left the mansion with her fiancee Aarush. Ananya not gettin desperate to watch his hand. As he came near her She grabbed his hand and scanned it from both sides. Disha was right Veer's hand is very different from the hand showed.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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PRECAP - ANANYA INVISTIGATE MORE ABOUT AND RUDR CAME BACK FROM HONEYMOON AND ONE MORE TWIST.
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😊 Thanx Sweety

Originally posted by: rtmclover

<font color="#ff00ff" size="6" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">sorry 4 being late again


</div>intersting update
so veer is the main culprit 😲...he sent dat drinks to anu😡
wat was his intention????? vry cunning he is..
now ananya is ready to take revenge on veer 😲😲
i think she wll make his life hell after marraige😆😆😆
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veer also agreed her proposal immediately 😊😊

im very happy dat veer married dat will happen after dat 😲😲😲

veer's father got angry ...its quite natural as he expected prachi to b his daughter-in -law

now the war begins👍🏼Veer vs Ananya

lets see who wins at the end😉😉

im eagerly waiting to see how wll ananya take her revenge😃

grt going 👏👏👏

desperately waitinggg 4 d nxt 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
😊 Thanx Sweety

Originally posted by: Geethanda87

<font color="#FF0066" size="2">thank u so so much dear long wala update dene ki liye...
nice update... veer ki mom bahut understanding hai...
par poor veer mirchi khani padh gayi...
i can understand ananya situation wo aayi badla lene ko hai veer se kyunki drinks to veer ne bheji thi jiski wajah se ye itna sb kuch ho gaya pr mujhe lagta hai veer ki kya galati hai drinks to rudr ne pi thi or ananya apne pyar ki wajah se behaki thi na ki veer ki drinks ki wajah se agr wo chahti to rudr ko rok sakti thi par usne aisa nai kiya... sara ilzam veer par daal diya
anyways plz ye clear kar do veer ne wo drinks srf ananya ka majak banane ke liye kiya tha ya koi or wajah hai... i m waiting nxt update 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimaan

Veer love Anu?i knew it.veer told the truth to his mom.its gud.bt what Anu is doing is nt r8.why is she behaving rudly with his mom?nd i think Aditya's brother made that drink nd put blame on Veer.next ud jaldi de

you mean Adhiraj did it?

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