Arshi SS: Honeymoon In The Haunted Mansion *Completed* - Page 3

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

awesome start yaar,,,continue...
i am remebering one of the hollywood movie...wow excites

Originally posted by: *Sanz*

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Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

fabulous start

loved it

plz update soon

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

Originally posted by: LuvArnavKhushi

woah! ok the last few lines totally creeped me out! This is so interesting!

One suggestion if you don't mind! Can you space out your paragraphs? It's just hard for to read it like this cause I end up skipping over a line and then having to go back. That's all.

Thanks so much for this! Looking forward to the next part! 😃

Originally posted by: skmr.bs

This is going to be fun for sure the concept is really fifferent and new.

Originally posted by: chavvi16

hope not too spooky or i will have to stop
not a fan of horror you see
what who goes to haunted villa and such places on HM
well who else but our arhi
so nk is tour guide is he
seems interesting the start anyway
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: Arshi-Nikita123

OMG !! I loved it dear.

I'm already so much in love with spooky stuff..

and when my first fav thats ARSHI is combined with ma second fav thats HORROR , it sounds Ammmaaazzeeennngg !!

Would love to read more.

Really interesting.

A big thanx for the PM 😃

Originally posted by: Nandz

A great start!!

This seems so interesting!!! An arnav khushi horror story!!!

Would like to read more!!