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omg meenu u r an awesome writer dear...never knew that..i have missed it earlier :(...too good,loved the story line...written beautifully...
starting from the characters which u have chosen all r superb :)...i loved dadi ji...she is really sweet personality ...:)
must say u r having very strong grip on the story and ur writing...penned down excellently...wow
earlier i though mama is positive and rest r not...but after reading all...came to know that he is the culprit and so do his son...some how mami is looking positive now :)
loved arnav and khushi...jhalli rani hahaha true and laad governer hyeee woh tu hay hee :)
i am actually enjoying the way khushi speaks in her mother tongue and the way arnav smirks as he knew it too ...that is fun...meenu i am really impressed by ur writing style dear...now hopefully be regular always..:)
meenu when arnav came to know abt khushi's name did he thought for a sec that mayb she is his khushi???
Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin
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