Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 36

What was that Avantika. Was this The Arjun Rawte.😲 I felt like my eyes popped out for a sec. hearing this "Hey my Princess" from him. There is sum thing really different in Goa's air.😳Oh my knight in shining armour..Agar Ro nai hoti Arjun ki life mein to...You got it right?😉

This Suzy Lobo is very smart enough even in her drunkard state. I wonder why did she gave him 2couple passes for the ball.**Thinking**

I will have to compliment you for the conversation that you have penned down. It was bang on & to be precise whenever there is a conversation between the characters in any of your FFs ,i feel like its just being played right in front of my eyes.

BTW Sameer &Aisha Ki love story mein this coffee is definitely gonna play a major role.😉😛

Rathod aur main ja rahe hai.😲😲This choked me out for a fraction of sec. Thank god Sameer Rathod cleared the confusion here warna Aisha aur Ro ka kya hota.**Relieved expression**So its Arjun-Liza going at the ball. Poor soul. Hope she is not burnt under his hot glares. Precap se kuch aur hi lagta hai.☺️☺️

So Aisha is aware of Ro's presence at the ball. I m seriously worried for her who will have to bear the accusing glances from Arjun &Ro both but m still hoping that at least Ro understands her intention &doesn't apart from her coz Arjun's anger is still intact wherein he is still finding it difficult to digest the fact that she kept him in dark about her survival from the unfortunate night which is y he is still finding it difficult to call her by name. Keeping my fingers crossed about the 3s confrontation.

I m glad that Ro does have Karan around her who at least for sum time brings out a genuine smile on her face. He is still to become a confidante of Ro& i m sure he'll soon be one. The chotu conversation was lively😃. Personal bartender. Poor soul has to do many experimentation on being in disguise 😆😆

Once again a vulnerable side of the confident Lady in Red. With every time her being vulnerable it feels that she is loosing her self confident as the guilt inside her is resurfacing every time she remembers her Mr.A. The Rosanna D'costa initially was much more confident than the one now may be after she had a conversation some time back to Aisha about Arjun. So the one thing that is clear is that whatever she did in the past was to save Arjun & in the process lost her dear ones. I hope Arjun understands her once he comes face to face with the truth.

The worst thing about falling for your best friend is the fact that you can't tell them, not wanting to ruin the friendship. So you're basically forced to keep your biggest secret from the one person you can tell any secret to, and that breaks you.

Even though she carries a baggage of guilt & pain of unrequited love but she is lucky to get an unconditional &selfless love from both her fathers. It was thoughtful that Edwin Dcosta cleared all the bases which could have endangered her life.

Finally Ro k dulhe ka naam bata diya tumne.**Relieved Expression** but nooo Mystery still continues.

Brainstorming done

Hey ...

Hello everyone.. back with the next one.. Yeah, it's a bit too early for me, but well, I'm going to make the most of it, while the phase lasts..

Thank you so much for your interesting and chatpata comments.. Loved 'em.. 🤗

I'm a bit pressed for time and hence won't be replying to each one of you in person.. Sorry!

Credit for this one goes to my adorable and sesky BB's (B1, B3, PC, Sambha, Tun) who've been absolute sweethearts and motivated me to write this one faster.. PC darling, I owe you one.. 🤗

And to all of you who've followed me until here.. 😉😆 🤗

@ To all readers who've waited for the moment, Err well.. Let's not get too philosophical.. All I can say is read on..

NOTE!

@ B1, Farheen and all those who've felt that Rosy's vulnerable side has been resurfacing more often recently.. (It's a bit of creative liberty, really) 😛

Nah.. As far as I think, she's always been that way.. Strong, confident but vulnerable and faltering when it comes to her loved ones. Her family's death and Arjun's walkout in the past had shaken her up and just when she was preparing to gather the remaining pieces of her existence, tragedy struck yet again snatching away her last hope. (Which you may have guessed were ArNi being together and her marriage to Yash)

And also then she realised that some of her sacrifices were futile and she anyway ended up on the losing side, she's slowly crumbling..

Like Farheen quoted,

The worst thing about falling for your best friend is the fact that you can't tell them, not wanting to ruin the friendship. So you're basically forced to keep your biggest secret from the one person you can tell any secret to, and that breaks you.

That is exactly what happened in her case and much more.. 😊

@ Few of few who felt that Arjun and Rosy (Or me) were being unfair to Roshni..

I guess you probably haven't figured it out yet or I haven't been able to put it across correctly.

The first Chapter on this thread clearly describes Roshni, Arjun and Ro's POV's..

As far as I think, neither Arjun nor Rosy cheated her.

Also, falling in love and then undoing it is in no one's hands.. SO, I wouldn't blame either of them.

Maybe if Roshni wasn't killed, he would even have moved on with her.. Who knows?! But then again, the story was never about Arjun-Roshni..

Hope that makes sense..

Over to next Page.. 😉

*Edited*

Truly mardala behna. Absolutely brilliant and fantabulous update.

I have looked forward to this moment since the time you mentioned and it was all as you had talked about and more.

I felt as I was standing outside watching each and every scene thru a glass window.

First Karan and Rosy's silent understanding, seriously these two are perfect partners, neither have to speak a word to understand what the other is thinking.

Then Arjun and Liza's arrival at the ball brilliantly done with just the right reaction from Liza as expected but my favorite in this hands down was the way you described Ayesha and Rathore, I knew it from the moment you mentioned them as friends that they would be perfect opposite each other.

I am so glad that Ayesha is starting to understand her feelings towards Rathore and same applies to Rathore, this was so needed before the big storm which I think is coming up soon.

And behna, the song is perfect, glad you used it on them. Makes so much sense.

Phew...Suzy and Arjun, I was scared for a minute, but I should trust you to make sure Arjun never falters, well in a way he couldn't have with Rosy's presence in the room.

Oh if only he knew that his miss A is right there in front of him.

Seriously there connection is phenomenal, there is no way to describe the pull they felt towards each other even in the crowded room.

They both instantly recognized that they may seem stranger but they really aren't

And Rosy's dress was perfectly described too.


So Mario has a very good reason to throw the ball and also to recruit Rosy, he has plans for her as well as his business, which worries me a little but I am sure Rosy will handle that in her own way, just hope things don't blow up in her face.

I have probably babbled in all my excitement, but I am sure you know why I am excited and you understand just exactly what I am trying to say.

I loved every moment of the update up to this point, and I am commenting before I read the PM update..so I am sure I will have more to say to you.

For now, brilliant job behna, you have outdone yourself. Absolutely perfect.👏🤗

Off to read the PM...😛



*Edited yet again*

(After reading the PM update, I am left even more speechless.😉)

I have no words for the moment, will discuss it with you at the first opportunity, but know that I loved it!😊