Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

Haila...awesome
will come back soon with my review
awsome...
Hayee kya update thi yaar
loved a new jealous wala love of Sree Liza
and unknowingly Ro n Karan had their part to play tooo
superb
Ro feeling Arjun's presence was siooo cute yaar
realy wished if it was real
and Arjun too
The precap is damn interesting
wont update long looong updates
continue soon



Thanks so much dear.. 😃

Long long updates haan? Meri hawa nikal jaati hai na.. 😆😆

Coming up right away! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Wow arohi is looking gorgeous(imaging her in that dress)
oh no liza nt again
stop drooling over ur boss as he is someone else private property 😉
get a grip girl
focus on ur specky
karan is dancing wid liza
liza nd her ways to tease shree
bechara ghurne ke alawa kare v to kya
ahaan ahaan arjun nd arohi r able to feel each others presence
arjun agar shriza ki baat maan lete to apne lady love ke darshan v ho jate
pr nhi huh akdu rawte 😡
wese v agar story mein twist or turns na ho thoda tadapna or tadpana na ho to wo story hi kya ri8 😉
hehe
btw i loved it as a whole
thnx 4 such a wonderful update
love u
update soon
❤️



Awww.. Thanks.. I think DD looks fab, always! 😳
Lol.. haan.. Private property toh hai..

bechara Shree.. Nah! he's no less.😆

Haan lekin agar baat maan lete toh aage jo honewala hai woh kaise hota.. 😉😛
Eggjaactly! 👍🏼 Good.. You're catching up.. 😆

Thank you so much.. Glad you like it.. 😳




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Avni di
really sorry for being late
well well wait worth reading update 😳
mera wala song rehta h lol
cocktail ka wo ni to ye sahi 😉
n yes yes its perfecto update
long wala haye
shriza so adorable
aww their bickerings 😆
fb was so too gud
buddhi ke baal first thing cum in my mind too pink ⭐️
bhaiya ki behen ho so...
well its really ro haullication 😲
jb lisa ka ye haal h to baki sb to 👏
i m thinking really why arjun bro married to rosh wen he had so much bonding wid ro
its really impossible wen u love a person so much n getting married to other 😛
super song selection
lovely update
waiting for. more
arro reunion
sikander entry
revenge n all revelations ..
hats off di
for me no update is filler
n boring to bilkul ni ji...



Thanks Payalia..
Well, they both had their own reasons.. Some I've already mentioned while some are yet to be revealed..

Accha ji.. toh which means I can prolong their first meet, right?! 😛😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome as always

hotwa ka itna hot description dogi toh paap lagega...😉

Paap lagega?! 🤣 I've already booked myself a place in hell, B3.. 😉

loved Liza and Shree's nhok jhok and also their J waala love...dance karke love ko initiate kar rahe hai hai, huh?

and Karan and Ro were assisting them...😆

Yup! Dancewala love.. 😉😆 Takrar to Pyaar.. love formula, u see.. aap hi se seekh rahi hoon, behna.. 😉


Ro's dream was beautiful..waiting for that to come true...
Poor Arjun, he always keeps remembering Ro and searches for her among the stars while she is right there so close to him..
I am wondering how he will take it when he knows the truth

Thanks B3.. I loved writing that bit.. He's going to be really angry for sure, but love makes u do unpredictable things.. They're both going to learn that lesson very soon.. 😉

song was apt!
Aisha and Arjun ke ek VM bhi yaadh aagaya...😉

Maine bhi dekha.. 😎 It's awesome!


precap is very interesting!

cont soon!



Thank you.. More coming up! Btw, Karan wala part nahi likh paayi.. (Holds ears)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_



<font color="#990000">Thanks Payalia..
Well, they both had their own reasons.. Some I've already mentioned while some are yet to be revealed..

Accha ji.. toh which means I can prolong their first meet, right?! 😛😆</font>


right di 😉
maja aayega 😛
update kal honewali thi 😡
aj itna late kyun 😆
waiting
ahaan

if i slept off
gustakhi maaf ho 😳
waiting
undercover mission ..
yay..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Rosanna in highlights, she must have looked really pretty coz she's herself satisfied with the looks.The flashbacks of the pink hair and Arjun's comment..Lolz
"the witch in broomstick" he was laughing seeing her since he entered the house. 😛
Oops..he too got back his share..thats why one shouldn't wake up the Tigress that too Miss A. *wink wink*
^_^
Hotwa~in Black!! he's gonna be the end of me someday. *Hotness Personified*
Liza too olging at him.Can't blame her, she seems to have developed a tiny winy crush on her senior officer.But she has got little bit more space in her heart for her childhood enemy.
*sigh* they are never gonna change.Always hiding their feelings and keep fighting n bickering::But nothing misses the hotwa's eyes.He seems to have realised their feelings.Also Ro did it.She saw their feelings reflecting in their eyes.Liza & Shree at last ended up dancing with eachother.
We get to see the glimpse of the carefree and happy Arohi..even Karan saw it.Well Karan, you seem to have come to understand Ro's unsaid words too.Now just help her out..yea right!!
She was daydreaming.Gosh, I felt as if it was all real ~only if it was~
Eventhough it was just a dream, her heart won over her mind & she gave to her heart's content.She wants to remake the mistake, give up everything and jus embrace him.She still has a hope in the corner of her heart. Arjun too felt her presence so close to himself.He's remembering her and praying for her.
Only if he knew she alive & just few feets away from him then things would be totally different.But it isn't so easy.They still have a long way to go through.
It was a brilliant update.
The fbs and Mr. & Miss A's feelings were beautifully expressed.
Loved the entire chapter.
And looking forward to further updates.
Keep PMing me:)
Love ya..<3



Thank you soo much! 🤗

I loved reading your analysis..
Yes, Liza does seem to have a crush on him.. Wait and watch.. Crush ko kaise crush kar dega Hotwa SYS se.. 😆😉

Rosy wants to get back with him.. But nah.. it isnt that easy for her and she knows it.. More in the next one..

Maybe they have a long way to go.. but considering their bittersweet relationship, pata nahi kya ho..

Keep reading! More coming up.. ❤️


Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Pheww!!
Done with the comment.
Bak-bak sunkar bore ho gayi kya??



Nah! 😉
Hum bore honewalon mein se nahi, karne walon mein se hain.. 😎
Bring it on! 😳
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya09

superb update
fabulous

the flashback scene was sooo sweet
superb 👍🏼 👏



Originally posted by: NainaSM

oyeee hoyee superb mindblowing ...👏... awesome ... plzzz continue soon 👍🏼



Thank you girls! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

I ws sooo badly eagerly waiting for the update of The Lady In Red...and here it comes with a bang...

I have to admit.. Each time I see your post for an update, i really feel bad about not being able to write.. Kya karoon, my job and studies hardly leave me with any spare time.. aur jo milta hai, that goes in Hotwa- drooling! 😉😆

awsm update...
and a pretty long one tooo...
so finally the disguise is on... Oh yeah.. wait and watch for more.. 😉
Karan is now getting to knw the real Rosanna well...yeah..for how long could Rosanna hav fooled him...
ahann..get a grip Liza Babes...the ACP is indeed an epitome of hotness...bt he is ur senior...nd she ws drooling over him...lolzz
and thn on Shree too...oopsie...her SPECKY SEN...
these two will never grow up...they r the perfect human version of Tom-Jerry...
poor Karan...missed the chance at Suzy...
but atleast he tried his luck...but his luck did paid him...he got to dance with the hot chick of ETF...Liza D'Cruz...nd our Techie Wizz...hnmmm going green...

🤣 Liza ki toh aish hai.. 😆😉
********
loved the dreamy trance in which Rosy was...
Arjun and Arohi"s Flashbacks always make me wonder dat wat happnd exactly to this fary tale love story...
my heart goes out to these two true lovers...
they r jst few feets away frm each other..bt still sooo faaarrr...

Thank you.. They both ignored their heart's yearning and did exactly the opposite of what they were supposed to, for whatever reasons.. But that's not it, the present isn't going to be hurdle-free either..

Oopsie.. Kya karoon, I louuve mushkil Prem kahanis.. 😛

Btw, not too far.. 😉
continue soon avantika...
love
Aisha



Thanks so much, Aisha.. I really look fwd to your views on this one.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

**Edited**

Me back to bore you.😛

Bore me?! 😲 Na ji na.. Never! 😳

OK to start with,this update was more of each of the characters inner feelings coming out in one or the other form.
First lemme start with the flashback
Look at the audacity of this guy to say her that she resembled like witches on a flying broomstick.😡Playing with fire will definitely burn your fingers.😆Imagine Arjun with blotches of pink in his black hair.🤣🤣
No matter what her current state is,the past moments with her Mr.A always brings a smile on Miss A.😃

Lol.. yeah.. Arre unko milne toh do, phir Rosy saari yaadein refresh karva degi.. With interest! 😎

Liza still ogling over Arjun. 😆If you give such a description then yahi hoga na. Cant blame Liza for this .Go on Liza darling,none is stopping you from ogling over Arjun.😉But ye kya ogling direction shifted to the biggest enemy.Ranting & cursing each other at its peak with wonderful names.😛Gothic queen🤣🤣

Liza ko karan le gaya aur Specky dekhta hi reh gaya.Kuch kuch hota hai.But he managed to get her back.😛The lyrics around them was apt.

Thank you! 😆

Suzy Lobo is here for some work.To tel you,I pity her alot ,whatever she did,she still loves Mario & its him responsible for her state.(BTW is there any chances k Mario sudhar jaye. I know chances are none but if any.😆😆Oh God!!!I sound like a jodi maker.😲
On a serious note,She is here & the precap..I am super excited & restless both at the same time.

Lol! Nah.. he's waay too evil.. aise evils ki band bajate hain.. no sudhrofying! Oh yeah, she's here to play an imp role.. 😉

Now comes the dream sequence.BL mein Button wala love se abhi tak bahar nai nikli hu aur tumne dream sequence de diya.😳I wonder when this dream will come true.I know that will take time & I am in no hurry for this.It was for the first time that she was just going with the flow.No calculative move or masking her true self.The lyrics was just apt especially the line Mujhe kya parwaah iss duniya ki. It was just her.The carefree,happy going Arohi Gupta,her Mr.A's Miss A but Karan's tapping her brought her in present.It was like she was burning with desire and still keeping mum about it which is the greatest punishment that she was giving it to herself.
But now the secret of her being the one who has a broken heart is out.Hope she speaks her heart out to Karan

Well, to be frank, Buttonwala love ke baad I was lost for a few days.. Coz meri B1 bohot evil hai.. Teasers de deke tadpati hai.. 😆
It will come true.. Very soon, maybe.. err.. 2 updates from now.. shayad.. Not promising.. 😉
Yupp! Two sides of her personailty..
As for her punishing herself, watch out for the next one.. 😉


Lastly about Arjun state,i remember a quote by Nicholas Sparks which says
"I fell in love with her when we were together, then fell deeper in love with her in the years we were apart."

Haila.. Dear John?! 😲 Per..fect! 👏 😳 Darn.. Why didn't I think of that one.. Will use it for sure.. 😉


He was searching her in the stars but in reality she was so close to him.

All in all nothing for me to brainstorm (**Relieved Expression**)but yes this is needed for the saga to take a turn which will change the dynamics of the 3 individuals.

P.S.:I did play the song in the background while reading this. Dekha i took your threat seriously.😆😆



Lol.. Chalo.. aapki yeh wsish bhi poori kar dete hain.. More brainstorming stuff ahead.. 😉😆

Good Girl! Samjhaye bina hi samajh gayi?! 😆😉 It helped right?!


Thank you so much Darling.. You never fail to make me smile.. 😳😃 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
hmare comment ki koi value ni lol 😭


Irony..
Ek hug ni milta
koi ni.. 😃

updatewa h na waiting 😛

Bring it on di...

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