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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all
My very last update of this chap.
I hope i live upto the expec
😊

CHAP 10 (B):

Rey straightly went to Boys Green Room.
He wiped his tears.
He went to swayam.
The team juzz finished their final Rehersals.
Sw:Hey Rey.Everythning ok?
R:H..a..an.Swayam.Sab tk.
Rey faked a smile.
Sw:Tum itni low kyun sound kar re?
R:Aisa.. kuch nai.Im fine..
sw:Pakka?
R:Haan.
Swayam knows that nothing was fine.
He knows Rey was disturbed.
But he wonders wat might had happened.
Taani Was not happy too.
He decided to talk with her after the event.
On the other hand
Taani crying in joy.
She was numb.
She don knw wat to do nex.But his chain of disturbed by a anouncement.

"So The nex Team Gonna Perform is St.Louis."
Talliyan...

She wiped her tears.
She ran to the boys green Room.
she searched Rey.
Everythng was clumpsy.
Swayam came towards her.
Sw:Taani chalo announcement hogai.Jaldi...
T:par bh..ai
Sw:Chalo
she was disappointed.
Soon the team went to the stage.
Everyone took the position.
Taani was alone.
She searched for her bestie.
Soon a Familiar grip was firmly placed on her waist.
Taani gasped.
She turned n luked at her bestie.
He luked at her.
Both lost in their beautiful eyes.


Song Stared
Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Thinking about the lovin making
And life sharing come and feel me
How feel me
(Boys Started Dancing wereas Girls juzz shaking their legs)
Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on feel me
Come on heal me..

Hua jo tubhi mera mera
Tera jo ikraar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
(Girls stared to go round boys n hummed the song)

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
(REY WITH FULL PASSION SINGED WEREAS TAANI WAS IN DILEMMA)
Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Waise to mann mera, pehli bhi raaton mein
Aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne sanjonta tha
(Boys made Line n girls too)
Pehle bhi dhadkan ye, dhun koi gaati thi
Par ab jo hota hai woh, pehle na hota tha
(They seperated)
Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is baar hua
To kyun na main bhi, keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
(Soon Girls Coming towards them)
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Aankhon se choo lun ke bahein tarasti hain
Dil ne pukara hai haan, ab to chale aao
Aaoge shabnam ki boonde barasti hain
Mausam ishara hai haan, ab to chale aao
(Boys lifted girls)
REY N TAANI BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHERS PROXIMITY
Baahon mein dhalein, baahein.. Baahein..
Baahon ka jaise haar hua
Haa manaa maine mana mana
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
(GIRLS SING WITH FULL JOY)
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me


Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Thinking about the lovin making
And life sharing come and feel me
How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on feel me
Come on heal me...

(REY LOST IN TAANI'S EYES
CARVING FOR ANSWERS)



Everyone clapped n the Screen went down.
Rey immediately left her.
Taani was taken back.
He went n Stood near Swayam.
RPov:
I cnt take tis.
Me Bujju ki saath itni closely kese nach sakthi hun
.Vo tho kisi aur se pyaar karthi he
.Muje koi haq bhi nai
.Par me kyun aisi?
Usse dur jane se itna dard kyun hore.
Kyun Bujju MUJSE PYAAR NAI KARTHI.kyun?
Nai..
Me uski life ki taklif nai bana chathi hun.
Muje sirf
aur sirf uski Muzkurahat chaiye.
Uski liye mein kuch bhi kar sakthi hun.
Shayad tum mujse pyaar karo ya na karo
Lekin Mein Sirf r sirf tumse pyaar karthi hun.
Aur hamesha kartha rahunga.

TPOV:
Kyun Rey?
Kyun meri haath ko chod ke Chali.
Pata he itni khush hun mein?
Muje kuch hore he.
Me khushi se pakal hone vala hun.
Sirf kuch chi pal uski baath me sab kuch batanunga.
He luked at Rey
Rey luked at her too.
LLHH
BGM.
But suddenly Rv came their n hugged.(My dear readers don bash me for tis)
Rey got anger n turned his face.
Taani was shocked.
She worried abt Rey while hugging him.
She can clearly c that he was hell angry.
Rv:wow Taani.u danced so well(while hugging).
Taani pulled back from Hug
T:Thanx RV.

Soon The host reached the stage
H:So Guys that was an awesome performance Ryt?But winner will b only one na.
out of 4 Colleges their is tie in Score for first place.So judges decided that from each team a couple needs to come here.
Out of Two couples which couple get highest score will b the winner
So the first clg who gonna compete for Winning Trophy is
Regents.
Talliyan...
The team was tensed.Gang entwined their fingers hoping for the best.
N nw the second clg who gonna compete with Regents is.
ST.louis.

Everyone was happy n sad at same time.
They need to a copule perform on the spot.
That to without any rehersals.
Soon a couple from Regents went to perform on stage .


Back Stage:
Sw:Guys Ab hum kya kare?
Nil:Couple dance n that too without rehersal.
Sim:How can we?
Ne:Next to imp
As:Ya i felt the same.
Rey n Taani didnt say anything.
Both r Lost in their own world.
Sw:Guys don give.Hum mese koi ek jana he.
Regents couple performed.
H:N nw itz a time for St .Louis.
Sw:Shit guys do something.
Everyone was tensed.
Rey went towards Taani.
R:Lets go.
Everyone was shocked.
T:Par ...Rey?
R:U Trust me na?
Taani lost in his eyes.
Rey forwaded his hand.
Taani luked at him n gripped her hand.

Soon The Light went off.
Rey n Taani standing in the admist of the stage.
Lights focused on them.
Silence all over.
Song Started
Mere bina main rehne laga hoon
Teri hawa mein behne laga hoon
Jaane main kaise tera hua hoon
Mujhe to lagta hai main shayad
Tere dil ki dua hoon haan..

(REY PULLED TAANI.
BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES
HE TWISED HER N BOTH R IN EACH OTHER EMBRACE)

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY CIRCUMLOCATE HER N N TAANI DID A WHOLE ROUND N ENDED IN REY'S CHEST)
Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..


(TAANI LUKED AT REY N LOST IN HIS EYES)
Pehle se zyada main jee raha hoon
Jabse main tere dil se juda hoon
Raahon pe teri main to chala hoon
Tu meri manzil hai
Tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon haan..

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY ENTWINED HIS FINGER WITH HER TAANI STILL LOST IN REYS EYES)

Teri nazar mein nayi si adaa hai
Naya sa nasha bhi ghula hai
Kayi dinon se bandha tha baadal jo
Tere hi baalon mein khula hai..
Teri hadon mein meri basar hai
Ab tujhe bhi jana kidhar hai
Jahan rahe tu main woh jahan hoon
Jise jiye tu main woh sama hoon
Teri wajah se naya naya hoon
Pehle kaha na main
Ab yeh tumse kehne laga hoon haan...
(REY LIFTED HER UP IN AIR WITH ONE HAND N HOLDED HER FOR FEW MINUTES.TAANI CLOSED HEE EYES N ENJOYING IT)

(HE PUT HER DOWN)
Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY MOVED FORWARD TO HER N THEY DID A POSE N FINSHED THE DANCE)


Rey n Taani standing in the admist of the stage.
Lights focused on them.
Silence all over.
Song Started
Mere bina main rehne laga hoon
Teri hawa mein behne laga hoon
Jaane main kaise tera hua hoon
Mujhe to lagta hai main shayad
Tere dil ki dua hoon haan..

(REY PULLED TAANI.
BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES
HE TWISED HER N BOTH R IN EACH OTHER EMBRACE)

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY CIRCUMLOCATE HER N N TAANI DID A WHOLE ROUND N ENDED IN REY'S CHEST)
Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..


(TAANI LUKED AT REY N LOST IN HIS EYES)
Pehle se zyada main jee raha hoon
Jabse main tere dil se juda hoon
Raahon pe teri main to chala hoon
Tu meri manzil hai
Tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon haan..

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY ENTWINED HIS FINGER WITH HER TAANI STILL LOST IN REYS EYES)

Teri nazar mein nayi si adaa hai
Naya sa nasha bhi ghula hai
Kayi dinon se bandha tha baadal jo
Tere hi baalon mein khula hai..
Teri hadon mein meri basar hai
Ab tujhe bhi jana kidhar hai
Jahan rahe tu main woh jahan hoon
Jise jiye tu main woh sama hoon
Teri wajah se naya naya hoon
Pehle kaha na main
Ab yeh tumse kehne laga hoon haan...
(REY LIFTED HER UP IN AIR WITH ONE HAND N HOLDED HER FOR FEW MINUTES.TAANI CLOSED HEE EYES N ENJOYING IT)

(HE PUT HER DOWN)
Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..

Tujhko jo paaya aaha
To jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye
Tham jaaye, bas jaaye
Hum dono ke darmiyaan..
(REY MOVED FORWARD TO HER N THEY DID A POSE N FINSHED THE DANCE)


Clapps was not ended.
Team was totally shocked.
Both came frm Stage.
All:Guys u both Rocked.
Everyone hugged them.

H:N nw itz time for Winning cup.
So the couple who rocked the stage n got the Winning Trophy is


St.Louis...

Team jumped in joy.
N everyone hugging eachother.
Team went to the stage n received their Trophy
Soon everyone came to the college to give the trophy to Vp.
Rey went without Informing them to Rehersal hall.
Taani noticed tis n followed him.
Rey stood in amidst of hall.
He was lost in thoughts.
T:U don say Thanku to me?
Rey was shocked.
He turned.
Taani came towards her.
T:Tumse puch rahi hun.
R:Vo...Vo..Thank u.
T:Hmm.Vese yeha kya kare
R:Bu...s aise h..e
He Tried to leave.
Taani holded his Hands
Rey luked at her.
T:Muje tumse kuch keha he.
R:Ha...an bolo.
T:Mein R Rv R not in Relationship.
Rey was totally shocked.
He cant believe his ears.
He went close to her.
R:B..ujjju. ye
T:Sahi suna.Itz juzz a Prank.He is my frnd thatz it.I love someone else.
Rey who was happy bcame sad.
R:Kon he vo?
T:U
R:(In a happy tone)Watt?
T:Yes.u heard ryt.n nw if u want me r not itz upto u.
She turned to leave but he pulled her.she crashed in his chest.
R:U love... me
Taani placed a kiss in his cheeks.
T:yes i do.Idiot...
Rey pulled her for warm hugg.
R:I Love u bujju.I Love u sooo much
Taani hugged him n burried her face.
but a sudden noise came.
Both pulled back from the hug.

The whole gang witnessed the whole scene.
Everyone Ran towards them n congraluted them.


A Year later.
Taani cleaned the shelf.
A card fall.
She took that n luked.
A familar hands snaked into her waist n burried itz face.
R:Taani chalo na.Muje buk lagre.
But he found Taani was crying.
He got Worried.
R:Taani kya huwa?
Taani turned towards him.
T:Muje tumse kuch keha he Rey.
R:Haaa...n bolo
T:Rey last year tis same day.
me tume propose karna chathi thi.
issiliye me iss greeting card magvaya.
Jab mein batane vale thi tab tum mujse bathaya ki tum kriya se pyaar karthi hun.
me tho toot kai Rey.
Meri dil puri tarase tooot gaya.
Par ussne kisi aur se pyaar kiya.
Tum itni roore thi yaad he?
Muje afsorse hogai.
par uski baat me move on karna chathi thi.
par tu mujse pyaar karna shru kiya.
muje yakeen nai hora he ki.
hamari shaadi hogai he.
ab me bohoth khush hun.
par last valentine day?
me itni taklef ko sehenz nai paya.
Me apni apko blame kiya
apni best frnd se pyaar hotha tho galat thi?
Bohoth saari soch meri maan me thi.
Muje samaj me nai aaya.
She started to cry.
Rey was totally numb.
She luved her from start.
But he told her that she loves some 1
He cupped her face.
N wiped her tears.
R:Ab bol
T:Ky..a?
R:Vahi.tum mujse ek saal phele bolna chathi thi.
Taani amazed by his love.
T:I LOVE U REY.I LOVE UUU SOOO MUCH.
R:I LOVE U TOO.
withthat he placed his lips on her.


Warning:Read at ur own risk
The kiss was full of passion n love.
Taani too responded.
She played with his hair
Rey pulled her more n more towards her
He suked his lips n made as a red.
He bited her lips to enter her mouth
Taani responded too.
He entered her mouth n both the tongues r entangled.
Soon they pulled out due to short of breath.
Taani blushed hard.
Rey lifted her up n headed towards the bed.

FINALLY UNKAHI BATHE KO BATHA DIYA TAANI.


...THE END...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai all!!
Finally im done with ss.
I hope u liked tis.
Plz do like n cmnt for Looonggg update
Im happy n Sad at the same time.
Tis is my First work.
While writing tis i didnt thought u guys like tis much.
Thank u all for my lovely readers.
U guess r Truly amazing.
I never ever thought that i came IF n write a story.
But u guys made tis possible.
Ur comments always motivate me.
I still cherish sme cmnts
"Wanna hug u for tis update"
"My mood was off but after reading ur story im so happy"
"I will chk ur work everyday whether u updated"
"Tis is my fav SS"
"Even sme frnz threatend me for update"
Tis all r my precious memory which i never forget .
Thank u So much frnz.
But im not gng anywhere .
Im here to trouble u more .
So plz do support my works .
Take care.
M Bye all.

😊 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome confessions.. love it
Taarey dance and song selection nice
love u Taarey
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
loved it
dance is nice
TR confession loved it
lovely ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres.
Wow dii...superb update..
Taani wants to tell him that she loved him bt didn't..
Aww...they danced on my fav songs..😃
Their dance sequence was amazing
Loved their confession😳
Oh my god...Taani also told him that she loves him frm d very beginning..😛
Their kiss was so.nice😳
Loved d update
Nd m gonna miss it too..
Edited by monikasaxena05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love it miss this ss
and pleas come with another one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing.
Loved this SS.
Keep writing more. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifull ss...i luved taarey confession.
i'l really miss ur story.
plz plz keep on writtin such awsome stories.
thanx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww romantic and
Cute prt luvly thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome last update their dance n confession awesome , n Taarey married awesome pl do write more

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