Arhi FF Me and My ASR Td 4 Epilogue -129 23/9

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Rami

@Rami92

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

jus read this n was aweed⭐️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

such a beautiful wrk from u once agin😃 😃😃 😃 😃

Wen i read the ttle i was little baffled y not it is me n my arnav 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

y it is me n my asr 😲

but nthng cud be much more suitab fr this stry than this title😃 😃 😃 😃

n again wen i read strting f prologue 😃 😃 😕

i was like so khushi luvs asr😆 😳 😕what abt him😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕😕'n then goes his POV

n was lyk so they luv each othr😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃

WHAT THE hell will be thr prob😕 😕 😕😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

but OMG ur jus too gud 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏👏

t was so best👏 👏 👏👏

lovd the way evrytym khushi luvs ASR in him😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

n geting happy with his sugestion

though at places i felt 😡 😡😡 😡 fr arnv but he is posesiv f her n thts s his charcter

N the way u transformed him😃 😃 😃😃

jus fr a mere wrd khushi utered🤢

he taking up medcation n hcanging was the best blow f the stry🤢 🤢 🤢

khushi trying to be the gud daughter n also nt ditching her luv😃 😉 😉

Chesy proposal by ashok😛

payal wil i be ur payal🤣

omg that guy s crazy😉

La n aman are such gud tom n jery😃 😃😃 😃

Anjum n avinash make a very gud [arents😉 😉 😉 😉😉

n anji n adi are so cutesss😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

what to say🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

am struck up with wrds😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

it was such a guddd strrryyy n i luvd ttt ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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funlovinggal

@funlovinggal

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Hats off to the writer... I jus started reading thus by yesterday evening.. but trust me, I wasn't able to skip even one line n I ended up sleeping at 5am after finishing it till epilogue..
I loved it :) keep writing :)

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Hi there...
Im finally commenting after reading soo many chs...
N i must say i wasnt bored for a minute...
Reading after flat 3 months was awesome...i feel back into form commenting...
Loved all the chs...
Amaizing how u made us visualze his state n regret...
I loved khushis reaction...
It was lovely reading this story...
It is my fav amonst ur ffs...
Ill really miss reading it...^_^

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Just caught up with the missed out updates.. loved the transformation in Arnav and how this story took a turn! Keep writing 😳

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

wow
simply superb ,awesome and fab ff.
just read the whole story in one go.
u r a brilluant writer and writes whole story sooo beautifully that i can't stop reading it till eilogue.
hats off to u
amazing work keep up the good job.
will love to read if u start season2 of this story.
plzzz
plzzz
give it a thought and write season2

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ravalisharma06

@ravalisharma06

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

😊

Edited by ravalisharma06 - 11 years ago

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gauri

@GAURI29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

just read whole story in one go...
In the end toh i was sitting with tissue paper...
Loved the transformtion of asr to arnav...
Beautiful story dear...

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

After u started season 2.. I was really curious how season 1 was.. And it's fabulous!! Totally loved it! ! I'm happy that arnav changed forthe better..Really love the unconditionally love khushi had for arnav.. No matter what he did she will always love him..

And the last scene where we saw ASR coming back Hihi he will never go away.. He's still possessive about her..

Totally loved this story! I'm now very excited for season 2.. Can't wait for it <3

Edited by Sona257 - 11 years ago

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#839

Hi 😊 the way u started the story was awesome 😛 arnav's charcter was very well portrayed in ur story 😊 the only thing I couldn't get into my head was the drastic change in arnav's behaviour in such a short time 😕 but othrwise the story was amazng and beautifully written 😛 looking forward 2 read more stories of urs 😃 please do pm me ur future works 😃

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: divya_divs
Hi 😊 the way u started the story was awesome 😛 arnav's charcter was very well portrayed in ur story 😊 the only thing I couldn't get into my head was the drastic change in arnav's behaviour in such a short time 😕 but othrwise the story was amazng and beautifully written 😛 looking forward 2 read more stories of urs 😃 please do pm me ur future works 😃

Hey thanks for reading.. The change in Arnav had started from the time he had started relationship with Khushi. he was changing for the better.. But he needed that closure from his mom and when KHushi left him he felt the world was totally upside down . He did show his old self to his mother but that one week had made a huge difference in bringing out his inner self.

Edited by harith25 - 11 years ago

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