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Posted: 12 years ago

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hahaha... arrey it's absolutely fine swthrt..
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congo for being 1st priyuu..
par main bhi 1st ayee.. last se.. unique,na?? hahahaha..🤣🤣
luv uu dear..❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 10: a longer update today


Kuch door hamare saath chalo
Hum dil ki kahani keh denge
Samjhein na jise tum aankhon se
Wo baat zubaani keh denge………



RECAP: Armaan was very pleased; he hugged his father, 'thanks papa….aap jaante nahin aapne mere dil se kitna badhaa bojh halka kiya hai."

"Anything for you my son!" Billy patted his son and smiled.


"Accha puttar yeh bataa…..America se aane ke baad kya plan hai tera?" Billy asked


"Abhi itna socha nahin…par koshish karoonga ki kisi automobile industry mein naukri lag jaaye," Armaan said. Armaan was glad his dad was taking interest in his career for a change. Normally, Billy was too busy with his land business to notice what his boys were up to.


"Very good….I am very proud of you my son! Aise hi ambitious rehna zindagi mein….phir tumhein koi nahin rok sakta," Billy patted his son's back.


"Bas aapka aashirwaad hai papa…..Rab ne chaaha tho ek din main bhi aapki tarah successful banoonga," Armaan clasped his father's hands.


"Accha yeh bataa, tera shaadi ka kya plan hai?" Billy tried to get a feel for his son's views.


"Shaadi? Abhi tho kuch nahin papa….wo tho door ki baat hai…pehle America, phir ek-do saal naukri…phir sochunga," Armaan replied


Billy was very relieved; his son had lifted a burden from his chest. Somewhere inside, Billy felt guilty about rejecting Riddhima, especially if Armaan liked her, but Armaan's statement had cleared his guilt. He was glad that within a year, Riddhima would be out from their lives and Armaan would probably forget her in a few years. Alliance with the Mehra's was looking more attractive to Billy now.


"Chal puttar…main chalta hoon….tu apna kaam kar," Billy left his son and headed for his room.


"Naina! Tere liye khush khabri hai….maine Armaan se baat ki abhi….usey abhi shaadi mein koi dilchaspi nahin hai….tu shayad theek kehti hai Shashank aur Padma hamare bte ko phansaana chaahte hain….accha hua tuney Shashank se manaa kar diya," Billy said


"Meri baat maanoge tho kabhie nahin pachtaaoge," Naina beamed, "chalo achha hua….aapko pataa tho chala aapka beta bhi uss Riddhima ki bachhi se shaadi nahin karna chaahta."


"Maine yeh nahin kaha wo Riddhima se shaadi nahin karna chaahta…wo bas abhi shaadi nahin karna chaahta….iska matlab yeh hai ki tu abhi Suhaani ke rishtey ki baat bhi na kar," Billy explained


"Kyun na karoon? Main chaahti hoo ki America jaane se pehle kam se kam sagai tho ho jaaye dono ki," Naina argued.


"Nahin Naina! Shaadi ki baat bhi mat kar abhi Armaan se…..kahin aisa na ho ki hum zor dein ki wo Suhaani se shaadi kar le, aur phir wo Riddhima ke aur kareeb ho jaaye…..abhi jaisa hai chalte rehne de….jab wo wapas aayega, Riddhima uske saamne nahin hogi tho wo khud Suhaani ko chun lega…..abhi jawaan munda hai….thodi mauj masti kar raha hai Riddhima ke saath tho karne de…..aakhir garam khoon hai mere puttar ka….usey zyaada bhadakayegi tho aur garam ho jaayega," Billy explained.




"Theek hai jee…jaise aap kaho….Mrs Mehra tho Armaan par jaan deti hain….wo usey apna damaad aaj nahin tho kal banaa lengi," Naina smiled.


NEXT DAY:


Shashank walked into Billy's office.


"Arre Shashank….yahan kya kar raha hai?" Billy asked


"Maine socha, kaam par wapas aa jaaoon…..dheere dheere karke paise jamaa karne hain na…aakhir tujh se itna badhaa karz jo le raha hoon," Shashank replied


"Kaisi baat karta hai Shashank? Paise tho aate rahenge….tu abhi Padma bhabhi ki seva kar….jab theek ho jaaye, tab kaam par aa jaana wapas," Billy said politely.



"Sach? Tere jaisa dost milna bahut mushkil hai Billy," Shashank had tears in his eyes.


"Aisi koi baat nahin hai….par haan jaane se pehle…in kagaz par sign kar de," Billy pushed a few legal documents under Shashank's eyes.

"Yeh kya hai?" Shashank asked


"Kuch nahin ….formalities hain yaar….wo kal tujh se ghar ki baat ki thi na….usi silsilay mein hai….tu fikr na kar….sab theek ho jaayega….Padma bhabhi bhi tab tak theek ho jaayengi aur teri beti bhi sasural mein hogi….main dhoondhunga apni Riddhima beti ke liye achha sa ladka," Billy added.



Shashank was a little disturbed by Billy's tone; somehow he felt that Billy was actually trying to eliminate them from the Mallik's lives. May be that is why Billy was not interested in Shashank going back to work. May be it was his way of politely firing him from his job. Shashank had no choice but to sign the papers.




Shashank got back home to find Riddhima getting ready for school. Riddhima had suddenly matured in the last few days since Padma's illness was detected. Shashank was proud of his daughter; Riddhima would wake up at 5 in the morning, do all the house work, cook for the day, and then get ready for school. Her 12th boards were barely 2 months away, but she had not complained even once about her work load or stress to Shashank. Riddhima made sure that Padma was well taken care of- she made sure Padma received her medicines on time, helped her with daily routine activities, sat around to chat with her mom and cheered her up whenever Padma was down. Shashank had tears in his eyes at the thought of getting Riddhima married soon; he wanted her to marry the person she loved and he was in no hurry to get her married off as Billy was suggesting. He knew his daughter would not have a problem finding a good groom- she was beautiful, affectionate, respectful and traditional in her outlook, "jahan jaayegi uss ghar ko swarg banaa degi," he thought proudly.




"Riddhima puttar…tujh se ek baat karni hai," Shashank stopped Riddhima


"Haan daddyji…school ke liye der ho rahi hai," Riddhima packed her bag and wore her sandals.


"Kaise jaa rahi hai?" Shashank asked


"Armaan ne kaha tha college jaate huye mujhey chhod dega," she said



Shashank did not like that idea. He was fond of Armaan, but the recent turn of events with the Malliks had left a bitter taste in his mouth. He did not want his daughter to get hurt in the long run. He would rather see her independent and learn to live without Armaan's support and help at every stage. He wanted his daughter to receive the respect she deserved; Shashank was sure Billy and Naina would never give the respect and status to Riddhima- even if Armaan insisted on marrying Riddhima one day. Perhaps, the best thing would be to minimize Riddhima's dependence on Armaan. He had seen Armaan and Riddhima in Riddhima's room yesterday. They were both in each other's arms and he was sure that they both were developing strong feelings for each other. Shashank did not want things to get too far between the two kids.




"Beti…tu apni cycle se chali ja….ya rickshaw kar le," Shashank requested.


"Kyun daddyji? Mera school raaste mein padhta hai…Armaan ko der nahin hogi," Riddhima said.


"Beti yeh baat nahin hai….tu ab badhi ho gayi hai…sayaani ho gayi hai….main chaahta hoon tu apne pairon par khada hona seekh….har dafa Armaan par nirbhar mat reh…wo tho chala jaayega kuch dino mein….aur main yeh nahin chaahta ki koi meri beti par ungli uthaaye….Mallik parivaar aur hum mein bahut farak hai puttar….tu samajh rahi hai na?" Shashank looked at Riddhima affectionately.


Riddhima became a little serious, "kya Naina auntyjee ne aap se kuch kaha hai?"


"Nahin…unhone ne kuch nahin kaha," Shashank lied


"Aapko Billy unclejee ne mummyji ke ilaaj ke liye paise diye hai…haina? Samajh gayi daddy ji…..humein un logon ke aur ehsaan nahin lene chaahiye….yehi keh rahe hai na aap?" Riddhima's voice cracked as she said that.




Shashank had tears in his eyes; he patted Riddhima's head, "sach much kitni samajhdaar ho gayi hai tu….haan puttar, main nahin chaahta ki kabhie hamare samman par koi ungli uthaaye…..aur tu hi mera samman aur garv hai puttar."




Riddhima hugged her father, "daddyji….aap jaisa kahenge main waisa hi karoongi," she picked her bag and walked out the door.


Riddhima was sure that the Mallik's had probably loaned the money to them on certain conditions; she did not want her father to get humiliated, even if it meant being away from Armaan.


Riddhima took out her bike and started pedaling when Armaan's car blocked her path.


Armaan got off the car, "cycle se kyun ja rahi hai…..main marr gaya hoon kya? Kaha tha na tujhey ki chhod doonga raaste mein!"


Riddhima stopped pedaling and looked away from his piercing gaze, "marre tumhare dushman! Wo…wo mujhey wapas jaldi aana hai..iss liye socha apne aap chali jaati hoon….aane mein problem nahin hogi."


Armaan gave her a dirty look as he usually did when Riddhima rejected his wishes. He bent down and took his pocket knife out. He opened the knife and punctured the tires of her bike.


"ARMAAN! YEH KYA BAD TAMEEZI HAI?" she screamed, "mujhey der ho jaayegi…pehli class bahut important hai!"


Armaan remained silent; took her bag from her shoulders and grabbed her wrist, "nahin hogi der…chal mere saath."


Riddhima protested, but he was too strong for her. He shoved her in the passenger seat along with her bag and sat on the driver's side.


Riddhima tried to get off, but he had already accelerated the car by then.


Riddhima had tears in her eyes, "Armaan…zabardasti kyun karte ho?"


"Meri marzi!" he clenched on his steering wheel as he zoomed off through the crowded streets.


"Kyun karte ho aisa? Hamesha tumhari marzi hi kyun chalti hai?" she was sobbing.


Armaan did not say anything till they were at the gates of the school; he opened the door and let her out, "kitne baje khatam hota hai school aaj?"


Riddhima wiped her tears and got off, "tumhein nahin bataati!" she said hurtfully. Armaan felt sorry for her; he looked at her tenderly and the touched her face, "ro mat please….main tujhey aur pareshaan nahin karna chaahta tha…..mujhey laga tu aaj kal Padma kaaki ki wajah se pareshaan hai, iss liye tujhey school chhod na chaahta tha."


Riddhima glared at him angrily, "mujh se poonch tho lete ki mujhey kya chaahiye…..hamesha tumhari marzi hi chalti hai?"


"HAAN! KYUNKI MAIN TUJH SE BADHA HOON AUR TERA BHALA BURA ACHHI TARAH SE SAMAJHTA HOON…..TU ABHI BAHUT CHOTI HAI!" he yelled.


"Main ab bachhi nahin hoon…..kuch dino mein 18 ki ho jaaoongi……yadi bachhi samajhte ho tho us din Lohri waale din mere kamrey mere saath kya kar rahe the tum?" Riddhima asked.


That question burnt his pride and ego, "pagal tha main! Meri matt maari gayi thi! Dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha mera! Yahi sun na chaahti hai na tu?" he grabbed her elbow with his strong hand.


Riddhima pulled away and ran through the school gates. She did not look back. Armaan banged the roof of his car with his fist and buried his head in his hands, "yeh maine kya kiya? Maine kal apne aap se promise kiya thi ki usey rulaaoonga nahin….mujhey aaj kal kyun itna gussa aa jaata hai? Kyun mera maan karta hai ki hamesha Riddhima mere saath hi ho? Aisa kyun dil karta hai ki wo hamesha mere paas hi rahe……..meri baahon mein rahe? Kyun? Kyun? Kyun?" he kicked the tire of his car and then headed off to college.


Armaan had a horrible day at college. He was normally a very serious student, but for some reason could not focus that day. He left the lecture hall and went for a stroll on the college campus. He sat on a bench and tried to clear his thoughts. He tried to probe his feelings for answers to his plight. He noticed that lately Riddhima had been hounding his thoughts day and night. Yesterday, when she had hugged him, he had felt so relieved, so comforted. Why did he crave for her touch these days? They had been friends since early childhood; she had always held a special place in his life, but why had she almost become an obsession for him? He wanted to be with her, take care of her, hold her, help her, support her……and kiss her? He closed his eyes; he felt guilty about feeling that way, just like he had when she was almost 12 and he, 16-they were in his room and he had noticed how her body had changed…..it was the same guilt that was gnawing on his conscience.




"Lekin kya aisa sochna galat hai? Riddhima bhi tho ab badhi ho gayi hai…..kya wo bhi mere baare mein aisa soch ti hai? Kya aisa sochna sach much paap hai? Jab main aur Riddhima ek doosre ko itni achhi tarah jaante hain, tho main kyun ghabraa raha hoon? Kyun mera dil uske liye itna bechain hai?" he ran his fingers through his hair and then got up. He took a deep breath, "main usey bilkul pareshaan nahin karoonga….abhi wo 12th pass kar le….aur Padma kaaki theek ho jaayein…ab nahin rulaaoonga usey," he promised himself once again and went back to his class.



Riddhima left school early; she knew Armaan would come to pick her up at the usual closing time, so she bunked the last period and took a rickshaw home. She was aware that Armaan would get upset with her, but after her conversation with her father this morning, she had resolved that she would become more independent and not get talked into doing everything Armaan wanted. After all, she had some self respect too. She would not be able to stand if Naina aunty humiliated her father because of her. Riddhima was well aware that since childhood, Naina harbored some kind of dislike for Riddhima….she did not know why, but guessed it was something to do with their difference in social status. It was nice of Billy uncle to help them financially, but not at the cost of her and her family's self respect.



As expected, Armaan was furious to not find Riddhima at school. He reminded himself of his resolve to be gentle with Riddhima. He had promised himself he would not get upset with her. He just sighed and drove back home.


Armaan walked towards the Gupta's as soon as he arrived home.



"Padma Kaaki! Kaisi hain aap?" Armaan walked into her bedroom and pulled a chair.


"Theek hoon puttar….tum logon ki meherbaani hai…..warna hum log kya kar sakte hain?" she smiled, "Riddhima se mila? Aaj kuch naaraz si hai wo."


"Nahin abhi nahin mila…pehle aap se milna chaahta tha….main manaa loonga usey…..mujh se naaraz hai shayad."


"Kyun phir koi jhagda hua hai tum dono mein?" Padma asked.



" aap fikr mat karo kaaki…..kuch der mein theek ho jaayegi wo," he smiled, "jaanta hoon usey."


"Wo tho hai….tum dono ka bachpan ki dosti hai na…..ladhte khoob ho par ek doosre ke bina reh bhi nahin sakte," Padma replied.


Armaan blushed a little, "kaaki…aap bhi na……accha kaaki….aapke haath ka khaana nahin khaaya kai dino se…..heart transplant ho jaaye bas aapka….phir aapke haath ke paranthe khaaoonga," Armaan squeezed her hands, changing the topic.



"Rab ne chaaha tho zaroor khilaaoongi…….Rab tujhey lambi umar de puttar," she blessed him, "bas meri Riddhima ka hamesha dhyaan rakhna…tere bharose hi chhod kar jaa rahi hoon usey," she said tearfully.



"Kaaki! Pehli baat tho aap kahin jaa nahin rahi hain…..aur jahan tak Riddhima ki baat hai……aap fikr mat karo….wo badhi ho gayi hai….apna dhyaan khud rakh sakti hai," he glanced through the corner of his eyes as he sensed Riddhima was listening.



Riddhima paused outside her mother's door when she heard Armaan's voice. She heard what he had just said.


"Haan rakh sakti hoon….tumhein kya?" she said irrtately and walked in with some soup for Padma.


"Aaja Riddhima puttar," Padma smiled at her daughter.


They both exchanged dirty looks with each other.


"Puttar, Armaan ke liye kuch lekar aa," Padma took her bowl of soup from Riddhima.


"Ek badhaa glass meethi lassi! Aur 4 chammach cheeni!" Armaan grinned.


"CHAAR?" Riddhima was shocked, "din par din cheeni zyaada lene lage ho tum," she sounded annoyed.


"Kya karoon? Tu jitni kadwi hoti jaa rahi hai, mujhey utni zyaada cheeni peeni padhti hai," he teased her.


Riddhima threw a pillow at him, "mummyji dekho Armaan hamesha mujhey chidhaa tha rehta hai."


Padma just smiled, pleased that the childhood friends were so comfortable and adored each other so much.


Armaan followed Riddhima to the kitchen and pulled her braid, "tho mera intezaar nahin kiya tuney? Lagta hai chidiya ka apna dimaag ho gaya hai ab?"


Riddhima handed him his glass of lassi, "dimaag tho chidiya mein hamesha se tha…tumhein ab dikh ne laga hai…...aur ek din chidiya ke pankh bhi nikal aayenge…..phir tumhare haath nahin aane waali wo," she turned around in fury.


"Tu abhi tak naaraaz hai mujhsey?" he grabbed her by her elbow.


"Zabardasti karoge tho naaraz hi rahoongi!" she pulled away.



"Achha baba maaf kar chidiya…….ab maine apne aap se vaada kiya hai ki tujhey kabhie rulaaoonga nahin…promise!" he put the glass down and touched his ears.


Riddhima chuckled, "dekhti hoon…achha ab jao…mujhey padhai karni hai."


"Tho main help kar deta hoon….chal kya padhna hai?" he asked



"Nahin main apne aap kar loongi…..tumhein mere arts ke subject kahan samajh aayenge?….Tum tho science student ho…ab jao…board exam ki tayyari main khud karoongi," she pushed him away.



"Theek hai baba….accha ek kaam karoon? Main apni books yahan le aata hoon…phir saath saath padhenge..kyun?" he asked


"Nahin puttar….Riddhima ko apne aap hi padhai karne de ab….aur main bhi tho retired principal hoon….main help kar doonga," Shashank walked in.


Armaan was disappointed, "theek hai unclejee….main chalta hoon," he looked at Riddhima longingly, but did not see any signs of approval on her face.



Riddhima went back to her room, but then got up to fetch something from her mother's room.


As she was walking in, she overheard Shashank and Padma.


"Kyun Armaan ko wapas bhej diya?….Ab ek na ek din tho Riddhima aur uski shaadi honi hi hai….Naina bhabhi aur Billy bhai sahib bhi maan gaye hain……bechara kitna mooh latkaa kar gaya hai," Padma defended Armaan.


"Padma….abhi Riddhima ki umar padhai karne ki hai….main nahin chaahta wo shaadi ke baare mein zyaada soche," Shashank said.


Riddhima was stunned with the news. She was pleasantly surprised that Armaan's parents had consented to their marriage. She covered her face with her hands and ran into her room.


She shut the door and tried to catch her breath; her heart was pounding from excitement, "Armaan…..kya iska matlab main hamesha ke liye tumhari ho jaaoongi?" She folded her hands and said a silent prayer in her mind. She could not stop blushing; she forgot her books and twirled all around the room. She peeped outside her window and was surprised at what she saw. There was Armaan sitting with her bike on the front lawn. He was trying to replace her slashed tires.


She bit her lower lip, and went to the storage room. She unbraided her hair and took out Shashank's tool box and walked out into the front lawn.


Armaan's face was covered with grease; he was trying to unscrew the slashed tires with his fingers.


Riddhima wiped his face with her dupatta and then handed him the tool box, "jab help chaahiye ho tho sharamaa na nahin chaahiye."

Armaan looked up and grinned; he could not help noticing that she had loosened her hair and was wearing her beautiful smile for him once again.


He gave her a wicked glance and took the tool box from her, "sharamaa tho tu rahi hai….itni laal kyun ho rahi hai?"


Riddhima blushed again and helped him unscrew the tires. They both worked on changing the tires; their hands and heads brushing against each other, they both looked up simultaneously and came face to face with each other. The dimly lit front lawn and the gentle winter breeze gave them both goose bumps; they could feel each other's warm breaths on their faces. Armaan stared at her slightly parted lips; he brought his face closer and closed his eyes. Riddhima closed her eyes in anticipation of what was about to happen. Her heart was thumping in her chest; her knees felt frail, the loose tendrils of her hair brushed against his face with the breeze. His lips brushed against hers; they both felt a sudden quiver in their bodies. Armaan's lips pressed harder, wanting to consume hers completely.


"ARMAAN PUTTAR!!!!" Naina's shrill voice interrupted the golden moment, "KAHAN HAI TU???" she walked to the front gate of the Gupta's.



Riddhima got up hastily and ran inside the house, leaving a dismayed Armaan with the bike and tool box.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum part di :) naina ki humesa galat timing hoti hai 😉 bas galat faimi badegi ab... Armaan bas kaldi realise karle...bt i'm sure woh nhi karegi warna asad kaha se ayega!!!! See i'm too smarttt 🤪
Edited by Prizi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Awesum part di :) naina ki humesa galat timing hoti hai 😉 bas galat faimi badegi ab... Armaan bas kaldi realise karle...bt i'm sure woh nhi karegi warna asad kaha se ayega!!!! See i'm too smarttt 🤪


thanks dear😛
armaan...just hope woh zyada der na kare nd asad is a comp diff story😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 11:


RECAP: "ARMAAN PUTTAR!!!!" Naina's shrill voice interrupted the golden moment, "KAHAN HAI TU???" she walked to the front gate of the Gupta's.

Riddhima got up hastily and ran inside the house, leaving a dismayed Armaan with the bike and tool box.


Armaan parked the bike next to the mango tree and walked towards his mom, "haan mama? Kuch kaam tha?"


"Puttar?" she said in her sweetest, most maternal voice, "zara tujhey kisi se milwaana tha…aaja ghar aaja…..yahan kya kar raha hai andhere mein?"


A frustrated Armaan followed his mom, "kuch nahin mama…Riddhima ki cycle theek kar raha tha."


Naina stopped and looked behind, "tu uska naukar hai kya? Kya zaroorat hai yeh sab karne ki? Ab tum bachhe nahin ho….hum kahan…aur wo kahan?"


"MAMA!" Armaan said angrily, "Riddhima meri dost hai….hum bachpan se dost rahe hain, aur hamesha rahe hain…..uski help karna mera farz hai….balki mujhey achha lagta hai ki main Riddhima aur uske parivaar ke kaam aa sakoon….aap please aisi baatein mujhse na kiya kee jiye," Armaan walked past her and went inside his house. His mom had spoilt his mood; just a few moments ago, Riddhima's lips were close to his- not only did his mother interrupt the sweetest moment of his life, but ruined his mood completely.


As Armaan walked in, he saw a tall, slim woman in a long skirt and top near the staircase.


"Arre Suhani tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?" Armaan asked


"Maine bulaaya tha puttar….socha ab tum log alag alag college mein ho tho milna kum ho gaya hoga…iss liye Suhaani ko yahin bula liya….jao kahin ghoom aao….bahar dinner shiner kar aao….ya jo bhi aaj kal ke jawaan log karte hain," Naina suggested.


Armaan looked at his mother angrily, "mama…mujhey kaam hai….kal meri Universities ki applications due hain…..mujhey aaj hi saari email karni hain…sorry…I can't go!"


Suhani smiled sweetly, "koi baat nahin Armaan…we can just go for ice cream….yahan paas mein hi ek naya parlor khula hai….it's damn good you know…we all hang out there after college."


Armaan frowned at Suhani, "I am sorry…I don't like ice cream…I just eat desi kulfi…and that too from the street vendors!"


Suhani made a disgusting face, "eewww…..that's disgusting! Those things are full of germs."


"Sorry Suhani….I can't accompany you tonight," Armaan excused himself and went to his room.


A disappointed Suhani left, "sorry auntie….may be next time."


Naina fumed and fretted; she walked upstairs to Armaan's room, but Billy stopped her, "NAINA! PAGAL MAT BANO!"


Billy walked to her and said, "Aisa mat karo Naina….Armaan ko jaanta hoon…..yadi tum usey Suhani ki taraf dhakelogi tho wo zaroor Riddhima ke kareeb chala jaayega…..aur tumney zyaada zidd ki tho wo kahin Riddhima se shaadi na kar baithe….ek beta tho hamare haath se nikal hi gaya hai."


"Kya matlab ji?" Naina asked


"RAHUL! Rahul aur Muskaan ne shaadi karne ki soch li hai," Billy said


"HAI RABBA! Yeh kya keh rahe ho ji?" Naina was aghast


"Tumhein apni kitty parties se fursat miley, tho pataa rahega na ki ghar mein kya ho raha hai?" Billy said irritately, "aaj Muskaan ke pita aaye the….mujhey bataane ki hum raazi ho na ho….unhey Muskaan aur Rahul ka rishta manzoor hai….aur Muskaan 12th ke baad Rahul ke college hi jaane ki soch rahi hai."


"Hai mera puttar! Kahan hai Rahul?….Wo tho bilkul bhola hai…usey kya pata, kya theek hai aur kya nahin?" Naina went down the stairs in search of Rahul.


"Naina! Rahul Chandigarh mein hai….tu kahan dhoondh rahi hai usey?" Billy followed her.


"Arre mera dimaag bilkul kaam nahin kar raha hai ji….zara Rahul ko phone milaana," Naina sat on the couch with her head in her palms.


"Koi faayda nahin…..Rahul se meri baat huyi thi…usney kaha hai ki yadi hum nahin maane tho wo Muskaan ke saath bhaag kar shaadi kar lega…ek ladka tho haath se nikal hi gaya hai….iss liye keh raha hoon ki Armaan ke saath abhi filhaal zabardasti na kar…jaane de usey America….phir baad mein shaadi ki baat karenge," Billy sat next to her and explained.


AT RIDDHIMA'S HOUSE:


Riddhima ran inside her house, but was shocked to see Shashank at the door. Shashank had seen what Armaan and Riddhima were up to.


Shashank just gave her a stern look and then latched the front door, "Riddhima…tujh se mujhey yeh umeed nahin thi," he said calmly.


Riddhima felt like burying herself somewhere; she was so ashamed, "wo daddyji..meri cycle…wo tire….wo…"


"Jaanta hoon Armaan aur tu bahut ache dost ho aur ek doosre ko pasand bhi karte ho….lekin main chaahta hoon ki meri beti kabhie mera sir neecha na kare….board exam mein pass hokar, college jaana hai tujhey…..phir apne pairon par khada hona hai….Armaan tho chalaa jaayega bahar….tujhey tho apna dhyaan khud rakhna hai na," Shashank explained calmly.


"Sorry daddyji….ab aisi galti nahin hogi….main sirf padhai aur mummyji par dhyaan doongi," Riddhima lowered her head and covered her head with the greased dupatta.


Riddhima went to her room and shut the door. She closed her eyes and rested her head on her desk. She could still feel a tingle on her lips where Armaan's lips had touched her just moments ago, but then she remembered her father's expression when she had walked in, "daddyji kya soch rahe honge? Lekin wo tho jaante hain ki meri aur Armaan ki shaadi hone waali hai…lekin phir bhi….main ab exams se pehle Armaan ko bilkul kareeb nahin aane doongi," she resolved.



As she tried to study for her exams, her mind kept wandering at the beautiful moment in the lawn. She blushed and touched her lips from time to time. She closed her eyes and dreamt about Armaan all evening, "tho Armaan bhi mujh sey utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna main karti hoon?….Jhooth bol raha tha ki uss din behek gaya tha," she shut her books and walked to the window. She opened the windows, stared at the moon and sat with her chin resting on her knees, "kya ek din yeh chaand …..hum dono ek saath ……ek doosre ki baahon mein baith kar dekh rahe honge?" She inhaled the fresh fragrance of the 'raat ki rani' flowers and shut her eyes. She was in a trance like state, as she recalled their kiss in the garden.


Song in the background:

"Na jaane kya hua" from "Dard"


na jaane kyaa huaa, jo toone chhoo liyaa
khilaa gulaab kee tarah meraa badan
nikhar nikhar gayee, sawar sawar gayee
banaa ke aaeenaa tuze aye jaana-ye-man

bikharaa hain kaajal fijaa mein, bheegee bheegee hain shaamein
boondon kee rimazim se jaagee, aag thhandee hawaa mein
aajaa sanam ye haseen aag hum le dil mein basaa


She imagined she was in Armaan's arms and then they were running and chasing each other, climbing trees together, swimming together in the stream. She dreamt Armaan had grabbed her and was kissing her face, then moved down to her lips- Riddhima quivered a little and opened her eyes. She looked around and found herself in her room, all alone; she covered her face with her palms, too shy to even face her own imagination.



aanchal kahaa main kahaa hoon, ye muze hosh kyaa hain
ye bekhudee toone dee hain, pyaar kaa ye nashaa hain
sun le jaraa, saaja-ye-dil gaa rahaa hain, nagmaa teraa



She shut her eyes again and then imagined Armaan and her going around the sacred fire, shehnayis playing in the background, people blessing them by throwing flowers at them- they were getting married and then they were in his bedroom; Armaan lifted her ghunghat as they celebrated their suhaag raat……



kaliyon kee ye sej mahake, raat jaage milan kee
kho jaaye dhadakan mein tere, dhadakanen mere man kee
aa paas aa teree har saans mein main jaaoo samaa


Riddhima felt goose bumps all over as she imagined Armaan making love to her. She got up with a startle, "yeh mujhey kya ho raha hai? Main abhi se itne sapne kyun le rahi hoon? Mujhey apni padhai par dhyaan dena chaahiye…..boards se pehle Armaan ka ek khayal bhi apne mann mein nahin laaoongi," she shut the window and reluctantly sat at her desk.



NEXT DAY:


Riddhima was ready for school after a sleepless and restless night. After taking care of her morning housework, she headed out for school on her cycle. She was a little disappointed not to see Armaan waiting for her outside, "shayad morning mein lecture hoga…warna wo bahut ziddi hai…zaroor meri wait karta," she blushed at the thought, "kitna khayal rakhta hai wo mera….kehta nahin hai par main jaanti hoon wo mujhey bahut pyaar karta hai….utna hi jitna main usey karti hoon," she pedaled all the way to school, lost in her own dream land.


As soon as she got off outside the school gate, she saw Armaan's car right behind her.


She was ecstatic to see him, but did not express her pleasure openly.


"Mere peeche peeche kyun aa rahe the?" she asked him after parking her bike.

"Tu mere aage aage ja rahi thi….main tho chup chaap apni car chala raha tha," Armaan grinned.


Riddhima pinched his nose playfully, "jhooth bolte ho….achha ab mere board exams tak please mujhey pareshaan mat karna…ab jao….college jao."


"Arre….bekaar badnaam karti hai mujhey….khud padhai nahin karti, aur naam mera lagaa rahi hai," Armaan grabbed her wrist and came closer, "achha baba chala jaaoonga….lekin wo kal raat waali kiss poori karke."


Riddhima's jaw dropped to her knees, "pagal ho gaye ho? School ke bahar?"


"School ke andar bhi kar sakte hain," he said naughtily.


She slapped his arm playfully and ran away with her bag, "exams se pehle thenga bhi nahin milega!" she teased him and stuck out her thumb. Armaan placed his finger on his lips and pleaded, "please….sirf ek?" She waved back and ran away.



Armaan just sighed, "yeh ladki din par din chaalak hoti jaa rahi hai….kahan gayi wo bholi bhali Riddhima jo meri har baat maanti thi?" he looked up in the sky and then grinned, "lekin hai bahut soni," and drove off.




NEXT TWO MONTHS:


Padma's health stabilized a little with bed rest and a relatively stress free life. It seemed her body could keep up with the minimal heart function, as long as she took her medicines and did not exert herself. She was on the priority list for a heart transplant. Armaan had promised them that as soon as the hospital found the match, he would leave everything and take Padma kaaki to the hospital, "aap fikr na karo….yeh mera mobile number hai unclejee….jaise hi hospital se phone aaye….mujhey bula lena." Shashank was indebted to Armaan; he was really fond of him and how he wished Riddhima could one day get married to this young man, but he knew it was just a dream.



Riddhima kept her promise to her father, and despite her intense craving to be with Armaan, kept her distance from him, "aakhir ek din tho humein saath hona hi hai….kuch din intezaar tho kar hi sakte hain….main daddyji ka sir kabhie neecha nahin hone doongi."
(note Riddhima's tremendous self control over her emotions…..a virtue not everyone has and she has learnt at a tender age of 17)




Riddhima and Muskaan studied together most of the time, giving Armaan even less access to her. Riddhima told Muskaan about her impending marriage with Armaan, "daddyji aur mummyji ne Naina aunty aur Billy unclejee se baat kar li hai…..ab mummyji theek ho jaaye, aur Armaan America se wapas aa jaaye…bas main phir Mrs Mallik ho jaaoongi…aur tu meri devrani!" Riddhima giggled as Muskaan acted surprised, "sach Riddhima? Wo maan gaye? Lekin Rahul tho keh raha tha ki wo log hamare rishtey se khush nahin hain…tu bahut lucky hai," Muskaan was a little dismayed.



"Wo tho hoon main!" Riddhima smiled, "shayad Armaan ne hi zidd ki hogi, kyunki bhala Naina aunty mujhey apni bahu kyun banaane lagi…tu bhi Rahul se keh ki wo peeche padh jaaye unke," she advised her disappointed friend.




"Haan Rahul keh raha tha ki wo nahin maane tho hum bhaag kar shaadi kar lenge," Muskaan added.




"Sach? Main aisa karoongi…main Armaan se baat karoongi….wo manaa lega auntyji ko…yeh mera vaada hai ki teri aur Rahul ki poori izzat ke saath shaadi hogi," Riddhima said




Muskaan hugged Riddhima, "kitna achha hoga na…hum sab se achhi saheliyan aur phir devrani-jethaani…tu mujhey sataayegi tho nahin na?"


"Haan yadi jethani ke pair nahin dabaaye tho zaroor sataaoongi," Riddhima laughed. The friends were lost in their imaginary world in between their books.




Armaan would give her loving glances whenever they met outside the house and place his finger on his lips, reminding him of their incomplete kiss. Riddhima would just gave him a glare and then blush. Armaan had never seen Riddhima so happy and bashful in his life, "sach much badhi ho gayi hai kudi…..mujhey uska aise sharamaana bahut changaa lagta hai," he said to himself and could just sigh, hoping to fulfill his wish soon.




Armaan decided to work on his passport and visa applications; he had heard from a number of universities already and was leaning towards the University of Michigan post graduate program. He decided to tell Riddhima about his admission after her exams. He kept his promise to himself and refrained from any hurtful or caustic remarks at her. He did not insist on helping with her studies or dropping her to school, as he wanted to keep her distractions to a minimum. He was very excited about further studies in the US. He spent hours researching different courses on automobile engineering; he could not wait to get to the US and fulfill his dream.
(Just like Riddhima could not wait to fulfill her dream- get married to Armaan!)




On the last day of her board exams, a relieved group of students walked out of the exam center, giggling, cheering, and slapping each other's backs. Rahul was waiting on his motorcycle for Muskaan. As soon as she saw him, Muskaan ran and hugged Rahul. They sat on his motorcycle and were off in a jiffy.



Riddhima felt left out as most friends had plans to watch a movie, go out to eat, shop or just hang out. How she wished Armaan was there, but he had really taken his 'punishment' to stay away from her very seriously. She unlocked her cycle from the bike stand and was almost ready to leave, when a pair of strong muscular arms grabbed her by the waist and carried her forcefully.


Before she could protest, she was dumped inside the passenger seat of a brand new convertible sports car. She looked around at the unfamiliar car and then noticed the familiar face she had been waiting for all afternoon, "CONGRATULATIONS! Meri nayi car ke liye congratulate nahin karegi?" Armaan smiled and sat on the driver's side.


"Nayi car?" she was pleasantly surprised, "lekin tumhari purani car ko kya hua?"


"Bore ho gaya tha main," he started the car and zoomed off at lightning speed.


Riddhima tried to regain her balance, "Armaan…zara dheere…..car bahut achhi hai…lekin iski zaroorat kyat hi tumhein? Kuch din mein tho tum America chale jaaoge."


"Mujhey ek bahut achhi university mein admission mil gaya hai….iss liye papa ne mujhey yeh dilaayi hai…tu tho jaanti hai mujhey cars kitni pasand hain," he grinned and showed off the cool features of the car to her. Riddhima was far from impressed, "mujhey tho tumhari purani Maruti bhi theek thaak hi lagti thi."


"Riddhima! Wo outdated model tha….this is new and sporty," he accelerated the car again.


"Tho kya hua outdated tha tho...kya har outdated cheez ko replace karoge?" she asked somberly.


"Kyun nahin?" he laughed, "chal kulfi khaane chalte hain," he looked at her and then removed her hair clip from her ponytail. He threw the hair clip out of the convertible; Riddhima was horrified, "wo mera favorite clip tha…ab mere baal sab jagah udhenge," she whined.



Armaan did not respond and just whistled his way to their favorite street vendor corner. He grabbed her wrist and then ran to the kulfi stand, "bhaiyya do faluda kulfi!"


He knew Riddhima was very fond of the faluda kulfi. He brought two plates and handed one to her, "chal jaldi khaa le…warna pighal jaayegi."


Riddhima smiled and savored her favorite badaam-pista kulfi as fast as she could. Armaan gulped down his and then attacked her plate.


Riddhima complained, "yeh kya kar rahe ho? Meri kulfi bhi kha rahe ho?"


"Kyunki teri har cheez par mera haq hai!" he licked his fingers off her plate and then licked a piece of faluda off from her lip, "mmm….kya mithaas hai!"


Riddhima blushed at his comment, but realized where they were standing, "yeh kya kar rahe ho? Koi dekh lega….beech sadak par hain hum." Riddhima thought, "Armaan, tum sahi kehte ho…meri har cheez par haq hai tumhara….kyunki main hamesha se tumhari thi, aur tumhari hi rahoongi."




He snapped his fingers as Riddhima was lost in her day dream, "Meri kiss abhi tak di nahin hai tuney," he looked at his watch, "tere exams ko khatam huye 1 ghanta 20 minute ho gaya hai…kyun?" he gave her a wicked look.


Riddhima turned red with embarrassment, "Armaan….aas paas log sun rahe hain."


"Mujhey farak nahin padhta….achha bataa kahan chalna hai?" he asked


"Kulche chole!" she threw her disposable plate and pointed to another vendor.


"Kulche chole nahin…main kiss ki baat kar raha tha," he sounded frustrated, but just followed her to the other stand.


They ordered two plates of kulche chole- Riddhima's with extra hot spices and a side order of chili pickle.


"Kaise khaati hai itna teekha? Tabhie tho khud bhi din par din teekhi hoti ja rahi hai," Armaan made a face as he stared at the red chili pickle on her plate.



"Tum jaise badmaash ladkon ko apne teekhepan se hi door rakhna padhna hai," she bit into the chilli pickle as she teased him. For some weird reason, Armaan found that very attractive. Her red lips biting into the red hot chili pepper pickle aroused him like never before. He grabbed her plate and put it away; he tilted his head a little as he came closer and kissed her red hot lips, "AHHH!!!" he screamed, "Hai mirchi! Kitni teekhi hai….bilkul teri tarah!" His eyes and nose watered from kissing her fiery hot lips!



Riddhima could not stop laughing; she ran away from him, "kaha tha na ki teekhi ladki ke mooh na lago."




Armaan wiped his face and chased her to the car.



Song in background: "ik teekhi teekhi si uff karaari si ladki" from "laaga chunari mein daag"

(You won't believe it but I wrote this whole part because of this song…it is cute and adorable, suits our AR very well)


(ik teekhi teekhi si uff karaari si ladki
mere dil mein dil mein ek bijali jaise hai kadki) - 2
thodi behkati huyi, thodi chehkati huyi
gumsum sehmati huyi, kaise jaal bichhati hai pagli
ek tedha medha sa ladkhadaata sa ladka
mere dil mein dil mein ek shola jaisa hai bhadka
ek tedha medha sa ladkhadaata sa ladka
mere dil mein dil mein woh shole jaise bhadka
kabhi hichkichhaata huva, kabhi khul ke gaata huva
baate banaata huva, phir bhi humko woh bhaata hai pagla
hosh le ke udd gaya, usaki kaisi hai jaadugari
dekhati hi reh gayi main toh khadi ki khadi
chatpati chulbuli usaki baate sharaarat bhari
par pichhe pad jaane ki aadat badi hai buri
thodi behkati huyi, thodi chehkati huyi
yuun hi kudkati huyi, kaise jaal bichhati hai pagli, pagla
ik teekhi teekhi si uff karaari si ladki
mere dil mein dil mein ek bijali jaise hai kadki
Vodka ke shot mein ik chhoti si mirchi hari
ik musibat hai jo sar pe hamaari padi
are (hum toh aise hai - 2) bhaiya - 2
paanv toh jamin pe hai par khaabon mein udata hai jo
daadhi ke bich mein dimple chhupaata hai woh
thodi behkati huyi, thodi chehkati huyi
yuun hi kudkati huyi, kaise jaal bichhati hai pagli
ik teekhi teekhi si uff karaari si ladki
usake dil mein dil mein ek bijali jaise hai kadki
ek tedha medha sa ladkhadaata sa ladka
usake dil mein dil mein ek shola jaise bhadka

Armaan and Riddhima had a great time that afternoon and evening. Riddhima had tears of joy in her eyes by the end of the evening.

"Ab ro kyun rahi hai? Ab kya kiya maine?" Armaan asked guiltily.

Riddhima wiped her tears and sniffed her nose, "itni khushi di hai tumney Armaan…ki khushi se rona aa raha hai…..bahut dino baad itni khushi mili hai….vaada karo hamesha aise hi rulaate rahoge mujhey," she smiled through her tears and hugged him tightly.

Armaan caressed her back and squeezed her in his strong arms, "vaada karta hoon.….Hamesha rulata rahoonga tujhey…..jaise bachpan se aaj tak karta aaya hoon," he ragged her lovingly, kissed her ears and hugged her tightly.



Guys sorry for keeping u all waiting...but till next sunday bear with me. Will not be regular :(

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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update dear..
sorry for not cmmnting on previous prt..
read both now...
tooo good...👏👏

p.s- yeay.. bck on my spot...😃😆

Edited by --Orchids-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I thought its a triangle luvstory 😛 awesum part di..haha armaan ka teasing jst superb...rahul did the ri8..ab RM ko toh koi alag nhu kar sakta... Hayye sunday tak wait karni padegi...bt its good fr me.. Saturday me i hav exam.. 😃
Edited by Prizi - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

I thought its a triangle luvstory 😛 awesum part di..haha armaan ka teasing jst superb...rahul did the ri8..ab RM ko toh koi alag nhu kar sakta... Hayye sunday tak wait karni padegi...bt its good fr me.. Saturday me i hav exam.. 😃





ALL THE BEST PRIYUU...👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc concept dear.. DO continue soon.. AnD plz add me in ur pm list...
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Originally posted by: --Orchids--

mind blowing update dear..
sorry for not cmmnting on previous prt..
read both now...
tooo good...👏👏

p.s- yeay.. bck on my spot...😃😆


thanks di...
it's fine

yup u have regained ur seat😆😉

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