*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

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He thought Khushi was unwell

No she is not

He is damn caring

NSS Project day after tomorrow

Will she go ??

OMG 😲

Those girls asking about Arnav

Those girls should stay away from him

He is Khushi's

Poor Khushi though

Hotwa 😲 😕 🤣 🤣 🤣

Was Mamiji one of the girls ??

Again If this Shyamu comes na

He wants to protect her from Shyam

She mumbled ILU to him in sleep

What will be Arnav's reaction now ??

Hope that if Khushi goes for this NSS project

It will make Arnav realise that he has feelings for her...

Nice Update di

Love You !! ❤️

Edited by Barun_Addict - 11 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Aesome but short and so are my grabbers as there is only one because we just went to college and came back...

My grabbers...

Khushi's heart is "talking too much" and Arnav's eyes...good one as heart always looks through the eyes and doesn't comprehend words...He made her sink in his chest...good one..

He is whispering in her ears brushing his breath against her skin sending tingling shivers...wow ...my fav part and the way you wrote it ...delicious...

Khushi is sad going away and he doesn't want her to go ...Shyam ka tou bahana hai...BuT he is concerned with her safety ...

Khushi is jealous..."aap par sirf humara haq hai"...hmmm...winking Arnav with his teased looks...and happy internally...mean boy

She dozed off "what the.."...that is our wiwy's shtylwa...but he didn't forget to remove her locks ...hmmm...hmmm...good...a trade mark of Arnav

YES CONFESSION chahe neend main hi sahi...I love you Arnavji...me Love it wiwiji...

Arnav closed eyes with pain...over her confesion...hmmm...will wait for the update for this one..something signalling nice story on this side

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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SAM32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

buhaahahahahahahha fantabulous update :-D :-D :-D
u carried that part of her confession so well :-* :-D
loved the update every bit of it

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Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

such a cliffhanger!!!
do continue soon...

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ArnieBoyBarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

fantastic update, i want to read the next one immediately 😆

Edited by KittenRose - 11 years ago

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sindhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

amazing and awesome update...

so finally khushi confessed her feelings for arnav in sleep...

loved the update very much...

simply superb...

awesome...

pls continue soon and pls pm me the update...

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ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

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Wiwy, what a confession. One often speaks the truth when they sleep. No expectations or powergames going on at that time. And lucky ASR gets to hear it and has time to prepare himself. I bet he is relieved, what with his mind spinning around in jealousy imagining Shyam and NK vying for Khushi's attentions. Now he knows the truth, what will he do? Will he fess up? Or will he flirt with her till she crumbles and says it to his face. Ooh what sweet surrender that would be. I am on pins and needles Wiwy. Post the next update soon.👏

Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 11 years ago

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Putija

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Wiwy love you for writing the short I love u update jealous and possessive Arnav and Khushi do make a pair

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

amazing yaar.. You write romance such well.. That i literally drool over each n evry scene..!

Hmm.. If only he'd come in my cllge.. I swear i would have run to him n nevr let go..

Aww.. Confession in her dreams.. What! Arnav's reac.. Is he frustrated.. Or not able to decide..?