*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay misunderstandings gone...that was quicks
And awesome a jelly arnie
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Awww! Tumhare commentwa se dil dhak dhak karne laga!❤️ Thanks wa! Meri to nikal padi!🤗





Love you Di !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushiPM

khushi is in love with arnav but is he?

great update


Is he? Best question!⭐️ Wish I knew the answer!😉
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Yay misunderstandings gone...that was quicks

And awesome a jelly arnie


Hey Anita 🤗

You like jelly Arnie ? Am working on him in the next update!😆 Look out , my girl! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wiwy,
Let me do a round up of the previous day's events. Khushi attends this conference where she finds out that it is organised by ASR. He calls her to the room, kisses her, she manages to go out only to know from Anjali that La is his girlfriend. She returns to question him and A and K have a fight in the lift, where K learns that A has broken up with La. A ignores her for the rest of the evening. K leaves in the rainy weather, she has an accident, A comes running to her, arranges for her scooter to be taken care of, takes K to the hospital, then drops her home. K forgets her keys (what's with Neha and Khushi, both keep misplacing the keys?), so A and K do some buildering to reach the room, they talk about the stars, their parents as they do so. A confesses why he broke up with La, then K discovers the bed. Later both have some intimate moments, then A gets a call about the fire at the factory. He accuses K about teaming up with Shyam and leaves. K is shocked about the turn of events and about her own behaviour only to realise that she is in love. Whew! What a day!
So, is Mami the Dadi of your story? Is she been brainwashed by Shyam? Or is she really good with her inbhestigation that she gets to know about the phone call? This Mami angle has become really interesting.
So, A and K have patched up. But, what is it with NK? He seems to be excited and really happy. Wonder why? But, the jealousy track is good for A, maybe he too will realise that he is in love. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Wiwy,
Let me do a round up of the previous day's events. Khushi attends this conference where she finds out that it is organised by ASR. He calls her to the room, kisses her, she manages to go out only to know from Anjali that La is his girlfriend. She returns to question him and A and K have a fight in the lift, where K learns that A has broken up with La. A ignores her for the rest of the evening. K leaves in the rainy weather, she has an accident, A comes running to her, arranges for her scooter to be taken care of, takes K to the hospital, then drops her home. K forgets her keys (what's with Neha and Khushi, both keep misplacing the keys?), so A and K do some buildering to reach the room, they talk about the stars, their parents as they do so. A confesses why he broke up with La, then K discovers the bed. Later both have some intimate moments, then A gets a call about the fire at the factory. He accuses K about teaming up with Shyam and leaves. K is shocked about the turn of events and about her own behaviour only to realise that she is in love. Whew! What a day!
So, is Mami the Dadi of your story? Is she been brainwashed by Shyam? Or is she really good with her inbhestigation that she gets to know about the phone call? This Mami angle has become really interesting.
So, A and K have patched up. But, what is it with NK? He seems to be excited and really happy. Wonder why? But, the jealousy track is good for A, maybe he too will realise that he is in love. 😳


He he he! My Durgey! You are too sweet for words! Mind blowing precap! Thanks a tonne! To tell you the truth I had forgotten that so many things had happened in one day! 😆 I hope you do this in the next update also!
Answer to your questions, you will get in the upcoming updates.
Have made the change you PMd about!😉 Thankyou again! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Thanks for your awesome summary of the chapter, Sohara!👏 The one in pink how do you know for sure he did not look?😉 This is wiwy the wicked's(credit Issk) story after all! 😆

Hmm! I'm too naive I guess!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Hey Anita 🤗

You like jelly Arnie ? Am working on him in the next update!😆 Look out , my girl! 😛


you are da bomb diggity🤗
i can't wait and i am super excited now!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
Just caught on to the last couple of updates I missed!
Really good work too, Arnav realizing that she is innocent without any proof is nice for a change.
Coming to the update, that man is unbelievable!
He laughs when her towel come undone! Do they even make men like that anymore?
NK is going to be in some serious trouble I can see.
When he does recover and is discharged from the hospital (since Mr. Possessive is going to go all how-dare-you-touch-my-girl and beat him to pulp) do hitch him up with Neha! I love that girl! She is shamelessly cheerfull!!!!
Please pm me when you update next.
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Throne

Hey!

Just caught on to the last couple of updates I missed!
Really good work too, Arnav realizing that she is innocent without any proof is nice for a change.
Coming to the update, that man is unbelievable!
He laughs when her towel come undone! Do they even make men like that anymore?
NK is going to be in some serious trouble I can see.
When he does recover and is discharged from the hospital (since Mr. Possessive is going to go all how-dare-you-touch-my-girl and beat him to pulp) do hitch him up with Neha! I love that girl! She is shamelessly cheerfull!!!!
Please pm me when you update next.
😊


Hey Throne😃
I know you were a regular reader. Thanks for catching up and the lovely comment. Poor NK. Tum log to bechare ke pichhe hi par gaye!😆 Pair him up with Neha? This is the second request I am getting regarding this! Good idea! Will try to use it. Thanks buddy.🤗

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