*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Welcome backwaa Wiwy Di. You do not have any idea how much did we all miss you🤗

Reading that sukoon part, the only song which was going on in my mind was, Kyunki tum hi ho, bas tum hi ho, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho😳

Adorable, lovely, cute, hot, sexy, Awesome...English dictionary k sare adjectives bhi kam hai, to describe this update.

Poor Arnie had to go through so much😭
Glad he found his Khushi😃

"Yes, I could not commit to Lavanya when I wanted to be physically intimate with you, could I?" he said huskily.

OMG what the...hey Devimayyia *Me faintwa*
what an awesome dialogue by Hotwaa

She actually ordered him to kiss her😲 Ladki hath se nikal gayi, not that m complaining😉

Oh man!! Bed ka udhghatan hote hote reh gaya thanks to self-controlled Babaji, Arnav😛

But we should totally give him some kinda award, he actually controlled himself at that very moment. He is such a gentlemanwaaa...

Khushi is out of control n ASR totally in control, Hey Devimayya inn dono ka kya karu??

Kyu?? Kaha?? Kaise?? *Cheeni's overreaction alert*😆
Who took Khushi's name?? Why di Aman called ASR?? Was he talking about Shyam babu??

haye I will have to wait now😭
Continue soon:)
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
m first after so many updates...
m getting emotional...
read the update...hayeee loved it...
detailed comment kal!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my my wow yar ,beautifully written...loved this bold and beautiful khushi :)...hahaha...arnav woh tu hay hee kamal :)...loved the update...everything was so perfect but "wt the" y aman took khushi's name...some odd plan of shyam against khushi ...oh dear u left on cliff hang...but for sure need to thank u for the wonderful opening ceremony of the bed :)😆❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
wiwy 👏❤️

Welcome back ...with the bang...I can see😉

My Grabbers

-He feels peace with her and in her proximity as always...She relieves his pain...His guardian angel
-He loses control as much as she does...but in this case she does more than him...hmmm..interesting
-She feels RIGHT on him to demande answers whether she is the reason of break up..good touch...and he feels answerable...even with anger..and lots of attitude...
-OK best Smirky .Brainiac is weaving a net so she can fall itself...good move and she did ...
-He is hesitant and caring but she is willing to cross limit...that is something...I say wiwy is written all over on this move...👏
-Aman barged again...What The?...You are teasing us dear...



Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayee Khushi is really to give herself to Arnav sooo sweet ! Hate Aman for ruining their … … Amazing upd
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.
Oh aman again interupted them like always
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really really nice and super hot update.

Blush mode is onnn.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! Kushi has guts, man! Kushi has completely forgotten everything in the name of her basic desires!!!
And glad that Arnav is so controlled!
What is Aman's phone all about? Who has taken her name? For what?
Aaarrgghh! Please update. Quickly!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wiwy, You're leaving me hanging~~~uggghhh!!! More, more, more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back, you wicked one,

Are you sure this story is about Khushi and not Wiwy??😆

Enjoyed reading. You are a good girl for keeping us all so happy!!😆

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