ARSHI FF - A B0ND CREATED BY GOD THR 2 UPDATED 14/10

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Chapter 12

The banner is so beautiful, it really show the true colors of your story..

Mind blowing update!!'

Love the how Arnav Khushi and Aashi where laying in the same spot where they became one for the first time. It was very cute and beautiful how they introduced Aashi to their parents..this was really something that khushi needed.

Every parent fear is to keep their child safe, I think it just priority is tht we do the best we can from our side and leave the rest to almighty power.

I knew Aashi is at that stage where she wants to get into everything as she is very curious. You have really keep an eye on the, all time as you don't know what they can do within a second.

I know it wasn't NKs fault as accidents happen. I'm happy that Khushi was able to get there on time and nothing happened to Aashi.

Love how Arnav has a sixth sense that something wasn't right at home.. They really are one..he was able to console Khushi with just the right words and only he can do that.. Love the bond that these two share...

Superbly worded and expressed, Anku!!

This one was dhaamakidaar wala update!!

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fleurs

@fleurs

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Chapter 12

Such a sweet update. Khushi introducing Aashi to his & her parent's from their haven, remembering the day 3 years ago in the same farmhouse when they assured each other to stay together & then they talking about how they would make Aashi talk with her grandparents above in the same way as them when she grows up was a lovely start 😊

So true responsibility hugs onto the parent's neck just as the way the growth of a child pours in immense happiness in their lives & this will turn out to be the moment where parents get ruled by f.e.a.r...& especially babies grab everyone's attention by making them to wait for the next move & they enjoy it a lot

The way you narrated the scene of how NK missed on Aashi moving out of the secured spot towards open danger, the mother instinct in Khushi shooting up to warn her of the approaching danger to her baby, Nani in time & explaining to Khushi that calling out the child's name aloud may perturb her & things might turn out of hand to which Khushi had deaf ears as her eyes were fixed on Aashi & her heart was screaming in relief on seeing her baby safe ... was excellent portraying 👍🏼 what all a mother must have experienced in that moment between life & death

Arnav as a husband calming down a shivering Khushi, soothing his weak wife to sleep though he was also scared from within & silently thanking her to always keep their angel, their gift safe & as a father worrying for her safety, dreaming of all the next steps his daughter would be taking & how he along with Khushi will be helping her out in each & every step she takes was awesomely narrated 👏

Arnav gauging what he should do next & NK requesting Arnav to allow him to take up the job of securing the wires in RM stunning his bhai as to how a child had turned NK into a responsible person, he enveloping Khushi in his embrace & ensuring her of how they along with DeviMaiyya's blessings & their family's support would take care of Aashi was well written

Thanks for the PM 😊

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Remarkably mind blowing update!!

We all wanted to see this fatherly side of Arnav and your are giving just that. For a parent you want to able to protect our child for harms way even if that means sacrificing something of treasure. It is just for time being but later out add beautiful memories with them. Parent really fear for their child as its a scary world out there..

NK has really become very responsible, even though in the show they showed as a carefree guy but he was the one who helped Khushi in finding Arnav. He was a true friend who stepped,at that time and ow he has taken responsibility to child safe guard the entire house for Aashi. He really is a second brother to Arnav and he really steps up the plate when needed. He is a friend to khsuhi when needed and Arnav's brother.

It is so true that you need your others warmth but also on the other hand you need our fathers protection.. Aashi really missed her father and of course she would, it a father daughter thing.. I remember when I was young I always use to look forward to my dad dropping us off to school has he worked all day so we only saw him in the morning before school.

So I really treasured those moments.. We shouldn't take things for,granted...Arnav missed her as much as she missed him and she found that solace and warmth in him which she was missing.

Reading this really brought tears into my eyes, as I can understand Arnav and khsuhis feeling for their child.. We try everything we can to protect them the best way possible.

Superbly penned down.. Hats,off To you!!! Standing ovation!!!

Anxiously waiting for more...

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

happy and peaceful times are here for Arhi..

well they deserve it.. 👏⭐️

I am so happy since they are so happy..

I so loved the moment where Aashi was searching and yearning for Arnav..

so true.. a child needs father as much as a mother..

loved the update.. 😃

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Barkah

@Barkah

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Beautiful & Awesome update
Love it

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Aww, such a cute chapter! Touched my heart.

I really loved your ending stanza. A father is emotionally involved with his child as much as the mother. So both of the parents is needed to raise a child.

You beautifully portrayed Arnav as a loving father in this tale.

The whole family couldn't lull the baby, not even her mother, but her dad's mere presence pacified the baby. she was restless not to see her beloved dad since morning. That's why the baby was upset. But poor child couldn't say her feelings also. As long as she saw her dad she cooled down. How surreal!