Smitar's: Loving Khushi #2 LINK to#3 on Pg 1(13/8) - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah y does evrything has 2 b so complicatd...i guess arnav sud soon strt mission woo khushi...pata nahi kya hoga inka nxt chp sooon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
An emotional ,touch heart ,& well written update...love it Reading this chapter make cry with khushi...so painful to her
thanks for pm & eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh...Smitha... I am feeling so heavy at heart reading the update...
Poor souls...both r suffering... My confidence in arnav is draining... Seems like khushi is all set to go...hff...
Arnav...u better do something good...already u messed up a lot of things...
I felt soo sad reading her thoughts...she is feeling soo lonely...

Smitha...dear...make them happy...plz...
All the crying is not good for my health ...u know...
Make them happy...plz...pretty plzz...

Love u...hugs...see u soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav needs to take sm gud actions to earn khushis trust agn 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
very well written update di
really painful
i so wanna cry ryt now
cont. asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
My hert just ached for both arnav
And khushi ,it seems like she built
A wall around her heart which he
Is trying so hard to break thru. her
Speaking of their marriage was so
Sad , beautifully done smita ,thanks
For the update, rashmi thank u for
The pm. awaitin next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww it was very emotional update
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the closing of the Bauji Shyam loop. Well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...u always bring about wonderful scenes which wud have made IPKKND more wonderful bt they had strayed from the plot and spoiled its essence completely...
its gud that u showed abt Khushi's parents barsi...
atleast the talk abt contract will make Arnav think of giving Khushi her dream wedding...
also happy that Babuji's role was used atleast here,in the serial he was reduced 2 mere puppet...the serial spoiled essence and beauty of many character and relations...
it was really a very emotional update...poor Khushi she didn't even expect Arnav 2 share her pain and be dr for her when she needed him the most...felt bad for her helplessness...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
now dis is an emotional update 😭

i was having lump in my throat while reading d whole chappy..! 😭

u knw i wat i love d most abt ur writing,dat u alwaz chose d scenario of d show nd represent it in ur ways nd ultimately it cums out to b perfctly beautiful ❤️

i love it how u have made up a scene for khushi's parents' barsi nd arnav accompanying her..!

He did not knw abt it but destiny yet again took him to her to accompany her in dis pious work..!

Finally shyam's truth abt his attempt to kill shashi is also out..!

Goddd last part was too much emotional..!

I can feel khushi's pain nd her words were actually breaking my heart..!

But here my heart goes for both arnav nd khushi..!

Both r in pain,one is in pain thnking abt his mistake which is giving pain to his lady love nd d other is in pain thnking dat her marriage is going to end witin 8 days nd she has to leave her hubby whom she loves wit her evrythng 😭

fabulous update yet again 👏

loved it to bits ❤️

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