Smitar's: Loving Khushi #2 LINK to#3 on Pg 1(13/8)

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surlin_chhabra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Nice one
Finally Anjali would b able to c true face of shyaam

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Awww you stopped at the good part

Wondering what Arnav will say

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ashwakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

loved it...

cant wait to see what Arnav says

please update soon

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meeyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Hi Smita

Remember me?

I have missed this entire FF till now...i dont know how !

Caught up with all of them...

zimply superb madam..take a bow...if the story was treated like this it would have been an epic...

amazing clarity in the characters...they are actually growing...

and what magic did you do on Arnav...he is thinking with both his heart and mind...love him to bits...

Khushi should really put some "physical" space between herself and Arnav if she intends to walk out in another few days...but the qn is ...can she...should she... will she...lol

again am able to think of many things i would love to read about..will PM separately...

it has been long since I told you...
you are an amazing writer ..bas...

love and regards

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Ab aaya Shyam pahaad ke neeche... 😆😆
Time to kick him where it hurts the most.
Poor anjali but she has to come out of his delusions soon.

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LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

waiting for Shyam to be thrown out...

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JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

So finally the triumph card is played. Just loved the snake being trapped and loads of hugs for mami and nani Wht a great performance not to mention arnav he was fabulous. Waiting for the next chappy.

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

loved the interpretation Rashmi di...wonderfully written...arnav and shyam are now in a war field...one against all the good and one against the bad...and now its time for face off...some-ones mask just gonna slip and show the sick, lusty & greedy face...

loved reading the interpretation di...

thnks for the PM...