Smitar's: Loving Khushi #2 LINK to#3 on Pg 1(13/8)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Awesome updates cant wait for Shyams reaction to Arnav taking all the money back. Arnav and Khushu were real cute

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Wow amazing and brilliant updates, both parts were superb.

Awww the bedroom part between Arnav and Khushi was really sweet and adorable.

So Shyam is going to return, can't wait to read his downfall and his reaction when he realised he has been played.

Loved the way Arnav reassured a distressed Khushi and he even made her smile, by reminding her of moments from the past.

Loved the updates, a wonderful read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the PM, continue soon please xx

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

awesome updates loved it loved arnav's teasing
it's time for the plan

loved the way arnav comforted khushi

thanks for the pm Rashmi

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

wow...both the updates were absolutely awesome 😃

what has Arnav planned??? Waiting to find out

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

awesome writing i am loving this story.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Superb updates. Can't wait to see how Shyam falls flat on his face!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

yaaayyiii.....double update.....is this friend-ship day treat...?????......

thnks Smita di...

for part 4/3...

awesome update..... poor khushi...she can keep her mouth shut but how will she hide her eyes, her uneven breath or her raising heartbeats...all these are the symptoms of the bimaari called as falling in love...and our gupta-raizada are on final stage...coming close to infected person may cause the serious attack...but the saddest part is tht...they are gone..no one can save them frm the extreme stage called as 'dewanapaan'...he devi maiyya inki raksha krna......

thnks for the PM Rashmi di...

Edited by manikka - 12 years ago