Smitar's: Loving Khushi #2 LINK to#3 on Pg 1(13/8)

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Tulipdulip

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Awesome!!!... Pls continue soon.. I m addicted...

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LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Smita only u can do it...all the intense scene going on...and all of a sudden khushi fell down and all intensity turned into laughter..

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PARVATHY44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

beautiful update.eagerly waiting to read the next par.continue asap.thanks 4 the pm

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monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

awww... wise n wicked ASR 😉

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Awesome awesome update Smita!!

Just loved how you brought in all those financial details. Our Arnav babua is an expert at these things, but it wasn't shown in the show and I'm utterly glad that you did incorporate it in this story! 😊

I've always wanted to see Arnav's Harvard brains and shaatir dimaag in action. Thank You! 😃

Loved the way he explained to Di, indirectly, that Shyam was interested in only money.

It's unfortunate that Anjali thinks Shyam does charity work 😕 but atleast her brains worked, reminding her of her husband's extravagances.

Shyam will get the biggest shock of his life when his Rani Sahiba tells him to pay his way. He's so dead 😆

And the last part left me in splits. Khushi falling off the bed due to Arnav's subtle touches. She's losing the battle 😆

Arnav Singh Raizada always wins 😉

Loved it loads!

Thanks for the PM Rashmi! :)

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

awesome...!!
now this is the ASR..!!!
w8ng for next...!!!!!!!!!!

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annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Arnav in his seduction routine ...😆 But she is affected so good for him .

Nice update dear.

Thank you for the pm @rashmi.

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

ASR the manipulator...👍🏼
wonder whats they gonna do to shyam babuwa????
n can anjali get any more stupid...

loved the bed wala part. bechari darr gayi. 😆