Smitar's: Loving Khushi #2 LINK to#3 on Pg 1(13/8) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Good to see Arnav asking for Khushi's help.
He's incomplete without her.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
superb update...

congrats on new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Amazing Update
And thanks for the Pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Loved it, Raizada's in action.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Hai...fell in love with this update.
Absolutely amazing.
Loved it so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on thread 2!

Nice to note Arnav thinking calmly and collectedly, keeping in mind Khushi's warning and input with regard to Shyam, and putting his shrewd brain to the task of coming up with a solution to revealing Shyam's truth to Anjali. The risk was phenomenal but… You've whetted my appetite to know what his plan is! Thank the lord he has the sense not to keep his family in the dark but to involve them in outwitting Shyam and keeping Anjali and her unborn child safe. I don't think he has any other option given that he is being pulled in two different directions: to redeem himself in Khushi's eyes and to woo her back and also to keep his Di safe. If he tried to do everything on his own, he would have burnt himself out pretty soon, thus only adding to the melodrama.

Quite touching to see where Khushi's eyes stray first thing in the morning as well as how quickly her concern for Arnav, on seeing his side of the bed unslept in, turns to relief on noticing him on the recliner. How well she reads his mind and expressions also comes as no surprise! A moment later, Khushi tried to free herself from his hold. Arnav pulled her tighter into his arms… While she tries to maintain her distance from him, he literally tries to keep her in his arms, much to her chagrin. By involving her in his plan, it's like he's trying to prove to her that she is an integral part of the family who has a say in what's happening.

Anjali refused, bleating that she wanted her Shyamji with her… what an apt image! During those scenes in the show, she really reminded me of an irritating goat or a spoilt brat throwing a tantrum! Totally loved the HP-Arnav interaction, which left HP reeling and maybe wondering about Arnav's mental health. "Anjali Bitiyaa! How sad she will be when she realises…," Nani could not control her tears… somehow, don't like this Nani very much… her sole focus, like that of the rest of the Raizadas is on Anjali [quite understandable in the circumstances] but why hasn't she or anyone of the others apologised to Khushi now that more of the truth has been revealed? The least Nani could have done is to lift the embargo on her! A pin dropping to the ground would have sounded like a bomb blast… lovely wordplay! Hope that, unlike the one in the show, this nurse won't end up being a closet romantic keen to help two 'star-crossed' lovers meet against the wishes of the family! …thereby aiding her Saasumma in conducting the grand phone theft words that at once give rise to the image of Nani sneaking around, fumbling for the phone! Arnav cupped Di's face… looks like Anjali's mannerisms are beginning to rub off on Arnav! Her phone being passed from hand to hand reminds one of the 'passing the parcel' game! How ironical of Arnav to take a leaf from his sister's book and to emotionally blackmail her to get his way! Somewhere inside Shyam Manohar Jha's deluded wife, Chotey's Di still resided… beautiful sentiments! "Don't worry, Bhai. We are here with her," Akash said, putting an arm around Arnav… wow, PDA from Akash to Arnav… true bromance! Mami referring to Payal as 'Payaliyaa' comes as a pleasant surprise… seems as if the crisis has brought the family closer, making the middle-class daughter-in-law finally acceptable to Mami. I know Anjali is not the brightest spark on the planet, but even she would realise something is amiss if she sees the increased hovering around her and her room! And won't Shyam wonder why he hasn't heard from his Rani Sahiba for two days?

Khushi smiled wryly, "But for me, you wouldn't have had to deal with such a mushkil situation." I do wish Khushi would stop blaming herself for the tragic turn of events… a stalker's victim is in no way to blame for his obsession! She is to blame only for not sharing the truth with Arnav when she had the opportunity, before things spiraled out of control, irrespective of whether he believed her or not! Arnav's words make one go awww! No wonder we end up forgiving him his previous treatment of Khushi!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Amazing smita
All your stories are so good and different
Keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
wow ...great planing by arnav ...hope fully no loopholes ...so shayam is going to pay :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love this Arnav... who thinks before he acts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on the new thread!
amazing update!
good going Arnav!
i have an inkling that arnav is going to name everything to khushi😕

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