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skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Now that was an excellent update...I loved the bold and ptotective payal..!!!

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

An amaZing update loved it

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__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Omg this was beautiful!

Payal is so right in her way...if only she knew what all has happened between them...

And the ending of the update...oh my!

I wish they can finally talk this thing through...

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SaRunHolicc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

wow.. Khushi progressed to vampire :-P

update was good..

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nano123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

I liked the update.

I appreciate the way payal was giving her advice.

I don't know about what arnav is going to talk to her.

But, If it is about marriage.

I would love it.

Update soon.

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

What have u done to us dear? 😃 Loved it

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Wow...What an up-date that was...I am in LOVE with the your style of writing...Oh, OMG...from the moment he turn to the 2nd last word was H-O-T...but the second I read "Baby" I was like...Ahhh...I dont like when anyone calls their lover "Baby"...!!! 🤢 lol *No offence to anyone*

Hope you will up-date soon...!!! 😊

Edited by A.Hajnal - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

😆They are in heat...

Poor PayAl has not understood ... Though I guess she will soon realize .. Ishq aur mushq chhupaye nahi chhupte..

PayAl knows Khushi is affected if she is a good sister not like the selfish one on ipk... She will definitely look out for signs how far their relationship has proceeded.. This time Arnav will have hickeys I love it.,😉

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

Wow! I thought the screen was going to combust!! They truly sizzle in this story. Everything they do and say is so centred around the two of them...it adds to the intensity.

I truly hope though that they talk rather than 😳.

Edited by neverbefore - 12 years ago