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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

what a fabulous part it is... i am numb . its a super solid part. beautifully writtn. dear u are seriously a gem. wat great way u wrote made me stick to it . i feel its a magic u created by words. hats off to u. this is da reason we are still sticking to the same clock. i just love the way u spell a magic using ur words. its tremendous...

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

That was an extremely well written update. It mirrored their feelings and actions as one who cared for the other and in tune with the other.

Lovely update.

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

nice update. that was beautifully written

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sushan

@sushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

First of all what a super chapter you wrote it so very well their love making,without writing details you created the scene very well .Now WOW 2 chapters back to back love it .I am kind of thinking about the prologue does Arnav know what she is doing?I know we have to wait for the answer.Waiting...

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Wonderful surprising update... Ahead of time schedule...thank you...u wrote the most important part of this story very nicely..keep updating...waiting..

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

very very beautiful update loved it

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

That was beautiful .. Now we know what preview meant ..
Bad decision Kushi :(. Both enjoyed and now she alone has to suffer

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shona136

@shona136

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Hey Basanti, Awesome update... Loved it truly...!!!! So glad that both sorted out their problems and fears before they were absolutely sure to take it to the next level. Arnav is such a gentleman to think of Khushi first before his pleasure, since he has been craving to be intimate with her for a long time now.

Khushi's awe at Arnav's immaculate manly body is very understandable... who would be not..???😉😆😳

I guess Khushi herself is very surprised at being so sure and excited at taking the further step, since she herself was always a bit uncomfortable about premarital sex, about Payal and Akash's relationship...!!!

I am very happy that none of them were reckless, or atleast discussed it over and over again before finally making love. I hope no one will blame the other when finally Khushi gets pregnant. Now how she gets pregnant, is what we are waiting to know. Does it happen from this first night of their passion or their further intimate encounters, since now on they will be engaged in a physical relationship.

The love making was written such beauty and grace. We felt the passion brewing between them to explode wen they reached their heights...!!! I really marvel at the way you you have written your story in such an artistic way. Keeps us hooked to it no matter how long you take to update.

Saturday seems like so far away... and my exams start on Sunday as well. But I will surely try to squeeze some time to come back to your story and read the new update. Would not miss it in anyway...!!!😃

If it is not too much trouble for you, I would love to be notified of the updates. My email id is <tathoi90@gmail.com>. Otherwise I 'll happily stalk as I have been doing till now. There is this different type of excitement and exhileration in stalking anticipating an update... 😉

All the best!!! Hope your baby is doing good...!!!🤗

Cheers

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

Nice to read your writing again. Beautiful and sensual updates. Thanks and welcome back.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#510

Aiee, dan consummashun dunn ! 🥳

This was so beautiful and aesthetic, Basanti. The honest conversation, the real concerns and fears, Arnav and Khushi being so true to their characters - Arnav charming, confident and caring; Khushi passionate and anxious. And then they came together and it was magical.

*Trying not to think about the prologue*

I still worry for Khushi, NB. How is she going to look her parents in the eye after this? And whats with the birth control mess.. I am seriously worried. 😒