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Posted: 12 years ago

dont know dear
not sure..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nixdix

<font size="5">UPDATE</font>

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<font size="5">WHEN WILL YOU? KHUSHI???😭😭😭</font>


dont know abt updates dear..
May be this story cannot continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
do not discontinuous
waiting for update
eagerly waiting what exactly main reason
to say know to him and how he will support
her update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Take as much as time u want but pls dont DC
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
finally the got married
waiiting egrly for the nxt prt
cont soon
Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


dont know abt updates dear..
May be this story cannot continue...

Khushi we will wait for the updates! But don't discontinue it please 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tom is holiday i guess...so r u free tom khushi or debo?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Tom is holiday i guess...so r u free tom khushi or debo?


i will try
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-65
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AS registerard ask her she starts sweething nd shicing badly...its not thhat she scared with that name but she scared to took his name in front of virat...nd specially in his own house..on his place..she gluped in fear nd hold her dress in her shivering fist..
R-again ask her-mem aapke father ka naam..?
V-woh is still angry nd fuming in anger bcz of her did waiting for finishing all this..he want to complete all formalities soon nd make her mrs.virat vadhera..as hindu rituals now she is already his wife but he didnt want any panding work on it..he want to change her every identity which can identified her as maanvi..from now..she only identified as mrs.virat vadhera...nd she only nd only belongs to him..no one has right on her..not even her own..she only have one nd last option...virat vadhera..her ligelly proof husband..
He also waiting for her answer which can make it finish soon but god knows why she behaving like sturbbon again nd again..what the hell her problem with telling her full name..??..he look at her side angrily..
V-under his teeth..angily whisper near her ear slowly-maanvi do this fast..jaldi naam bahot apna..
M-hear his voice she get suddent jerk in her thoughts..gluped..try to say something but her vioce gve up..
V-become more angry with her silence treatment-maanvi...ye sab drame se kuch nahi hoga..humari shadi ho chuki hai..tum meri ban chuki ho..now like good wife jaldi se ye sab khtam karo mujhe apne ye drama jald khtm karna hai..agar ab koi drama kiya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..he said angrily in her ear with tighted his teeths..
M-she know now its no way to eascape from this situation..she also know that she tries milions time to hide her past from him..not her but its his bad past..her past related with his worse past..her past distroied his chilhood..his teenage life..his cheerful nature..everything..how his worse past make him heart of stone person..how he made highted boundries around him..he kill that innocent nd carefree virat..who always making pranks nd jokes around him..that insident made his life totally change nd that insident happened in his past which realeted to her..
V-worning tone-maanvi...he said woth squesing her fist...
M-close her eyes nd make her self ready for upcoming flood in her life..
Just the vanshika reached at home..she entered in hall hurriedly nd abt to come near them but stop as she saw maanvi nd virat sitting togather..she got shock of her life to see her fill up mang with sindur nd that mangalsutra..she saw his son holding her hand she looking down..she hear last two sentance from virat..he asking her fathers name..she also aware with upcoming desiter if he know abt her fathers name..his old wounds become live again..that time she lost his cheerfull nd full of son..nd get this emotionless son..who forget how to live life..he only want to revange nd revange..by any prise..he still searching for that men..he never saw his this weak side but he still regrate for this..that he still didnt caugh him..
Vm-come near to them nd abt to stop maanvi but..its late..
M-tighted her eyes nd hold her dress tightly-Miss.maanvi...r..ra..ra...ragh..ragha..raghava...raghavnath...raghavnath...
Hear this name virat taken back with surprise..he little pull himself away from her nd look at her surprisly..he gluped nd mentally prayed to god that..this..this was not that same..no..plz..no..his grip getting loose from her hand..
M-Miss.maanvi raghavnath Ga..gam..gamtey...
As she completed..tears slip from her closed eyes..vanshika look at virat fro his reaction..
As he hear this name he pull back his hand from her nd froze on his place for few minutes...all flash backs starts coming in his mind..on maanvi's face he saw that worse scenes..riwising on her..he tighted his fist angrily...his body starts burring in anger..if this time anybody touch him get hot shock for surly..
Maanvi has no dare to open her eyes nd see his reaction..vanshika get scared with this..as few minutes virat didnt react vanshika slowly walk near him..she abt to put her hand on his sholder nd call him but cut by that registard..
R-ok..
With this virat come out from his angry world..he imigiatly look at maanvi angrily..
V-first time his voice throwing fire in anger..he never sound like this-leave..he said angrily nd loudly..
M-open her eyes nd as she hear this..
R.nd his manager-sir..aap
v-angrily still looking at maanvi-shouted angrily-maine kaha jao yaha se..abhi ke abhi jao yaha se..
V-look at his manager-inhe abhi ke abhi yaha se legao..
Manager-but
v-agar ek aur word nikala to woh tumhara is life ka akhri word hoga..he sound like monster..
Manger-get hell shock to see his this one of most angry avtaar-just nodded in yes nd take all of them out from house..
Now only virat nd maanvi r their of course vanshika also there..
As they left from house virat angrily turn towards maanvi..who shivering badly...
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hope u like
-debo
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note
sorry for late updating
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i changed name of her father...
Plz note this
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i m too busy as my college again starts nd my di cannot update her stories...
Hope u understand..
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so not sure abt story ongoing or note
but this story has 20 more parts...
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thanks u
-debo-
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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