Virmaan : Ek jid Ek junoon : 3-Thread : Part-86+87+88 - Page 17

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kulsum_virman thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
noww wats wrong with manvi what is she going to do and exactly why ???? why willl virat hate her i wanna know the raaz sooon ...
omg virat is hell angry now and precap seems like sumthing wrong is gonna happen ...
virat and sameer's part was soo cute 😃
update sooon plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part Khushi 😃
rocking onešŸ‘ ā­ļø
i toh love ā¤ļø ur every work more day by day
loved it dear
precap seems very interestingšŸ˜‰
waiting for next part 😊



PS; I forget to ask u hows ur hand now...hope its now well
take care😃


love Jannat 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb...loved sameer-virat bond...ab virat ke keher se manvi ko kon bachayega...but i love her jid n his junoon...cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Khushi!! šŸ‘šŸ¼ So now its Manvi's jid Vs Virat's junoon.. Too good.. She wants to go to America and settle down there.. But why? And she said her truth will break him and then he will hate her too.. Really eager to know what she is hiding from him.. Loved Sameer-Virat bond.. He genuinely likes Sameer.. Loved it ā¤ļø.. Thank you for updating.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..! lovely and inetersting Precap.!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update di šŸ‘
loved virat and sameer's bond ..
haww manvi going to america...
now i really wana knw wats dat secret raaaz which will make virat hate her 😲
precap seems interesting...
plzzz continue soon di
love take care
ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update precap look intersting
so she going to tell him truth
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
precap is amazing
cont soon
Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-59
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V-go more close to her face nd cover all distance between them..with full of anger nd iriitation-saaf saaf batao..chal kya raha hai tumhare dimag me?
M-just looking at him..
V-i swear maanvi..apne pyar ki kasam is bar agar aur koi zut yaa drama kiya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..naa mere liye aur nahi tumhare liye..he said with fiary voice..
M-janti hu..bahot..bahot zut bol liya..bahot chupa ne ki koshis kar li..lekin ab nahi..na koi zut naa koi drama..sirf sach..
V-kaisa sach?
M-vahi jise tum janna chahte ho..jise janne ke baad tum khud mujhse nafrat karoge..ye jo pyar..junoon ye sab chize kaha gayab ho jayengi tumhe khud pata nahi chalega..
V-smirk-ek aur nya drama..is duniya asa kuch nahi jo tumhare liye mere dil ko badal sake..mere pyar ko badal sake..kuch bhi nahi..
M-mat karo virat..khud pe itna yakin mat karo..kyuki jab sach ka samna hoga tab chot bhi sab se jyada tumhe hogi..
V-meri chot ki parvah tumne kab ki?..naa abhi naa 5 saal pahele..agar hoti to apni problem batati na ki ye sab beukufiya kar ke mujhe hurt karti..ek simple si love story ko tumne ek dramatical story bana diya hai..bt dont worry tum kuch bhi karlo..ye virat vadhera is baar apne pyar ko kahi nahi gum hone dega..
M-want to argue with him bt she know that here nd specially this time its not making sense to argue with him so she kept silence..
V-as he found her just stood looking away he understood that its really waste of time to make her understood his side..
So he hold her one wrist-dekhte hai kya tutta hai..mere pyar pe mera trust yaa tumhara ye faltu ka drama..lets go..
Nd with this he drag her with him towards parking lot..
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it has been morning in mumbai..
Both virat nd maanvi with sameer reached at mumbai in his privet jet..nd now they r just 10 mnt left to reach at virat's house..
In whole journey maanvi kept silent nd just observing sameer nd virat..nd their meaning less talk on girls..somes abt music..sports..etc..nd here also..both sitting in behind passanger weat where virat sawing out of windows view to sameer..bt maanvi lost in her thoughts...
Many questions ringing in her mind..many fear also growing now inside her..she starts claculate all this..
Virat try to ask her many times for food or coffe bt she refuse..even she didnt saw any reactions or ecxpressions from last few hours which bothering to virat..
He cannot understand her till now..he only know that she hassome feeling for him bt something stoping her..he only know that she is his life..without he cannot even live one sine secound..not even for one moment he can bring her out from his thoughts..even not from his dreams..then why?..why cannot she telling him everything clearly?..why she behaving like puzzle?..why she making every simple single things into very hard nd more confuse?..why cannot she accept him nd his love?..why?..why?..why?
All this thoughts nd questions runing in his mind when he felt sudden jerk..which make him come out from his thoughts..he look around nd found they r reach at vadhera house..
He turn nd look at maanvi who looking down nd lost somewhere..yes..after long hours..he found some reaction in her face..bt for what?..why she getting nervouss nd loooking scare with something..even she didnt realize that car stopped..
V-look at sameer who fall in sleep on his seat..smile at him..he come out from car nd walk towardssameer's side..he open car door nd scup him in his arms nd look at maanvi..in straight voice-hum ghar pahoch chuke hai..chalo..nd he pull sameer out of car in his arms..
As she heard him..she come out in reality nd look at him..nd as he starts walking towards house she slowly come out from car nd close the door..she just stood there nd look around her..she found herself stood in front of big villa..nd car already parked near garden..she cannot get courage to take step towards house..she just looking here nd there..
Here in house virat without looking back walk towards house..he entered in house nd found all servants come near to him..
All one by one-good morning sir..
He just nodded nd ask abt his mom..he come to know that she went to temple..after that he took sameer in his new room which he already arrange for him..with his favrite stuffs..in room he carefully make him sleep on bed..afer covering him with duvet..he come out from there with searching maanvi..
He come out from his house hurriedly..he saw her still stood near that car..looking down nd again lost in something..he felt his anger raising..he angrily walk towards her..
He come near to her nd caught her wrist nd abt to drag her with him bt stop as he heared her..
M-hold his hand which holding her..try to stop him-ek baar aur sochlo virat..kahi tumhari jid tumhe tod naa de..
V-angrily turn towards her nd puss her back with holding her both either side arms-just stop t..he said angrily..
V-angry nd passionatly..leaning close to her-stop all this..tum meri jid nahi mera junoon ho..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-60
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AS he hear her same pleading he lost his temper..he tries to speak with her in whole journey nd try to normal..as he want a new start..want her in his life like as he want before 5 years..one small world..only he nd she..in that world her only songle priority must be virat only..only his rights on her..she only belong to him..nd for he put all happiness below his feet..every single demands he fulfill without her telling..bt all those plans r fail..fail as she left him..she left him without telling him anything nd after 4 long years he luckily found her..bt again she use to trick with him nd lie to him abt her fake marriage with viren..even she didnt clear his misunderstanding that she has no kid..after that she make him confuse everytime with her rubbish nd silly reasons..his anger..passion..posssesivity..obsessive all increacing with her single action bt still he controlled on himself as he feeling guilty for hurting her that night..to gve her that pain on hotel teracce..he who cannot saw single tear in her eyes..he gave her endless pain that night..he know he corrosed his all limits that night nd behave as some wild animal..
He try to be her dream boy..he try to convert in that shape or character which she want..even he gve special place to sameer from his heart..he just want to be with her..wann her accepting him as he accepted her as his life..bt no..she is too stickey nd irritating..he decided by himself that this change virat..a soft virat cannot make her agree which that old virat can do in few minutes..
AS She Again Starts her rubbish..he imigeatly turn back towards her with sudden jerk nd puss her back with force..he pinned her against car nd caught her arms tightly..she scared with his this behavior..
V-puss her with force nd leaning closer her face..with full of anger nd fustrate voice-shut up..he roared..just shut up..
She gulped as she saw his eyes fuming in red colour..
M-her voice sounds like shivering-vi..vi..vir..virat..t..she try to calm him..bt no..
V-as she whisper his name he roared again-i said shut up..-pointing finger towards her..still his one arm holding her arm tightly..too angrily-ek..ek sinle word nahi ab..ek baar aur tumne koi negative baat ki i swear maanvi..apne pyar ki kasam tum us pal ko life time ke liye regrate karogi..he gave worning to him..like last worning..
She again gulped..
V-come more close to her..hide his face in her hair..his lips come near to her ear..he move his one hand towarads her hair..his finger come near to her ear nd remove all hairs there nd put them behind her ear which gave shiver to her..
She imigeatly close her eye nd gulped..she felt the same virat who stood closer to her..
V-pull her closse by wais..with full of passion nd love.bt still angry young virat..learning near her ear..whisper-nd i promis us moment ke liye main kabhi regrate nahi karunga..kabhi nahi..
She felt again getting weak..as his breath..warm breath touching her ear nd her neck..her hands automatically move towards his chest..she abt to puss him back bt stop as she felt him rubbing his face in her hair..
V-pulling her more close with leaning closer on her neck..with full of passion he stars nuzzling her neck with his nose..in between he whisper-bahot wait kar liya ab nahi..bahot baar puch liya ab nahi..nahi ab mujhe kuch janna hai aur nahi ab woh sach mere liye koi maine rakhta hai..
M-just trying to hold herself nd didnt felt bit of energy for pussing him back..
V-continue..still nuzzling her neck..bt this time with passsion..more passion-aur..haa..ek baat aur jitna drama karna ho koshis karlo..lekin is bar ye virat vadhera apne pyar ko kisi kimat pe dur nahi jane dega..chahe jo ho..naa tumhari jid naa tumhari chuppi..kuch kam nahi ayegi..nd i promis..main nahi balki agar kuch tutega to wo hogi tumhari jid aur wo so called confidance jo kal raat tha kyuki ab se tumhe mere pas hi rahena hai..mere karib..chahe ise tum pyar kaho yaa junoon lekin ye tumhari jid ko tod ke rahega..
Nd with all this he place light bt passionate kiss on crook of her neck nd pull himself little back..look at her..their face were just inch away from eachothers..he smirk as he saw her ecxpressions..she holding his shirt in her fist on his chest nd her eyes were closed..she looking scared little..he felt proud on his own self as he make her weak nd numb again..he know his closeness always make her shute nd quite..she cannot defend on this..
V-losing his grip on her arm nd hold her wrist-abhike liye itna kafi hai..under chale?
Nd with this he make her walk with him towards his house..she imigeatly open her eyes as she hear this..she sccared more..what of vanshika aunty is present there??..just then she hear him..
V-entering in house-maa abhi bahar hai..thodi der me aa jayengi tab tak tum fresh ho jao..maine abhi ke liye tumhara saman sameer ke room me rakhvaya hai..
He just telling her all this bt she just hear first line..
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continue next time
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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