~One day in bus n i got my love~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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shelz this one for u

bahut hi chota n just a random thought hai

sorry but muje jo likhna vo concept tu khud likhna chahti hai..sorry for being late..

belated happy b'day


Rey was sitting in the bus,busy in listening the songs when the conductor came n asked for the ticket. He didn't pay any attention as he had his eyes closed n was so involved in enjoying the songs. On not getting response the conducter shaked him


'Oh hello'replied iritated.

he took out his ear plungs n took out the money to give.

He luked up n was shocked that his mouth was open like he saw a monster

'Muh bandh karo' conductor replied closing his mouth

Conductor took the money n was about to go when rey hold her *ab sbko samaj aa gya hoga* ab sbko samaj aa gya hoga* hand.

'Ek minute,tum tum conductor ho' he replied still in shock.

'Haan,kyu kuch problem hai''Haan,kyu kuch problem hai'she replied iritated n trying to get out of his struggle. As she was trying the bus stop with a halt n she was about to fall backward wen he pulled her towards him such that she landed upon him n they both share an eye lock. There eye lock was broken by the hooting of the people. She get up but he again pulled her smirking n again the people started whistling n hooting.

This tym she pushed him n walk away to collect money from other passengers. While during the whole journey he was staring at her n wenever she luked at him staring her. She started cursing him in her mind.


All the pasengers had gone but he was still sitting there smiling n staring at her. Finally getting fed up she told the driver about him n left from the bus n she sighed once she reached knowing he didn't follow her.

This continued for a few days, rey would cum daily n wen she came to collect he would eventually hold her hand or pull her. Finally getting fed up one day, she shouted at him

'Tumhari problem kya hai' 'Tumhari problem kya hai' she replied frustrated.

'Tum he said smiling.

'u bandar'''she yelled.

'wht th,mei bandar toh tu bandariya''rey replied back.All were luking at them. They were fighting as if there was no tomorow. Some passengers tried to stop them n then they realise they were in public. they felt embaressn went back to there respective works as always rey didn't went down n wen kriya was about to go he pulled her such that they landed on a seat with kriya on top of rey. both were luking in each others eyes wen they heard some voices. kriya got up to c n got to know both the doors was locked n the driver had also left. rey pulled his collars up as if he had won a big race while kriya was busy in staring at door. she sat the front seat quitely while rey came n sat next to her. she tried to move away from him but he move more close to him.


'tumhare pass phone hai' she askd

'nhi'he replied smiling

'kya chabis ghante apni bateesi bahar nikal ke rhte ho thakte nhi' she said letting out her frustation

'nhi..'he replied again.

she got up n went back n so did wherever she went inside the bus rey followed her. in anger she pulled him towards her with his collar n asked

"kya hai ?"she asked never seeing the proximity they were sharing..sweat drps wee already on both of there heads. she saw the beads flowing down n move away

'tumhara naam kya hai?' rey asked this tym settling to the seat opposite to her.
'tumse matlab' she said glaring at him.

'arre abhi toh puri raat nikalni hai akele bore ho jaugi' he said with a wink while she widened her eyes in shock.

'aishwarya' she said luking everywhere but not at him.

'but tum toh deepika jaisi dikhti ho' he said as if thinking about her.

meanwhile kriya tried to call for someone through window but there was not even a single clue of someone

'batao na' he said

'bola na'she said luking for something at the upper part of the bus*some wht like diki jajhan samman rkhte hai*

arre tumhara asli naam bolo muje pata hai K se shuru hota hai' he said taking out a bottle fom his bag n drinking.she luked at him how he know n then at bottle..he asked with gesture as if she need coldrink n she repled yes as she was really thirsty.

'phle naam,tumhare locket se pta chala miss. K'rey said showing his teeth

'kriya,,aab do'she took the bottle from him n sat adjacent to him drinking it until it was fully empty

''thank u' she said giving it back...while he put his hand around his shoulder n she removed it.this goes for two three tyms n finally she led him putting it...


they talked n talked whole nite n was enjoying each other's company...n in between rey got to know that they r poor n her mom remains ill throughts thatz y she left study n is working as a conductor..soon kriya slept on one seat as she was really tired while rey sat adjacent to her. once she was in deep sleep..he put her head in his lap n caress her hair..

'u'r really swet kriya.. jab us din tumhe dekha i was shocked not b'coz u'r conductor but to c a beautiful girl..like u that i couldn't belive my eyes..i hope u'r mom get well soon n u continue u'r studies soon' with this he kissed her fore head n go to his her dreamland..as she heard him snoring she opened her eyes she had listened everything n was not able to slepp. she kept rewinding the moments spend with him n a smile crept over her face..she tried to sleep but it was far away.whole nite she was just staring at him n adoring his features...
early morning when he woke up he saw her still sleeping in the same position holding his hand..he smiled n kissed his forehead.

'I love u' he said caressing her forehead..

'me too' he heard her saying n she stared at her in shock n she smiled n open her eyes n sat nxt to him..

'aise kya dekh rhe ho maine tumhe reply diya' n she kissed his cheek.

she touched his cheek n kissed it while he was still staring at her in shock

'kab' he said trying to register that she said it.

'umm vo toh pta nhi but jab kal tumne vo sab bola aab aankhe mat bdhi karo toh bahut acha laga n fir maine bahut socha n finally i realised i love u too' she said

he smiled n was about to hug hiom when she stopped him

'burt tumhara naam'she asked

'reyaansh,colloge student baki sab baad mei puchna plz' 'reyaansh,colloge student baki sab baad mei puchna plz' he said cutely she smiled n both hugged each other n kept on talking..

likes n comments plz...

~~~~~~completed~~~~~~

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 11 years ago

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shelly_Arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww thanks riyu!!
I loved it! Sorry.. tujhe doosra concept use karna tha toh kardeti na 😛
bohot chotta tha.. 😔 Second part milega??
kamini, mujhe patta hai tune bandar aur bandriya kyu use kiya 😆
It was amazing.. ending was cutee!!
Mwahh 🤗
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

See mein unres kar diya...

Sorry bacha it's been 2 months... Sowie...

Wow loved the concept... ❤️

And obviously beautifully written... 🤗

Happy Birthday Shelly!! 🥳 🥳


~Anu~

😊
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resh

unres

it was damn cutee os👏👏

awesomee concept😊

and beautifully written😊

loovveedd ittt👍🏼
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was great and quite fabulous os... loved it... happy birthday
sanju_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os. . .
Kriya conductor. .
Toh uska dress kaise hai?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kriya conductor...😃..
awsome concept loved it...
loved their fight ...
awsome..
thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a really nice one
loved it
simply nice..
thanks for the PM

Arya.100 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahah it was funny a well as cute.. mere sheherwaali.. yaaa
hayeee Kriya as bus conductor... hahahahha... sooo awsummm
vaise tumhe se saare khayal aate kahan se hain??
love ur concepts...
And haaan yeh tmhare bandar, bandariyaa na langooorr... waali baaton se mujhe doubt hot haiii... HMMM kch to zarooor hai... :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os
Happy b'day shaly
👏
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 12 years ago

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