(_*An ArHilicious Tale*_) Link To TH#2 PG1 - Page 88

Yeh Claire bahot jute khaanewali hai

Hurray...!
Completed reading this thread, all in one go. 😆
So let's start from the start.
The story has got an amazing and unique concept.
Unique in the sense that it's less explored by writers. Maybe because not everyone can manage that series of ever changing emotions one has to deal with while writing.
But you did. Perfectly did.
The idea of naratting the story from Khushi's POV was again great.
Frequent incorporations of Arnav's POV was the icing on the cake.
Moving forward, I loved the way story developed and took flight.
Right from the point where Arnav kissed Khushi.
I guessed right there that this man is wasted in love.
He's lost his heart to her.
Would have loved a bit more you could have explained the kiss too in Arnav's POV, in some flashback or some other way.
But that never lessens the spell story casts as we go on reading the chapters after chapter.
Each update outmarvels the previous.
And after reading the 14 chapters, I can never decide which one was the best.
Totally loved the story so far.
Although it pains to stop here, but I have to.
Have got my practical exam tomorrow, so there are stuffs to study and revise.
Will get started with the second thread from tomorrow, after the exam gets over.
Thanks a lot for writing this execellent piece and sharing it with us.

P.S. You are an awesome writer!

-Kiran-

Yeah, I forgot to mention.

Since a long time, I had wanted to read/write a story of such kind. Where Arnav khushi are friends and Khushi is in love with some third person.
But fortunately and unfortunately I found this story here. 😆
So now I don't get anything to write. [;(]
But of course, reading this has been a big treat.
You wrote this so beautifully.
Totally loving this.

Hats off to your writing skills, writing style.

You rock Manjy. (if you don't mind, I'd prefer you calling Manjy. Sounds really cool) 😆

@ Kiran : Thank you so so much! 🤗 I am so sorry I couldn't reply earlier 😊 I am so glad that you liked this FF so much 😃 This FF is kind of my favourite too. I enjoy writing this more 😛

Den i prfr manjy 😛😛 not manjari 😳😳

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Den i prfr manjy 😛😛 not manjari 😳😳

Pooja NO. It's Manjari OR Manji ! That's ALL.

Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb

Pooja NO. It's Manjari OR Manji ! That's ALL.

😆 ahahaha dn prms me ki u wnt call me arnav daughters

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

😆 ahahaha dn prms me ki u wnt call me arnav daughters

Sorry if I am butting in.. (which I know I am)
but Arnav's daughter? 😃
Why so?

Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb

@ Kiran : Thank you so so much! 🤗 I am so sorry I couldn't reply earlier 😊 I am so glad that you liked this FF so much 😃 This FF is kind of my favourite too. I enjoy writing this more 😛

Aww, you wanted to write a story similar to this? 😔 It's fine. you'll come up with a better idea 😊

And yes you can call me manji but with an 'i' not a 'y' 😉

Thanks a ton 🤗

Okays..


I'll call you 'Manji'.. 😃


And once again a big waala thank you for replying to my comment.


Feels so awesome.

P.S. What was that award for?? I am still confused with the name. :p

P.P.S. When are you updating 'An ArHilicious Romance?' anytime soon?

Just came across this story...prologue had me hooked on to read the story...will read and then comment