TaaRey OS!! M only and only yours - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum awesum awesum...plzzz update soon...n yeah hv already sent u buddy req for the PM so plz kindly accept it and do PM me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
precap is awesome
try to cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all for such an awesome response!!

Part 2

So Ananya and Rey sitting in canteen alone just then Taani pass by and her eyes caught Rey sitting with a girl

Taani to herself:Rey kis k saath bethey way hain? (Gives a question look) Taani was abt to enter the canteen when her phone rings

tring tring tring,

Taani:Good Morning Sir

VP:Morning u arrived Taani??

Taani talking on the phone but but her full concentration on Rey:Ya SIr i m

VP:good plz come in my office now its urgent!
Taani:Ok sir!

Taani not want to leave coz she needs to check with whom Rey is sitting alone in canteen but VP's timing is too bad she had to leave

Taani thinks:i'll kill u Rey!

after 15 mints Taani walk out form VP's office just then she see Rey again with that girl and this time Rey and Ananya were laughing looked like they are old friends and having fun with each other this made Taani's blood boil more and now she decides to finally confront Rey she runs to the corridor and block Rey's way by standing in front of him

Rey with a huge smile:Hi sweethe...(he realize Annie is there) i mean Taani

Taani with angry look:Hi Rey

silence...then finally Taani signals Rey with her eyes questioning who is the girl standing with you

Rey:Oh Taani meet Annie i mean Ananya she is Vp Sir's nephew and she came from Delhi to study in our collage

Annie:Hi Taani

Taani with smile:HI Ananya

Rey:uhh..Taani call her Annie

Taani:y so??u said her name is Ananya then y Annie?

Rey:wo actually close frinds k liye Annie hai

Taani in her mind:wow miley hua ik din bhi nahi hua aur Ananya sey Annie friend sey close friend i can't belive this mujh sey dosti karney k liye tu mahino laga diye they!

Taani:Oh ok Annie!

Annie:nice to meet u Taani apke Vp SIr apki bht tareef karta hain i heard alot abt yew

Taani:that's really sweet of him!

Annie:Ok Rey and Taani i have to leave kuch papper work final karna hai

Rey:Ya sure!

Annie:Bye Taani

Taani:Bye

Annie left..Rey move to hug Taani but she stops him by putting her hand on his shoulder

Rey:what??

Taani:Kya ho raha tha??

Rey:Kya mtlb??

Taani:zaida innocent mat baniye

Rey:Taani what's wrong?

Taani:mein us larki...i mean Ananya ki bat kar rahi hun

Rey:Ananya nai Annie

Taani give i'll kill yew look to Rey

Rey:whattt y are u giving me these looks? aur Annie k barey mein kya bat karni hai??

Taani:ap ko aur usko ik saath dekh k tu aisa laga k ap dono ik dosrey ko salo sey jantey hain

Rey:Taani m confused problem kya hai?

Taani:ok fine apko merey mun sey sunna hai tu suniye ap Ananya sey itna frank q ho rahey they aur..aur waha canteen mein akeley us k saath kya kar rahey..aur ye Annie kya hai ajj hi milli hai wo ap sey aur friend sey close friend Ananya sey Annie...(Taani said all this in one breath with her eyebrows raised and giving killer expressions to Rey)

Rey could not help but smile:Taani plz don't tell me ur jealous

Taani turn to another side:mein jealous nahi hun

Rey:Phr CID ki tarha itni investiation q kar rahi ho?

Taani turn to him:mein apki GF hun mera pura haq hai aisa karney ka and u better answer all my questions!

Rey give her smirk and move towards her:agar nahi bataon tu kya karogi

Rey coming close to Taani and she is stepping back

Taani in nervous tune:Rey stop!

Rey:Otherwise??

Taani:otherwise...otherwise main..mein bhai ko bataongi k ap mujhey tang kar rahey hain

Rey with a naughty smile:Oh really tm Swayam ko ye batao gi k mein tmhey tang kar raha tha (Rey come closer to her ear and whispers) Taani don't u think its a bad option

Taani close her eyes in anticipation no matter how angry is she with him but every time he come closer to her she looses her control

Taani puch him:Mera wo mtlb nahi tha aur ap topic mat batliye and don't try to distract me with all these ur romantic acts

Rey pulls her cheaks:sweetheart tum bht cute ho!
Taani:i know that..ap ny merey sawalo ka jawab nahi diye

Rey:arey baba accha listen mein tumhey puri story sunata hun (Rey explains Taani everything)

Taani:wo sub theek hai magar jb puri gang Sharon k ghar gai hai tu ap aur Ananya bhi chaley jatey

Rey:Taani! kesi batein kar rahi ho Annie ajj hi hum sub sey mili hai mein kesey usey Shaton k ghar lejata us ko awkward lagta yar

Taani:and listen ap usko Annie ko bula rahey hain her name is Ananya u got that

Rey:ok ok lady hitler i got it..since everything is sorted can i hug u now??

Taani smiles:No and she runs away

Rey screams:Its not fair!

at night after dinner

Taani is calling Rey but his phone is engaged..Taani again try but still its engaged

Taani to herself:Rey kis sey itni lambi bat kar rahey hain

after half an hour Taani's phone rings its Rey calling

Taani picks up:hello

Rey:hello my angel..kya kar rhi thi?

Taani:apko call kar kar k thaak gai thi tu soney ja rhi thi

Rey with oh shit expressions:m really sorry Taani wo actually mein

Taani:Rehney dijiye Rey its ok

Rey:no listen to me wo mein Ann..i mean Ananya sey bat kar raha tha

Taani is damn upset:Ananya! ap itni raat ko ussey bat kar rahey they?

Rey:han wo actually Vp sir ney usko mera number diya that aur usko collage sey realted kuch puch na tha tu she called me

Taani:half an hour tak ap uski problem sort out kar rahey they?? u know what Rey mujhey bht neened arahi hai mein soney ja rahi hun

Rey in a shouting tune:Taani kya hogaya hai yar tmhe q itna hyper ho rahi ho mein sirf ussey bat hi kar raha tha ajj collage mein tmney mujhsey itney sawal pucho q kar rahi ho itna shak mujh py?

Taani is hurt:i dun wanna talk to yew (she hangs up)

Rey realize that he over reacted:Taani m sorry Ta...

Rey:ahhh damn! kya hogaya hai mujhey yar mujhey pata hai Taani mujhey le k kitni posseive hai phr bhi meiney us py shout kiya tu bht bara idiot hai Rey bht bara i m sorry Taani!

next day in collage!

Rey sitiing in boys locker room lost in his thoughts Swayam arrives

Swa:Hi Rey!

no response

sway:Rey??

again no response

swayam pad on Rey's shoulder:Hey dude!

Rey comes back from his thoughts:hunnn..oh hi swayam sorry yar meiney tujhey dekha nahi

Sway:wo tu theek hai magar tu tention mein lag raha hai sub theek hai (sit besides Rey)

Rey:han han sub theek hai

Sway:Reyyy swayam gives a u can't lie to me look

Rey finally gives up and tell swayam the whole incident

Sway:oh tu ye baat hai

Rey:Yar ye larkiya itni complicated q hoti hain?

Sway:Larkiya complicated nahi hoti bus hum larkey un k barey mein thorey stupid hotey hain..anyways tu wo sub chor ab plan kya hai?

Rey:kya plan yar koi plan nahi hai

sway:i can;t belive this Rey the master mind k pas koi plan nahi hai

Rey:yar teri behen na pagal hai bilkul hai agar mein ussey manney jaonga u wo aur upset hojaye gi

Sway:hey watch it meri behen ko merey hi samney pagal bol raha hai tu

Rey:arey yar ik tu tu aur teri behen na!

Sway:accha chor chal ja maaf kiya (Rey give him a m thankfull to yew look)

sway:accha tu ik kam kar 10 min mein mujhey fire escape mein mil

Rey:magar q?

Sway:tu bus ajana wahi bataonga

Rey:arey lekin bata tou kya bat hai (swayam leave) ajeeb hai yar

after 10 mints Rey is in FE w8ting for swayam

Rey taking to himself:kya yar ye swayam bhi ajeeb hai mujhey bola k khud ka pata nahi hai

just then Taani opens the FE door..

Rey:kya yar Sway...(sees Taani) sorry i thought Swayam hai

Taani with full attitute:AP yaha kya kar rahey hain mujhey bhai ney yaha bula hai

Rey replis back with same attitute:han tou mujhey bhi Swayam ney hi bula hai

Rey gets Swayam's plan that he wants both of them to talk to each other and thinks (Saley sahab ap kamal hai)

Taani think:yaha kharey reh k koi faida tu hai nahi aur upper sey Rey bhi yaha hai i better i leave from here (She is abt to go whenRey grab her hand and pull her)

Rey:Taani listeni

Taani struggle to get rid from his grip but she failed: Rey leave my hand and let me go i dun wanna talk to u!

Rey:Taani plz just 5 mints plz

Taani:No i said na i m not interested aur weisey bhi ap ko mujh py chillana hogatu plz rehney dijiye

Rey understands that she maha upset abt last night Rey hold her by shoulders :Taani m really sorry I didn't mean to hurt yew wo bus aisey hi mere y mun sey nikal gaya tha plz Taani forgive me

Taani: no Rey! M not gonna accept ur apology u know what Rey agar ap meri kisi glati k liye mujh py shout kartey tu mein ap sey gussa nahi hoti but mujhey bura is baat ka lag raha hai k apney ksi teesrey ki waja sey mujh py shout kiya

Rey: I know Taani I know I m the who is at fault but plz understand tm us wqat itni wiredly bat kar rahi thi aur kal collage mein bhi tum ney Annie..i mean Ananya ko le k itney sawal kiya they tu bus mein thora irritate hogaya tha

Taani:Rey mein ap sey pyar karti hun nahi dekh sakti mein ap ko kisi aur k saath mujhey jealousy hoti hai aur apki GF honey k haq sey meiney ap sey itney sawal kiya but mujhey nahi pata tha k mera koi haq nahi hai ap py..

Rey:Hey sweetheart plz aisa mat bolo tmhara mujh py mujh sey zaida haq hai tm jab chaho mujh sy kuch bhi puch sakti ho

Taani: Promise me ap kabhi bhi mujh py nahi chillayen gay

Rey: I promise!

Taani:ok

Rey:I know tm mujhey leke bht possessive ho magar ik bat yad rakhna that m only and only yours mein tumharey ilawa kisi aur k barey mein soch bhi sakta

Taani smiles and hug him: I know that!

Rey hug her back: finally tumney mujhey hug kiya I missed u my angel

Taani:I love yew

Rey:Love yew too

Rey:Taani itney misunderstanding k bad ik kiss tu banti hai

Taani broke the hug: Reyyy

Rey: what Rey? M just asking for a kiss

Rey start moving close to Taani..Taani moves back and get nervous by his every step..Taani's back hit the wall and finally Taani close her eyes coz she had no other option Rey smile on her signal and move closer to her lips just one inch away they both feeling each others breath and Taani breathing heavily

Rey:I love u Taani

And finally Rey placed his lips on Taani's and they both enjoy their liplock!


The End!! So guys this was my OS..Thank u thank u thank u so much for all ur love wich u gave me through ur comments really mean a lot!! 😊 Sorry to make u guys w8 for 2 days..


Edited by AreebaKsgian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I forget to thank silent readers to thanx to them also!! 😊

And guys m sorry if i missed anyone's name for PM!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
let me read
aww tht was really cute n swt
one awsm i luv thr liplock thanks for PM
Edited by raddhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
lovely lovely so ...i loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awesome update loved it and it was beautifully written loved Taani's jealousy side
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
superbbb loved it loadsss
plz do write more os like this
as am mising taarey but after reading ur os felt better
thank u loadsss yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Super se upper hai 😊
i can imagine Taani's reaction on jealousy...
Lubd de ending
happy ending
plzz do write mre OS
it makes feel happ afta ol wot happen
brilliant job
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
omg such a perfect ending love it si much plz keep writing

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