Swaron SS/os- ~Secret meeting ~ CHAPTER :-3 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Nice beginning
Lovely nd very cute
Swaron laila majnu
Sharon teasing Kriya...awww cute
continue soon
Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: anandita

<font size="3" color="#ff00cc">mere anmol anmol bhaiya...😆
bola tha naa mast h concept..!!!
and now ur seeing the result..!!
bolo am i right or am i right...??
as a writer my work is to motivate and help u..!!😊
as a reader to appreciate u..!! and ask 4 more..!!😳
as a sister..!! to be by ur side and say...FADHU H BOSS...!!!😉
and as ur devil...!!! hehe...!!! dekho toh...!!🤬
so i am doing it in everyway..!!!
the os was superb...!!!
akhir m with u..!!!😆
so keep going..!!

PS i posted it naa..?? so edit kyun kiya..??? gayi mehnat pan</font><font size="3" color="#ff00cc">i mein..</font>😆<font size="3" color="#ff00cc">.😛</font>




tnxx sissy 4 be my side nd ur best ur always r8..
because ur my sisster...hehe!!! ur also a devil...

p.s:- sorry 4 editing tujhe tnx to bhi khana tha...

Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Wow .shaadi...mujy b attend karni hai swaron ki shadi...lol...jikes apart but loved it eagerly waiting for next one plzake it quick and do pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Lovely!! It was so cute and romantic just like Swaron<3
Can't wait for more. Cont sooon and do pm me :)
Would love to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
cute os..luvd it ..swaron gng to get married.. the phn convo was really vry gud..and the secrt metng...❤️..waitng for nxt updates..update the nxt part soon..and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
loved it anmol...awesome os 😊😊convo ans meeting its cute😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter :-2

IN EVENING

All are gatherd in RAI PRAKASH MANSION

for celebreating sangeet of sharon and swayam

shekhawat entrs...

but one pair of eye search only 4 his angel...

he wears a white sherwani ...

when he search 4 his lady love then one girl came from behind nd kept her hand on his eyes

girl:- pehachano kon???

sw:- kriya...

kr:- kaisa pehachana...

sw:- app to hamari sali kum bst frnd ha to kaisa nhai peechante..

kr:- kzzz... waisa kise dhund rha ho...

sw:- aapki di ko...

kr:- kzz magar apko wait karna pada ga..

sw:- kyu??

kr:- apke liye saj - swar rhai ha ..

sw:- (dremingly) wo to jaisa bhi ho hamesa acchi dikhtiha...*smiles* tannu wali

kr:- ahemmm ahemm...

sw come out of his sharonland then kriya said

kr:- a gai di...

nd run in the direction from where sh is come...

sw also look in d same direction

nd a beautiful girl (for sw khubsoorat no other words define her beauty)
she wear a pink colour lengha in which she look like an angel (aisa lag rha tha jaisa swarg se direct koi pari earth pe a gai ho)

then she see her life her swayam

then they share a small eye lock which is broken by rey

rey (touch his elbo to sw):- bhai bhabi ko dekne ke liye sari umar padi ha...

sw *blushes*:- shut up...

then they both sat on their seats

sw( wishpers 2 sh) :- u looking khubsoorat

sh :- ap bhi handsom lag rha ho(wishpers)

sw:- app?? aj tak to kabhi bola nhi ..mom se marrige classes le rhai ho *winked*

sh:- shut up*blushes*

sw:- itna bLush mat karo warna sab dar jay ge thumar red cheeks dekh ke...*chlucked*

sharon checkes turned into more red like tamato

kr:- love birds hum bhi yha pe ha

all*giggled*

then sharon dad made a announcement that sangeet first song is started by rey nd kriya

rey:-
Wah wah Ramji, jodi kya banaayi
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se
(same as film me jaisa hat jod ke karta ha)

kr:-
Aap ki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi
Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se

(like madhuri dixit)

rey:- Wah wah Ramji

kr:- Wah wah Ramji

rey:- Wah wah Ramji
Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hai
Dekho bhabhi yeh kaise aithe hai
Aise bade hi bhale hain - 2
Maana thode manchale hain
Par aap ke siva kahin bhi na phisle hai

(come b/w sh and sw nd rey face towards sh nd pointed twsds sw then sw show him hand )

kr:- Dekho dekho khud pe jiji itraai

rey:- Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai

kr nd rey:- Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

rey:- Wah wah Ramji

kr:-aree Wah wah Ramji

rey:- Wah wah Ramji

kr:- Suno jijaji, aji aap ke liye
Meri jiji ne bade tap hai kiye
Mandiron mein kiye phere - 2
Pooja saanjh savere
Teen lok, tain tees devon ko yeh rahi ghere
( she as like madhuri both hand joinned as doing prayer nd both hand
in air )

rey:- Jaisi maine maangi thi, vaisi bhabhi paayi
(hold both shoulder frm behind nd sh shuffel his hair

kr:- Arre wah wah Ramji

rey:- wah wah Ramji

after that all give then a big appulds ...

they said thank u ...

then all d boys boys take swayam with him and all d girls take sharon ..

then all palced chair b/w them and made sw sit on it..

all d boys made a circle around a chair..

then rey sings nd girl also joind d circle
rey:- Ek kunwara phir gaya mara, phas gaya dekho yeh bechara - (2)
Do din kee hai yeh chandni, phir kari kari rat hai
Too mann ja dulhe raja

all;- (Tak ser khaji, tak ser khaja
Kal teree shadee teraa baj gaya baja) - (2)
Ek kunwara phir gaya mara, phas gaya dekho yeh bechara

(all boys nd girls take round around swayam and showing him fingers nd tickling him)

vicky:- Ankhiyo ke pinjare me bandh karake, le gayee jo tujhko pasand karke
Sonee sonee mithi baatein chand karke, kismat apni buland karke

all:- Hey hey hey hey hey hey...

vk:- Ankhiyo ke pinjre me bandh karke
Le gayee jo tujhko pasand karke
Sonee sonee mithi baate chand karke, kismat apni buland karke
Sach kya hai jara jan le, us chehre ko pehchan le
Unki galiyan me naa ja

all:- (Tak ser khaji, tak ser khaja
Kal teree shadee teraa baj gaya baja) - (2)
Ek kunwara, phir gaya mara y
( vicky goes behind sharon nd close her eyes with his plam nd after that point towards his face nd her mouth is like 'o' shape nd make his hand as a road first take those hand forward nd then backward) and swayam just smilling

nil:- Aaj hasle too kal rona padega, sukh chain tujhe sab khona padega
Jab woh kahegee uthh jayega too, jab woh kahegee tujhe sona padega

all:- Hey hey hey hey hey hey...nil:-aaj hasle too kal rona padega
Sukh chain tujhe sab khona padega
Jab woh kahegee uthh jayega too
Jab woh kahegee tujhe sona padega
Karni hongi ghulamiya, teree hongi salamiya
Aa laut ke bandhu aaja
( he goes near sw and smile then suddenly start cry by throw water on his eyes nd all boys carry sw nd he pretends as he slept nd then suddenly jerked up as he awake by some noise nd all take him near sharon nd then pulled him back)

all:-(Tak ser khaji, tak ser khaja
Kal teree shadee teraa baj gaya baja) - (2)
rey:- Ek kunwara phir gaya mara, phas gaya dekho yeh bechara
Do din kee hai yeh chandni, phir kari kari rat hai
Too mann ja dulhe raja

all:-(Tak ser khaji, tak ser khaja
Kal teree shadee teraa baj gaya baja) - (2)

as soon song finish swayam goes near sharon stands with her..

then all gang also came near them

nil (speaks):- so swayam kuch smaja nd smriks

sw :- (clamaly) ye song mere liye nhai bana sharon is the best nd she allways with me nd be my side
*smiles*

all:- ohhhohhhohh *teasingly*

sharon only blush at his comment nd give him her angleic smile...

suddenly kriya spoke

kr:- so jija i challange u ki ap di ki ko gana gana ke liye majbur kar do wo bhi rommentic style me...

sw (thinks 4 smtime):- challange accepeted...

kr:- kkk nd ( wispers in sh ear) ki di plzz bacha lena...

sh:- kzz i try...*thinks* kaisa try sw jaru ye challange jite ga...

sw:- but 1 condition jab me bolou ga tab koi nhai bole ga???

kr:- k done jija ji...

TO Be continued...


Precap :- masti... Meeting. Nd phela nasha




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Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
cute...
update soon!!
want to knw which song swayam sings for sharon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nycone dear...update d next part soon...waiting for pehla nasha.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
superb update
simply amazing
and waiting for PEHLA NASHA ☺️
thanks for the PM
update soon

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