Virman FF: Unexpected Love ~ Updated Chapter 5: Page 78!!

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wonderfull updt...full of jeeman...loved their bond...waiting fr virmaans encounter...cont soon

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awesome start

loved it

loved maanvi's pov

she is so sweet

waiting for next update to know virat's reaction to see maanvi in office

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awesome update
im worried for virman nw
wats gonna happen wen thet officially meet at work
mat god be with them n save their souls from each other
excited for next part
continue soon 😉

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Tuba KHAn

@Tuba_KSG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hyii Zainab 😉 ..
ahaAn ⭐️ sO this one is ur first ever writing stuff 🤔 .. hmM I DOUBT that 😛 .. Cox it was just amazing .. 👏 and again u said that u are not goOd with summarizing things 😕 , and aGAIN i DOUBT that , coz Prologue was also Awesome 👏.. amazingly summarized about love hate relations 😊 ..
Character Sketches Were Also Nice .. 👍🏼
UPDATE was BANG ON 😊 .. scene description , dialogues everything was just Perfect .. 😳
LOL i loved jeevika maanvi lil SHOLLY+NAUTANKI wala scene 😃 .. n vO Advise Wala scene b i loved .. 😊
waiting for their first professional meeting ..
ThnksSh for the PM , Cont. Soon n DO PM ME .. 😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wowww really interesting concept and CS...
and the first chappy really good ..manvi's pov on working with virat theri relation and their attitude towards eachother it was sooo much fun reading it ..and then her nautanki with her diii was such a drama...manvi undoubtedly sounds the fun loving character 😃

wanna see how virat reacts knowing its manvi whum he going to wrk with and the mess they create together 😆
you write soo well doesnt look like its for the first time 👏
update next part soon and do pm me 😃

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

omggg zainab this is dammm fun stuff to read

i love ur writing style its really cool u know makes it even more intresting to read...well the synopsis was bang on and was my fav part character sketch was also well written and ahhh the update chapter 1 was a blast i loveddd it to the core cant even explain...u really have some talent girl where were u all this time i dont believe ur writing for the first time its just seems like a joke reading how good u write will love to read more...pm me when u update and make it soon girl i will be waiting lol

lots f love ❤️

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Heyaa this is a lovely start! 👍🏼

I can totally see how Manvi is reacting to this unexpected situation.

I am liking this fashion industry idea rather than the usual..typical music artist.

I am eagerly waiting for Virat's POV. (he is my fav, slightly biased towards VV bros hehe..so expecting him to share his feelings with Viren just like Manvi did with her Di)

oh gosh I loved reading it, especially because it is grammatically correct and proper English...it just makes it that much easier to enjoy the reading. hooray!

welldone for the hard work, hope to read more interesting long updates soon!

will be expecting a PM :)

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

awesome update
loved it.. Loved the Convo between both sisters
update soon..thanks for the pm

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

awesome update...

can't wait to read more...

plzzz update soon...

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

wow brilliant update dear. Prologue CS were perfectly described. Loved manvi's pov. Nd jeeman talk was so cute. Jeevika is very mature na mannu is very sweet nd cute here. Love the way how she said sorry again nd again in a cute way. Aww virat is manvi's boss bt they always fight. Hmm would love to read next part aswell. Eagerly waiting for the first part plz cont soo nd thanx for the pm