Virman FF: Unexpected Love ~ Updated Chapter 5: Page 78!!

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: cutie_pie101
Luv the it Z!!!! It's really awesome!!! Nice writing keep up the good work!!!! 😃

Thanks Trin for commenting!🤗

Aww..Really? 😳

Who knew you were capable of giving compliments!😆

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: tinni04
ur update was awesome...loved it.thanks for pm...sorry for the delay...busy in exams.

Thanks for commenting!😛

Don't worry, I understand!😃

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Wow... Finally you updated!!!😊
It was good to have your update after so long Zainab!

Nice chapter... Though not much Virman interactions, but I enjoyed reading it
Poor Hari prakash and the guards, Viraat literally blasted them
And Miss Chaudhary, she is also great... She really completed the work in one night!!!
Now who is this woman who made our Viraat upset? and Karan, well I can't say much about him, cause I am yet to analyse him... But he seems quite a flirt

Thanks for the PM dear
And pls update soon...😊

Thanks for this wonderful comment, Nik!🤗

Haha..Yeah, time is not on my side! Like never! And I am sure you and I both know that!😕

Anyways, always love reading your comments! They are always so accurate and spot-on with what I want to portray! How do you get it right every time?

Hmmm..Good question, but won't get the answer yet! Or maybe you will?😉

Well, your right about the flirting, but let's see what you have to say about him in the future!😃

And no need to say thanks! I think we're past that stage by now!😳

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: sukklover

dear...😛

4 PMing Me..😊..

ur updates r just ... n

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just dear.😃..

4 ur

updates...😃...

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️
Tama

Thanks Tama for your beautiful comment!😳

Appreciate that you take the time to do this!😃

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: neetnia
hmmm hello ji...
mujhe update achi lagi.. main ne bathadya aap se pehle ri8???? but kaha da ki it was an ok ok update 4 me.. yeer vo main ne tere bp badane k liye kaha da.. 😆 dil pe math le..
teek hai ab update k baath kare.. tumare vo writing style hai nah vo mujhe bohoth pasand hai.. jab manvi ne virat pe dhasu dialogues marthe ho nah, main bi temper hojathi hu,, jab manvi annoy hojathi hai nah thab main bi hyper hojathi hu.. same like jan vo lift pe jadi nah mujhe laga mere lift jootreh,, 😆 i can feel each and evey emotions that mannu going tru.. hats off 4 that..
kthna suspence daloge yaar.. ek vo lady, usse tho baad mai dekhlnge.. but vo karan..hmmm vo doda jyada dangerous lagreh..mujhe..
bechara virat insecure banake varvane ka plan hai kya tume.. anyways All the Best!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luuuv possessive viru .!!!! 👍🏼 lage raho bachuuu 👍🏼
waiting 4 ur next dhasu aur wonderful aur lammmba sa update..

Hmm..Hello ji back to you!

Thank you for this lovely comment, Neet!😳

Haha..My BP won't go that high from that!😉

Aww...Compliment pe compliment! What are you doing to me!?🤣

Seriously! That mean's so much to me Neet! Really do try my best to express the character's emotions and keep the story interesting for you readers!🤗

I think you might have gotten it wrong! The mysterious lady might be more dangerous then innocent Karan!😉

Oh thanks Neet for giving me your permission, but how jealous do you people want bechara Virat to feel! 😆

Will be waiting for your dhasu, lammmbbbaa comment as well!😛

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: GOOGLU
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