Vrimar SS- ABCD 2 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing character sketch!!! damn excited for the ss to start!!! keep up the good job niha
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luvly charactr sketch...updte soon n pm me..
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d cs was nyc
plz I m damn eager to read this ss
plz plz try n updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jldi daalo yr we r wating👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

I know I made you wait for a long time, but can't help it! Had gone away for vacations and just finished my exams! So enough of bak-bak, here is the story:

And 5,6,7,8 Rock the dance floor, come on..Hey ek zindagi do isko ek chance, dekhe dekho dekhe dekho dil o jan...'

D3's gang were rehearsing for the title track of D3. As Taani had left they had to make a new one now.

"Amar, phone hai tereliye!" said Palki. "kiska hai?? Abhi rehearsals chal rahi na, badme phone karne keliye keh dena!" replied our hottie.

"Amar, Remo D'souza ka hai!" Palki said. "Kya? Remo sir??" asked a shocked Amar "Han. Line one par. Jao phone le lo!" prompted Palki.

Amar ran to the reception of Cinevistaas and hurriedly picked up the receiver..."Hello?"

"Hello, han Amar?" asked Remo sir. "ji, sir. Aap aise achanak se? kaise call karna hua??"

"Woh actually hume log se ABCD' ke liye itne achi comments milgayi ki humne ABCD2' banana ka socha hai." Replied Remo sir.

"Oh. Achi baat hai sir, congrats!" Amar said. "Oh Thank you. Actually hum soch rahethe ki, kya tum humare lead ban sakte ho iss baar. We're not forcing you, just asking." Said Remo sir.

"Main?...sir I'm all okay with it, but yeh D3 bhi chal rahi hai na toh thodi mushkil hai...I have to check with Palki." Said Amar. "Its okay, take your time and check your schedule. Aur Palki se koi compromise karlena." Replied Remo sir.

"Jee sir. Main kuch dekhta hun." Amar said "Okay then, will be waiting for your call. Bye." Said Remo sir. "Bye sir."

Shocked about this huge news Amar returned to the rehearsal hall. There he saw everyone on the floor discussing the costumes and props.

"Arre, tujhe kya hua Amar?" asked Macedon. "Bohot hi shocked lag rahe hai. Remo sir ne tujhe gaali di kya, DID mein ache se dance nahi karne ke liye?" Everybody giggles.

"Nahi yaar, aisa nahi hai." Said Amar. "Remo sir ne mujhe unke naye film ABCD2' keliye, as lead cast kiya hai. Toh main sirf aise hi soch raha tha ki mein D3 aur movie ko ek saath kaise handle karun?"

"WHAT?! Tu lead play karega? Who bhi Remo sir ke film mein??!" Asked Archi.

"Wow yaar! Congo!" congratulated Shantanu.

Soon everybody began to praise him and started asking for details.

"Tum wahan kab jaoge?" "Kuch acha pehen kar jaana, okay?" "Sab ka autograph lana pls." "Tumhare dialogues ko ache se yaad karna, okay?" "Wahan pe kuch gadbad mat karna, okay?" and so on the gang irritated him..

"Okay, OkAY, OKAY." Screamed Amar. "Mujhe pehle Palki se baat karne do."

He left for her cabin..

"May I come in?" asked Amar. "Han, han..bol kya hua." Replied Palki "I heard some noise so I was about to come there. Seriously you guys behave like school kids."

Amar tells about his convo with Remo sir. "WOW!" exclaims Palki. "That's such huge news." She hugs him tightly.

"Palki mujhe jeena hai, pls chodo!" said Amar.

"Thike, ab sun. Kuch acha pehen kar jaana, okay? Sab ka autograph lana pls. Set pahunchte hi pls mujhe ek miss call de dena! Tumhare dialogues ko ache se yaad karna, okay? Wahan pe kuch gadbad mat karna, okay?" and so on and so forth Palki kept blabbering.

"Aur tum hame school kids bula rahi thi!" told Amar.

"Arre, chod na." said Palki. "Itni badi baat hai, kuch treat weat milega ya nahi?"

"Treat tumhe movie release hone ke baad milegi!...Ab Palki, mein D3 kaise manage karunga?" asked Amar.

"Rahi baat D3 ki wo toh tum mujh par chod do. You just chill and enjoy your big break!"

xxx

The next day:

Tring Tringgg TRINGGG!! "Arre chup karna yaar!! Itne subah subah utha tha hai!" Said a sleepy Amar trying to shut the alarm clock off.

He wakes up and checks the time. "Arre Baap re!! 9 baj gaye! Set par pehle din hi late! Oh Shit!" He runs to the washroom and gets ready quickly.

Clad in white shirt and tie with a black jacket and jeans he left for the sets..

He quickly parked his car in an empty spot and ran to the entrance of the huge set.

The security guards directed him to the ballroom in which the briefing about the movie would be done.

Upon reaching there he saw everybody already there.

"Arre baap re, aaj toh mein mar gaya!" said Amar to himself knowing that Remo sir liked punctuality..

"Came at the last second then, han Amar! Sab tumhara wait kar rahe the!" said Remo sir. "Sorry sir, who actually..." stammered Amar. "Its okay, don't worry you're not the last one to come. Hamari heroine bhi late hai!" said Remo sir.

"hmmm...Heroine kaun ho sakthi hai?" said Amar to himself. "Amar jao jaake sabse milo...lets see whether tumhari partner jaldi aa jati hai ya nahi."

He went and met everybody and was introduced to the ones he didn't know.

"Finally, our heroine has landed from her busy schedule!" exclaimed Remo sir gesturing towards the beautiful lady standing at the door. "I'm very glad that you came in such a short notice!"

"Oh, its all my pleasure!"

"Wait haven't I heard that voice before?" Amar asked to himself. "I might know her!" Saying this he turned around and "What?????" he said surprised...

Okay so that was the 1st chapter! Hope you guys like it and you can show it to me by liking, commenting and introducing this ss to your friends! Come on guys this is the only way we can keep TaaRey alive!

And p.s. do guess who's Amar's heroine!

And pls I beg of you-pls write some nice comments. Anything will do! Even if you want to bash me (definitely not TaaRey) you can! But pls comment something long and nice!

Edited by Charmartaarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Finally updated

awesome chapter

amar lead in abcd2

Heroin hamari vrinda hi hogi

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum start
n plzz pm me next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
wow awsm yaar amar got big break
n nce palki told him to do movie n vrinda
is here thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
great update yar...of course vrinda hi hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Lovely update n the heroine must be vrinda :)

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