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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Hello Guys...

When i read the update i thought its length is more than enough so i didnt add my words in it... Its wholy written by her... I just added the qoute in the end...

So all the appreciation will b wholly of her's..

This time m sending pm's to everyone.. But from next time it will only b sent to those who will like n comment.. Coz i knw how much efforts a write has to face to write an update that too so long..

Update in few Hours..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
awesome precap
hope manvi is fine
continue soon
thanks for the pm
-smily
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

No
no
no
sholly mili...
Ab update dedo...



Hmm...
Just going to post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: virman.lover

awesome precap

hope manvi is fine
continue soon
thanks for the pm
-smily



Thanxx..
Ur welcum.. n m just going to post it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85



Recap:

Rohan: Maa.. maan... maanvi rish.. rishikesh mat.. matl...matlb..

Virat: matlab kya rohan..

Rohan: (tear escaped from his eye).. Me abhi apne friend se bus stand pr milne gaya tha.. wahan sab baat kar rahe the k Rishikesh jaane waali bus ka accident hogaya hai..

All became shocked..

Guys if u r not understanding as the story stopped since long so plz read last few chapters than u'll understand..


Part 15

Happy Reading..😊

Virat came back to his senses.. His eyes burned in anger.. How can he believe that the love of his life will leave him in the middle of their journey.. He took big steps towards Rohan n took the remote from his hand n threw it towards the T.V..

THUD...

The noice of the breaking glass brought everyone to the present... Virat looked at Rohan through his anger filled eyes...

Virat: (holding his collar).. Shut up.. dare u say that again n i will dig u alive.. Meri Maanvi ko kuch nahi hua hai.. Vo bilkul thk hai..

He left his collar n turned towards his family..

Virat: (lil smilling).. Ap log fikar mat kijiye.. use kuch nahi hua.. Vo kisi kaam se gayi hogi.. Abhi aajayegi.. (looking at jeevika).. haan abhi aajayegi..

But What he was doing..?? Making his family to believe on it.. Or to himself..??

Jeevika came towards Virat n looked at him disbelieveingly..

Jeevika: (standing still).. Virat... Me.. Mer...
Meri Man.. Mannu...

Virat immedietly cut her..

Virat: Nahi bhabhi... plz aage nahi... (holding her from shoulders) Mujh pr vishwaas kijiye.. Maanvi bilkul thk hai...

Jeevika: (wiped her tears n smilled).. Haan Virat meri mannu ko kuch nahi hua... kuch nahi..

Swamini Bua came in between them..

S.B: Pr jo humne abhi abhi news mein dekha. hum use nazar andaaz b tou nahi kar sakte.. Humen ek baar hospital chal kar dekh lena chahiye..

She stopped at Virat's roaring Voice..

Virat: Bas Bua... Koi hospital nahi jayega.. aap log samjh q nahi rahe... kitni baar kahun maanvi bilkul thk hai.. aur vo...

He stopped at he heared Rohan;s sentence will bolied his anger..

Rohan: (still coping up from the shock.. sweats on head).. ME HOSPITAL JAA RAHA HUN..

He started to walk.. by hearing him Virat shouted on top of his lungs..

Virat: SUNA NAHI.. KOI KAHIN NAHI JAAYEGA..

Rohan turned towards him..

Rohan: Me yeh kabhi nahi maan sakta k maanvi ko kuch hua hai.. lekin jab tak me use apni aankhon se nahi dekh leta.. mjhe chain nahi milega.. Aur mjhe koi farq nahi padta koi mere saath aaye ya nahi..

He turned n walked towards the door ignoring the threats of Virat..

Jeevika was scanning the whole scene.. She wasn't able to think what to do.. what to beleive..

Viren walked towards Virat n tapped his shoulder..

Viren: Mujhe pata hai k maanvi humen chodh kar nahi jaa sakti.. pr ek baar.. bs ek baar apni satisfation k liye humen dekh lena chahiye..

Virat: (disbelieveingly). Bhai... Aap b??

Viren: nahi virat me yeh nahi keh raha... pr plz ek baar.. humare liye na sahi.. maanvi k liye..??? plz..

Virat thought for a while n nodded his head.. All trio went towards the car..

Viren was driving.. jeevika sat beside him on the passenger's seat.. Virat was sitting behind...Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes... He was looking outside the window...

Virat: (to himself).. Q maanvi..??? Q..?? Q kiya tumne esa?? Sirf mere liye... itna pyaar karti ho mjhse.. Meri jaan bachane k liye itna kuch saha tumne.. Meri baaten.. Tanya k saath mera rehna.. Sub kuch akele sehti rahi tum.. me aj tak yeh samjhta tha k me tumse sub se zyaada pyaar karta hun.. but.. nahi.. Tumne mjhe ghalat prrove kar diya.. Sach tou yeh hai k jitna pyar tum mjhse karti ho.. utna koi kabhi kisi se kar hi nahi sakta... Ek sacha pyaar karne waala hi apne pyaar k liye itni takleefen utha sakta hai.. Itna pyaar maanvi..?? k mere hi liye mjhse dur hogayin.. kyun liya mjh jese selfish insan se itna pyaar.. nahi hun me is layak.. pr maanvi.. ab tou sab thk hogaya hai.. sab clear hogaya hai.. tou fir q mjhse dur jaa rahi ho.. me maanta hun k mene buhat ghalat kiya.. buhat hurt kiya tumhen.. tum jo saza dena chaho manzur hai mjhe.. Pr mjhse dur jaa kar jeete jee mar jaane ki saza.. nahi .. plz yeh nahi.. me tumhen ab aur khud se dur jaane nahi de sakta.. aur na jaane dunga.. (wiped his tears)... tumhen mere paas lout kar aana hi hoga.. Aur is baar humesha k liye...

The journey passed by just tears.. prayers n thinkings..

AT THE HOSPITAL..

There was hustle n bustle everywhere.. VirIka n Virat reached there.. the sobbing n painy voices of people were scaring them to death.. Their heart beats were racing like its racing in the marathon.. there was only one thought in their mind.. What if the news would b correct.. will they b able to survive..?? will Jeevika b able to live without her heart.. will Virat b able to survive after losing his soul mate...

They all reached at the reception.. Virat was breathing heavily due to continuous running... He spoke in panickly Voice..

Virat: (to the nurse)... yahan maanvi name ki koi patient admit hui hai??

Nurse: Maanvi??

Virat: Maanvi... Maanvi Chaudhry..

Nurse: wait a minute.. let me check..

Jeevika holded Viren's hand tightly.. Viren looked at her.. He assured her with his eyes that everything will b fine.. But he himself was not sure will it really b fine..??

Virat: (irritatingly).. Plz do it fast..

Nurse: (looked at them).. No.. yahan maanvi name ki koi patient nahi hain..

They all took a sigh of relief.. As the got a new life.. they smilled.. But their smile vanished as they heared the nurse..

Nurse: Wese yahan Morgue room mein ek female hain.. jin ki Identification abhi tak nahi hui hai.. u can check on it..

Virat grinched his teeth n roared in anger...

Virat: What do u mean by Morgue room.. wahan un logon ko rakha jaata hai jin ki death hogayi hoti hai.. n my maanvi is absolutely fine.. so just shut ur mouth otherwise u'll b fired from here really soon.. u get that..

Viren came in-between them coz he very well knew that if virat will become out control than it will b very difficult to stop him..

Viren: (to nurse).. Aap jaaye..

She went from there ..

He turned towards Virat whose eyes were blood shot red..

Virat: Chal Virat hum wahan...

Virat looked at him shocked..

Virat: Bhai aap fir se..

Virat: (cupped his face).. Nahi virat its nothing like that.. when u have full confidence that she is alive than why... ek baar dekhne mein kya jaa raha hai..

Virat shrugged his hand gave a thought to it n went towards that dreadfull room.. Viren also went with him holding jeevika's hand who was just walking n walking.. without any emotions..

MORGUE ROOM..

They all entered there.. all were silent like words struck in their guts.. The room was full silent.. their was a body placed on the stretcher..Covered with a white sheet..

Virat went towards that body.. he was about to watch her face but stopped hearing voice of the ward boy..

W.B: Yeh in ki body k paas se mila hai..

Both VirIka n Virat looked at that stuff.. Virat's heart skipped a beat.. It was a bracellete.. same bracellete which he presented maanvi few days after their confession..




Virat: Ye... yeh.. tt.. tou..vohi brac.. barcellete hai jo mene maan... maanvi ko..

Viren was shocked .. he looked at jeevika who was nodding negatively.. he shrugged off her hand from Viren's grip n ran from there.. Viren called her name n he too ran behind her..

Here Virat felt that he died..Sometime before he was happy ... happy beyond limits.. he thought that now no worries.. no tensions.. this time he will win his love.. But he forgot about their destiny which always played with them... Their destiny again played a game.. n once again like always they lose..

He fell on his knees..Seemed like tears freezed in his eyes... He holded that bracellete in his hand..

Do pal Ruka.. Khawabon ka kaarwan..

Aur fir chal diye.. tum kahan hum kahan..

Do pal kit hi.. yeh dilon ki daastan..

Aur fir chal diye.. tum kahan hum kahan...

Virat remembered her lovely face.. which he always wanted to see before sleeping n after waking up... He remembered his smile..A smile for which he can even die for..





Tum the ya thi koi ujli kiran..

Tum the ya koi.. kali muskaayi thi..

Tum the ya sapno ka tha saawan..

Tum the ya khushiyon ki ghata chaayi thi...

Tum the ya tha koi phool khila..

Tum the ya mila tha.. mjhe naya jahan..



He remembered the moments.. the special moments which he spent with her... which now became.. JUST A MEMORY..







Tum the ya khushbu hawaon mein thi...

Tum the ya rang saari dishaon mein the..

Tum the ya roshni raahon mein thi..

Tum the ya geet goonje fizaon mein the..

Tum the mile ya mili thi manzilen...

Tum the k tha jadoo bhara koi samaa..

SILENCE... SILENCE... SILENCE..

Virat: (closed his eyes.. a tear fell on his cheeck)... MAANVI...



Do... Pal ruka... khawabon ka karwaa...

Aur... Fir chal diye...


TUM KKAHAN..

HUM KAHAN..

Death leaves a heartache no one can heal...

Love leaves a memory no one can steel...



How was it??


B happy..
Love
Sanjana..😛
😊
Edited by cutiepie2244 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
PM's After sometime.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
nice update but I know u have not kill
her she will come back soon in there
life right and once again the song
is one of my fav song update soon
next update



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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
awww wonderful update after long time. i really enjoyed it nd love each n every bit of it. the way u portrayed virats emotion for his love for his partner were beyond words nd the way you portrayed jeevikas emotion nd her fear for her lil sis was super awesome

i just hope the gal in morgue is nt manvi nd she is alive somewhere else finger crossed

song selection was awesome nd it is one of my favourite song n i really lived it

waiting for the next part eagerly. do cont soon nd thanx for the upcoming pm lolzzz

nd anjalii dear get well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Awesome update..

I know Manvi is not dead..
Pleeaseee let Manvi come face to face with Virat and Virika in the hospital...
Feel really sad for Virat and Virika..
Pleasee update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome
too goooddd
fabbb...
Loved it...
Great work bachcha...
Greattt...
Waiting for next but first take care of ur health...
Plz...

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