ArShi FF: Vengeance & Sacrifice-Undefined*pt17*pg121{TH2 LINK pg1}

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

comment for part-9😊

amazingg updatee👏

poor khushi😭

loved d bond between khushi and her brother😳

waiting for d nxt part😳

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

for chappy 11😳

lovely update as always fish😳

loovveedd d devimayya part🤣🤣

she's watchin arshi scenes wit bhagwan jii🤣

and loveeeddd d convo between khushi and d kids😳

dis sheetal again came hereee🤢

once again amazinggg updateee👍🏼

waiting fr d nxt part😊

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

edited my cmmnt on pg 73 n blossoms comment on pg 65 !! 😳

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angal

@Neha.AS

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

hey thats not good yr now arnav again call her cheap because his kids like her ...

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict
Tweety 😲😡
U r ending this soon

Nahinnn
Coming to the Update now
Sanaah

OMG 😲 😆
Pagal ladki

Devi maiyya who was watching Arshi love scenes in her Laptop with her her Husband, bhagwaan ji, heard him.
"Huh, todi der apne pati dev ke saat bhiatke chain se Arshi ke love scenes dekhne nahi dega(huh, he doesn't allow me to watch the scenes with me husband even for sometime). He is always an Interruption" Devi maiyya huffed to bhagwaan ji. Then she turned to Aman and said
"Beta, if you enter the scene in wrong time, then you will have to face the consequences. I'm not the one to help you here." Saying she turnes her face.
"Bichara. What else he will do Devi. He is default manufacture. Nothing can be done. Now don't trouble him more." Bhagwaan ji pleaded for his fellow man.

Tweety 🤣
U r too muchh

Sheetal ki bachhii
I'll kill her
Ansh Meethi n Khushi scene was too cute
How smartly Khushi convinced the to eat food
N m glad they refused chocs frm that Shitall
Ansh invited her to meet Anjali

The Precap 😕
is full of questions Tweety
Which I would want u to answer in coming updates...
Nice Update Tweety
All The Best fr ur xamz too Tweety
U'll do well
Love ❤️
Sugar !!

Arey Sugar.. comment Update ke liye tha ya apne Tweety ke liye

Comment TWEETY se bara pada hai😉😆😆

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Lovely update!! Ansh is like Arnav isn't it?? The way the kids refused Sheetal , I was so happy that time.. Precap was interesting.. Waiting for next ...

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Fantastic update Meenu

, haha again u started d chapter with complaining Aman with his DM Duh

and once again u showed dat DM is super advanced in technology also and she was seeing Arshi love scene's in her laptop with her bhagwaan ji, atleast u could've also added You tube also from were they were watching d scene's 🤣. Poor bhagwaan ji even he's helpless in helping his fellow man, guess our bhagwaan ji is a puppet in his wife's hand.

Like I said before how much ever u see kids antica and their talk, won't be enough

. Really enjoyed alot how Ansh and Meethi was discussing about d lenght of Khushi's hair and how Meethi wants to hve long hair like Khushi. Khushi's smiling pic was my fav and it really apted according to d scene Meenu and U don't hve to be sorry 4 not using many pics. The main pics needed was only Ansh, Meethi and Khushi's, even Ansh pic could also be avoided, but not Meethi's and Khushi's

. Loved khushi's way of making kida eat their food and even I was wondering wat will now khushi do to make Ansh eat his food as he's not an easy one. Never taught dat Khushi will bring Ansh's father in between and for once taught may be Arnav's name will be mentioned and Khushi coming to know dat he's father of Ansh. But brillent Meenu, u know's how to make twist in ur story and trash our guessing's very well dam devil brainy ur Devil

At d begining when u protraited Ansh character dat other than his dadi, bua and Meethi, he never mingles with any ladies, I thought he'll be difficult with Khushi and wont open up. But u've completely proved me wrong Meenu 👍🏼, after all how we forget dat only kids can understand our pure heart love than fake one's like Sheetal Grrr

. No wonder they hate Sheetal despite Sheetal being only sweet and nice to these kids dat these kids hate her to d core.

Well Meenu, first of all very thank uuu 4 giving us a wonderful story VASU and we honestly never felt ur dragging it, instead we loved it how slowly u were focusing on each character without just sliding them. Frankly Meenu ur d writer and u can decide whether u want to finish it in one go or to complete in 15 parts as u knows how much we are enjoying dis story. I don't know wat made u say dat d story is dragging or wat, if any one told then just ignore it as we major readers are throughly enjoying dis story and If U just end it in one go, then ur not doing justice to d story and to us also 😡.

Thanks u so much 4d pm and will definetly wait 4u to be active on IF. Till then all d best luck and wishes 4 ur exams and study well Reading

sleep well otherwise u'll be tend to sleep in ur exams Sleeping In Class

and no cheating my dear while writing ur exam's

(just kiidding). Keep ur mind cool and don't worry about us we'll follow u after ur exams.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Nice bonding
waiting fr next dude
thanks fr pm...!

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Rami

@Rami92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

meenu dont dare to stop the stry😡 😡 😡 😡

write what hav u planned😡 🤢

ur nt dragiung t🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

samji tum😡

n back to update😆

hah sannah is so crazy jus like her soon to be nanad😃 😃 😃

poor aman😕

geting smack frm his sister😃

n now ansh n meethi isso sweeyt 😳 😳 😳 😳

they are jus adorbl😉 😉 😉 😉

n klhushi made them eat😆 😆 😆 😆

khushi finding familirty with ansh😉

uh it haoens who is he after all son f asr😆 😆 😆

n meethi is cho cute😳

Ansh has the habt f ordering frm his father😆 😆 😆😆

anh n methi giving shetal her place😃 😃 😃

am waiting fr precap😆 😆 😆 😆

PS:baby all the bst fr ur internals

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Awesome story dear...
Khushi run away from arnav..
Now arnav taking revenge from khushi..
I am thinking how he married some other girl..
Poor khushi..
So Aditya's girl friend aman's sis..interesting..
Pls do pm when you up date next chapater