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@devilaonmoon

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awsm updt...It was breath taking yaar...Loved virats emotions here...Shock lagi rei shilpa, virat said sorry to the doctor... Hawww...You really portrayed virats emotions and his changing feeling well..Great job...Cont soon and thanks for the pm...Take care... tada... :)... :)

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Swagata

@FantasyFreak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Hi Shilpa

Congratulations for the new thread ..

coming to the update ... its wonderful ..you've brilliantly portrayed Virat's emotional turmoil while meeting Manvi ..his avidity to go near her... yet a bit hesitant due to his past deeds..love the way her body starts reacting with his mere touch ,the way their closeness soothes her heart even when she is unconscious..his love works way better than any medication which is capable of sweeping away all her inner pains just in a flash..everything is very aptly depicted.. Seems like Karan is again up to something evil..eagerly waiting for the new twist to come..

Thanks for the pm 😊

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js1234

@js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Love how virat really cares for her. And how much she needs him. Amazing emotions

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shreeya121

@shreeya121

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

such a beautiful update...

it ws really sweet...

vry wel expressed virat's emotions..

n our manvi is so sweet...

really loved d update...

thanx 4 d pm dear...😃😃

Edited by shreeya121 - 12 years ago

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

The update was like amazingly fantastically awesome!!😊

I am pretty sure the first two words don't even exist, but I just loved the update so much that I made up words for u!!!!😃

Awww...just loved virats desperation to see manvi safe and the way he left everything just to get to his wife!!!!

And manvis innocent gestures during sleep were so adorable... Just loved how even in her sleep she found comfort only with virat!!!🤗

And virats care showed his love towards manvi..❤️

his trick to get her to drink the soup was so funny!!!🤪

UFO..this Karan!!! When will he leave????😡

Hopefully manvi and virat find out his true intentions soon!!!😕

Btw the tilte song of ranjhanna is amazing too!! I thought I was the only one obsessed with that song!! But there is another song called bezubaan from the abcd movie and it is like amazing!!! U should so listen to it!!👍🏼

But loved the update!!❤️

Thanks for the pm...😉

Plz do update soon!!😛

Will be waiting for the next update!!!😊

Edited by beauty14 - 12 years ago

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sha19

@sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Wow great, awesome n excellent chapters 😊
Sorry for the late comments
Tnx for the pm dear
Plz continue soon 😊

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Athira soman

@athniamanvi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

wow shilpa just loved the update to the core darling

its the best scene with best emotions with best background music

with our wonderful virman

the way manvis heartbeat raised with his closeness hayee

the accident then virat feeling guilty the cute scenes in the hospital room was just awesome the background music was like a plum on the cake

hamara caring virat

just loved the way virman expressed their emotions

shilpa ur the best

when i didn't get your pm i was like this

but when i got yr pm i was like this

a tight hug for your efforts shilpa darling

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Awesome update...
I am loving the growing closeness between virman...
I loved viratz possessive side for his biwi...
But no sanju scene in this?
I love his role in this story...