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I have been reading your story since evening and completed all the parts in one go. I just loved the story. Though the story line is simple what makes it beautiful is the turn & twists you have added all along it. I just loved the cutie pie adi, he is truly a innocence personified. Arnav is just like a coconut, hard as shell from outside but soft & sweet from inside.Though he shows his anger, arrogance his love for his people is way too much. Khushi though seems like a child at times she is way beyond mature for her age. Akash is a simple man, with simple dreams & principles who loves his friend and can't see him in pain. Vijay is going to pay for his deeds once arnav gets hold of him. Ammi is really a sweet and humble woman. I hope arnav's love for khushi is far more than his hatred for surya, that he forgives her and embraces her back in his life. I enjoyed reading it and hope to do so in future also.
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Kumkum Bhagya
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