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Really vanhi what was that?? what was that u did to me with this update??
Iam rendered speechless here!! i mean my rational thoughts have long gone!!!
I am overwhelmed by this particular update!!
You made my day in other words!!!
it took me one whole hour to read it again and again to confirm that i have actually read whatever u wrote and i was not hallucinating here!!
I have thought about it sometime in my life that
"life is full of expectations, but always the most unexpected things happens"
You made it true with this update!!!
I am just out of words to explain my thoughts to you!!
Really yaar
I loved the update to the core!!!
Am little upset that i couldnt comment first this time and make it special to me!! but whoever commented first here, is really really lucky out there!! thats all i can say!!
I am getting a pdf version from you thats for sure!!
If u r free just scrap me and i will send u my mail id so that u can send me or upload it in google drive and share it to me once when the ff gets over!!
But i will be fine if it never got over at all but i know thats something stupid!! there is an end for every start!! thats what i think!!! so we have to live with it!!!
About the update,
I really didnt think that he would bring arnav here of all place!! i mean in before update when u finished such a way that he knows where to find i thought he will take arnav to some one who will again sit and chat on something but i didn't even thought something like this even in my wildest of dreams!! but that why u r a writer!!!
When arnav was taken there he was really afraid and shocked to stumble against another new truth!! the way he begged to his jeeju to take him back home was really marvelous!! if arnav was the child here shyam took the role of being a father there!! and really arnav eventhough he has power no ends he is really gullible!! he was thinking about gupta's heart break the whole way during his travel!! also the way he braced himself to a new truth and the way he waddled towards that room door behind his jeeju showed how much pain he supress in that little heart of his!!
And the reactions of shyam was thousand times worth reading!!
Arnav's expression should i even talk about it?? they were simply out of world!!
The one word "Ma" must have did everything in her heart!!! it was so emotional moment for both of them!! he has waited to call her ma and she has waited to hear this beautiful word from her son!!it would be there in her mind for the next thousand years!! Now i really wish to see the reaction once she comes in face with arjun!! i know i have to wait some more time for that!!
Now they knew arnav's prediction were right!! but dont they have to act fast from now on?? before malhotra or shashi knows what happened and what will they do next?? will they expose shashi?? will they hide ekta?? or bring to arjun? then what about rahul?? what will happen to him?
I really hope nothing happen to gupta's and the raizada's including our little aniesh!! not to forget him!!
I know this is war and a war without bloodshed is not at all named as war but then u know how selfish i will be so that i really beg that not one should die here!! For me avni's death itself is really enough!! from now on all dharamchand's plan should fail!!! he should see the pain for real and he should never be forgiven but he should realise his mistakes!! pls make rahul as ainesh soon infront of all!!! ie to the raizada's!!
I want dharamchand to die that doesn't mean i want anyone from our clan to die!! so pls pls pls fulfill my small wish!!
It will also be good if ektha say what all she went through all these years!!
Sorry for commenting late but i needed some time and peace to comment on this topic so i took it!!
Pls cont soon!!
Edited by deepa.e - 12 years ago
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