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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky


thank youuu diii ! ^_^

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

u have to review SA as well abhi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky


kardungi re.. pagli..



pagli khush hui.. hahahaha...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Chapter 4


With time their bond grew stronger, Rey was always their with her in whatever she did, When she slept he caressed her hair when she ate he sat right next to her watching her, when she worked he did everything he could to help her, because he knew he had less time than she thought he did.

You understand me like no one else does' she said keeping her head gently on his chest as they lied on her bed.

Uhmm, Sure I do' he spoke.

You know what Rey?' she said When my parents had their accident I was very little, about seven and I saw them, they were right in front of me, perfectly fine, and not much after then that day the news came that they died'

Sometimes before dying, people meet their loved ones' he reasoned.

And you know what happened when I told Sweden?' she said as he nodded She shouted at me that I was making horrible stories, from that day on, we never talk about mom dad, seems as though they never existed for us'

I Know Kri, that's what happens, people are afraid of us yet they don't believe us the way they should' he said because he didn't knew what else to speak, he was afraid strained that he might say something wrong, which could hurt her further more.

And soon he saw her crying.

Kriya, Kriya, c'mon now you can't cry, look at me, look up at me' he said but she seemed to be deaf to his words she just clutched his arm as tight as she could and cried.

Kri, please don't cry, see I'm here right, I'm right here to understand whatever you feel, Kri please don't cry' he pleaded.

Rey just promise me you'll never ever leave me, you're gonna stay with me right?' she said

His mind froze for a second, he knew there was less time but how would he make her understand this?

Yeah, I'll be there. Always' he said Now would you stop crying please?'

At an instant he saw Kriya into quick sobs, wiping her tears away, though she still held his arm tight.

I need you Rey' she spoke in her teary voice.

I know sweetheart,' he said gently holding her. He was unsure about what he should do.

And soon enough he found her slept, and her grip around his hand became a little lighter than before, he silently slid his hand away and walked away just to see.

And the other moment he saw her up on her bed, she looked devastated, searching for him everywhere, she said in a high tone Rey! Rey! Where did you go?'

And soon enough he saw her rushing around her room to find him, he let out a sigh, she had such a bad habit of him, she was almost obsessed, or she did love him very much.

She moved from corner to corner in order to find him, and the next moment he moved out, Kriya' he said and she sprung into his arms

Where did you go!?' there was a rush in her voice, an insensibility.

no where' he spoke a huskily How did you get up?'

You weren't there with me, you know how much I need you' she said

C'mon now, lets sleep, you have college tomorrow' and the next second he was on bed with her, right next to him was Kriya.

He looked at her thoughtfully, although she was sleeping her face looked so much serene, calm, and the way she slept like a baby, all cuddled up together. Her beauty amazed him, her long dark lashes, big thoughtful eyes, and beautiful long strands, everything so pure, so touching about her.

Why are you looking at me like this?' she asked

You shouldn't be with me' he spoke you have your own life'

What if I want to live it with you?' she said looking up at him.

He knew something, that Kriya couldn't live without him. not even a second.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
awesome one

luv it

thanks for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
res
unres

again your LIKE button is not working.. 😡😡

update:
the bond kriya and rey share is really beautiful.. ❤️
i really loved the way you showed them in this chapter..
they way he cares about her 👏👏

this one was well written 👏

thanks for the PM
update soon.. but please itne bulk main nahi 🤔 😳

PS. aaj toh tune sacchi heart attack de diya itne saare upate de kar.. 😆😆
Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
it was really heart touching
haye itna handsome bhoot ho toh aisa
loved him yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Awesome
love it
wat will happenn in their future.
Pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
mai toh bhool bhi gayi thi ki ismei tha kya... :P

so i had to go thru all the last 3 parts...

okay now coming to it... Rashi this was a fabulous update...

I just loved it...

Rey n Kria seriusly fit together in every character...

So..Rey is a spirit haan...

but maine toh suna tha once when spirits get tbat human who can hear them..they never leave them throughout...

but yahan toh kuch aur he ho raha hai...

why is Rey having less time??? woh chala jayega??? :O

Nahiii... aisa mat karo...

i guess i know where it will end.. kinda...


this story reminds me of Vaish & Snigs Touch of Love... ;)


update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read it again from the very begining..
becoz mein bhul gayi thi isme actually hai kya..

well loved ur update..

very much heart touching...

pls update it soon

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